Walk the Plank *Aye me-maties!*

[Colourful™]

My first proper alt. I normally do recolourings so I thought I would have a try at this. It is my first room alt. from scratch, so constructive critisism please. Rate /10
http://img479.imageshack.us/img479/5374/walktheplank36al.th.png (http://img479.imageshack.us/my.php?image=walktheplank36al.png)


Oh, and heres some work in progress:
http://img461.imageshack.us/img461/4054/walktheplank29li.th.png (http://img461.imageshack.us/my.php?image=walktheplank29li.png)
http://img461.imageshack.us/img461/5712/walktheplank15yv.th.png (http://img461.imageshack.us/my.php?image=walktheplank15yv.png)

[Scrubs]

the actually plank is good but the rest could be more habboish
6/10

[hyper-hodgie]

the red line isnt straight .. and the door looks dodgy

6/10

[Colourful™]

I know, as I said it's only my 1st proper room alt.

[le harry]

Looks cool, its very easy to see where you've used paint, but other then that 8/10.

[Colourful™]

Thanks for replies, keep them up.

[t0mst3r]

I know, as I said it's only my 1st proper room alt.
It's your only 1st proper alt you havent ripped :rolleyes:

Good tho, 5-6/10

[Colourful™]

Lmao Tom. Thanks.

[jedi.warrior]

Well my glasses must be dirty, because I can't see one thing wrong with the alt *wonders if I should magnify also...*. definately 9/10. I don't like the doorway. lol :p

Keep em coming preposterous

[ItsDave]

the actually plank is good but the rest could be more habboish
6/10
:o Took the words outta my mouth.

[Colourful™]

Lol, thanks for tips.

[!:Joe:!]

Looks cool, its very easy to see where you've used paint, but other then that 8/10.

All pixel artists use paint for the whole of their alts. ¬.¬