Old day detective

[Alterate]

Okay I have to stress this might be my first alt posted on this forum but I have been doing alt's for a little while..

This alt is a typical vision of a older day detective;

http://img481.imageshack.us/img481/7692/detective0dy.png

C+C Welcome,

But if your going to critasize please dont post like ow thats bad without posting a reason why it is.

[moonsoon]

His hair and cape look weird because there not got any type of shading
over then that its good :eusa_danc :eusa_danc 7/10

[Alex-Stacy]

I agree with above. Add shading to cape and hair. 7/10.

[ItsDave]

That has to be ripped, look at it, you got a lovely jacket and trousers, then you got just the hair and cape? 7/10

[Vitality]

As i know alot about ripping (i was one)
i have to say that looks ripped anyway if it isnt seen as o i dont have no proof
7/10 the cape and hair spoil sorry

[GreenCrayons.]

Look, He ent ripped it why do you peeps always flame, vitality you still rip!
so leave him alone
10/10 rep

when i can

[iAdam]

Cool, 10/10.