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CalmWaters
26-10-2005, 10:42 AM
Alright. I got a lot of very BAD critism for my last few alts because they weren't really alts at all just rearrangements so with out further a do...
Ladies, Gentlemen, Boys and Girls and especially for JayTM and Foxmoth (Because they crisitsised me most :p) I present to you The Habbo Swimming Baths!!!
Please rate out of ten. Thanks!!
p.s The lifeguards ae supposed to be "bots"
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http://www.freewebs.com/appleyardscomputer/Swimming Baths Website Version.PNG
Full:
http://www.freewebs.com/appleyardscomputer/Swimming Baths Full Website Version.PNG
CONSTRUCTIVE critism greatly wanted!!!

Jay™
26-10-2005, 10:47 AM
Ok A Bit Boring. Maybe a Big Slide And a Diving Board or Floats???
9/10

CalmWaters
26-10-2005, 10:49 AM
The swimming batns I modeled it on doesn't have a slide or diving board or owt like that and when i was making a sketch of the baths there was no floats in the water.

Jay™
26-10-2005, 10:54 AM
The swimming batns I modeled it on doesn't have a slide or diving board or owt like that and when i was making a sketch of the baths there was no floats in the water.

but You Could Add them to Make It More Interesting :D

CalmWaters
26-10-2005, 10:58 AM
I would have made it more interesting but when I am making alts that are supposed to look like something in real life I try and be as accurate as possible but thanks for the ideas Jay!!! Maybe there will be a revised version of it coming soon... not giving any secrets away or anything. . .
I'm going offline for a few hours now so I'll have a look at everybodys replies as soon as I come bak online!!!

Embean
26-10-2005, 11:44 AM
I love it :D well done :) 10.5/10 :)

Meanies
26-10-2005, 11:46 AM
Like the other guy said. Needs a Water FLume and Floats. makes it look more fun, looks kinda borin 8/10

CalmWaters
26-10-2005, 01:59 PM
Thanks for the replies so far :p

Alex-Stacy
26-10-2005, 02:04 PM
Wow, It's very good. A few accessories added here and there as asked and it will be perfect! 8/10.

CalmWaters
26-10-2005, 02:05 PM
Thanks Alex-Stacey, I'm currently looking for a job as pixel artist if anyone needs one. . .

ItsDave
26-10-2005, 07:07 PM
THAT ROCKZ! YOU GOT ME IN THERE! THE GUY WITH THE WHITE TRUNKS AND HAIR IS ME! I always have white trunks! +rep for that and the alt I think it rocks. Well done 10/10

CalmWaters
26-10-2005, 07:09 PM
LOL :Lazy Dude the guy in the white trunks is me.
I had to dress up as everyone in that picture even the girls and lifeguards!!!
The lifeguards still needed a bitof re-colouring though...

Revis
26-10-2005, 07:33 PM
The bricks could use some texture, and maybe a shadow around the edge to make it look like theres a gap with the cement between the bricks, brb, I'll make you an example.
Pah, example keeps crapping up, Im sure theres a tutorial somewhere.

Doonni
27-10-2005, 10:14 AM
Its Good, a bit more graphics on the wall and some water slides. More people in the pool . 9/10 + a place in the elites

CalmWaters
27-10-2005, 01:03 PM
Ty doonie :p
I think it may need to be more interesting...

Jordan3
27-10-2005, 01:11 PM
It's a bit boring in places, but good so far. 7.5/10

aki-1
27-10-2005, 09:16 PM
very good but u shud hav people swimming in it and slide and sum1 drowning at the life guard saving him and divin bored u know wat i mean all swimming baths stuff:D

whiteman12
10-11-2005, 06:58 AM
Yeah There Isn't Much 'Going On' In The Pool. I Like It But Needs More Work

Addie
10-11-2005, 07:38 AM
Ok A Bit Boring. Maybe a Big Slide And a Diving Board or Floats???
9/10

Yea. Id say 10/10 and rep though.

pechie100
10-11-2005, 07:59 AM
Thats cool
bit of a simple copy n paste i think

Insanity
10-11-2005, 01:55 PM
Very Good 8/10
But if it ws real it would have to slope gradualy
the ramp to make it deeper is dangerous:o
If you can't swim ull try to walk up it and it will be slippy with been underwater so you will keep slipping ;)
Also a few errors, work at it

Rachz
10-11-2005, 03:49 PM
Thats wicked ;D Nice One :D 10/10... maybe make a water park :D

+ rep

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