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timROGERS
29-10-2005, 04:47 PM
I'm just finished my second ever layout (I learnt how to code today) and it's for my website in progress HabPlus, and I'd like some constructive criticism on it.

It's a mixture of HTML, Iframes, tables and CSS, and I think it's personally effective, as it looks and works well.

http://www.habplus.co.uk/beta

xxMATTGxx
29-10-2005, 04:55 PM
Cool i like it , dont know why i had to reply to it you showed it me on msn :P

splintercell!
29-10-2005, 04:58 PM
not too bad not especially amazing but well done since its only your second.

Homesrfan
29-10-2005, 05:26 PM
I don't really like the "Navigation" text.
It looks kinda messed up if you look closely.

But overall, good layout!

nelly
29-10-2005, 05:28 PM
Not bad :)

мϊкэ
29-10-2005, 06:05 PM
I don't really like the "Navigation" text.
It looks kinda messed up if you look closely.

But overall, good layout!

yer.. the font doesnt look very good.. and the background doesnt go together in a pattern..

nets
29-10-2005, 06:28 PM
Make where there is a petal patch background on the images for the navigation and stuff transparent, so it fits in with the other pattern.

Digital
29-10-2005, 06:31 PM
Good, change the background :)

Dan Williamson
29-10-2005, 09:15 PM
It looks ok for a Habbo layout :)

Nice for only your second, keep up the good work!

- Dan

Sygon
30-10-2005, 09:57 AM
I love it :D

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