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RainFall.
29-10-2005, 06:49 PM
Prepare for the second installement of the book!.. Here is a list of when the next chapters will be available..

Chapter Three - Tuesday November 1 2005
Chapter Four - Friday November 4 2005
Chapter Five - Monday November 7 2005

Practicly every three days.. Altogether there are 12 chapters..


Cracked Love
Chapter Two - Rushed Feelings


Why didnt I stay? Why? I could of made a go of me and Emily. God I have gotta be more confident I thought rushing back to my house to relax. While I was running by, my friends were by the oak tree calling me over. I didnt really care about them. I just wanted to get home and just let all my stress out.

The day passed with me just relaxing and chilling on a beautiful Sunday afternoon. Before I knew it, Monday morning arose and yet again. Time for for school. First of all I had Science and I sat near Emily so maybe I could get a glimpse of her. Maybe she would say anything.

" Right take your seats class! " Mrs Cortch Said. While I was doing that, Emily was staring at me. I thought she was just messing as a joke from one of her friends.
" Heya Tom, wanna hang with us tonight then? " She asked
" Uhh I donno " I replied confused
" Where did you go yesterday? You just ran off " She asked curiously
" Urm.. Had to go home " I replied unsure. Thank god that worked. She asked me to go with her tonight to hang out. Should I go? what about her friends? What will they do to me?

What could they possibley do to me with Emily there? Was this all a joke?

Magnet
29-10-2005, 07:52 PM
It's pretty boring to be honest, you've made it too short and quick, everything happens at once. Pfft try harder next time :)

Addie
29-10-2005, 08:57 PM
Si, Mabye you should make it longer :O

But enywayz 7/10

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