Bodice
04-11-2005, 05:18 PM
Here is another poem that i have wrote. Hope you like it. Please would you rate, thanks.
I held the knife so close to my heart.
Like a foolish child I sat and I cried.
I didn't realise what I had done, what I had tried.
Tears mixed with blood, falling slowly to the ground.
When i was covered in blood i pulled myself up and in tears scribed.
'To those who don't care, to those who can't see.
Never Give up always thrive to be free.'
I didn't know how many people would later cry.
Tried to be free, yet I see this isn't the way.
Friend at the door she ran as fast as she could.
Too weak to say I'm sorry otherwise I would.
In tears i looked at the blue sad day.
When you come and see this pool of blood and me.
This isn't the way my life was meant to be.
I held the knife so close to my heart.
Like a foolish child I sat and I cried.
I didn't realise what I had done, what I had tried.
Tears mixed with blood, falling slowly to the ground.
When i was covered in blood i pulled myself up and in tears scribed.
'To those who don't care, to those who can't see.
Never Give up always thrive to be free.'
I didn't know how many people would later cry.
Tried to be free, yet I see this isn't the way.
Friend at the door she ran as fast as she could.
Too weak to say I'm sorry otherwise I would.
In tears i looked at the blue sad day.
When you come and see this pool of blood and me.
This isn't the way my life was meant to be.