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StripedTiger
12-11-2005, 11:39 AM
I submitted this poem for the newsie. But i dont think il lget my hopes up too much about it. But jsut tell me what you think. Took me ages to write it

Alone in the shadows
Where no wind blows
The missing pixels lie
You cannot see them
But you can hear their sigh

They cannot cry
And they cannot sleep
But the memories stay strong
So they can survive
Hoping someone out there
Someone close
Will relies they are alive

The pixels were heroes
But now they are legends
Do I lack the sense to see?
That those missing pixels
Are always watching me

Right now screams of pain
Will be heeded
As our souls will be pleaded
Those missing pixels
Have their own little place
But slowly they are losing faith

They know aswell as ourselves
That we will remember them
And we will never forget
Right up to our last day

Slowly as our pain starts
They still lurk in our hearts
Screaming and suffering
But refusing to die
And as the memories
Flash back at us
Those missing pixels
Like us,
Crumble and cry.

monkey0660
12-11-2005, 12:06 PM
nice :) i see a newsie with your name on comign this way

StripedTiger
12-11-2005, 04:48 PM
:P Lol thank you :)

mynameishelen!
12-11-2005, 10:17 PM
Where do u send poems for the newsie?

StripedTiger
12-11-2005, 10:50 PM
The habbo help tool :)

Dupion
13-11-2005, 12:51 PM
Very nice poem, good luck with it getting in the newsie :D

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