Life of Susie.

[Embean]

Yup, normal day. Mum being late for school while the car breaks down. Me getting the same detention everyday.
Sounds bad doesn't it?
'Help... me... with... this.. work...' Whispered Becky while we were sat in english, Becky isnt the smartest of people, but she sure knows how to back you up when your in trouble! 'This class is bulls*** I tell you!'
'I know Becky, now shut-up before we both get in trouble!'
The bell rang, and you could see us all hurtling towards to door..
'NOT SO FAST!' Mrs.Cooper screamed, 'I'd like to see you're test results please.' I was to happy for words when we got out of that death chamber.
As I put my stuff in my locker, all my stuff came crashing out.
'Cr*p!' And what a surprise, just as that HAPPENED to.. happen.. Andy came strolling down the corridor, 'The looks, the personality, the popularity.. Claire, I think i'm in love.' I sighed. 'Yump hmhuh' Claire mumbled as she was chewing on a piece of gum from her bag. She spat it out back into her locker, 'Susie, dream on! Why would Andy Johnson want to go out with people like us, persides, we're a year below him.' 'I know, i know, it's just tha-' Before I could finish my sentence Dan came crashing into me on his skateboard. 'BL**** HELL DAN!' He couldn't hear, he was listening to Babyshambles on his MP3 player, Dan literally wants to be Pete Doherty. 'Buuuuzzz'.. My mobile went, it was a text... 'Who's it from?' Claire asked. 'Ummm... Tom..' 'TOM?' 'Yeah.. Tom' 'DELETE THAT BLOOMING TEXT!' Claire choked. 'Fine, you seriously need to forgive him you know.' 'No WAY.. NO WAY NO WAY NO WAY, the day I forgive Tom.. is.. um.. Never :)'
It was time for lunch, I opened my bag and got out my stuff, but, as I opened my lunchbox, there was a letter in black fountain pen, Susie, I dream about you at night, your always in my sight, i hope we can be together someday, love... there was a line.. who was it from?
'I've gotta find out..' I shouted! 'I'll umm..' Sam sighed, 'fine i'll help.'

To be continued :)

[Addie]

:O 10/10 Morenessly

[Embean]

:) Whoopness

[Embean]

Susie stummered.. 'Could It be.. No... you don't think? 'I don't think what?' Sam said confused. Susie got her full sentence out, 'You don't think Andy might have wrote it.. 'Why the hell do you think that Suze!'.
The bell rang. Time for french. As all the students walked in, there wasnt teacher around. So, like every other secondary school, they'd have to play around. Dan and Rhys started listening to music again and swapping MP3S.
'RIGHT THEN, WHO'D LIKE A DETENTION TODAY!!!1??' You guessed it.. this wasnt our normal teacher, she had a... crooked nose. 'Miss' Aiden stuck his hand in the air while casually putting his feet up on the desk. 'Miss, why do you have such a crooked nose' :)
The teacher didn't seem to answer, and wrote down some work on the board that we had to copy out.
After school I walked home with Dan, Rhys, Sam and Becky. So who's coming to my house tomorrow, 'Sorry Suze, gotta go to my aunties aniversary, catch you tomorrow?' Becky asked. 'Sure, love you hun x' 'Cya Becky x' As the rest of us turned round the corner, Dana was there...


Dun dun dunnn...

TO BE CONTINUED !!!!!!!111!

I know this one wasnt very good cause i was a bit busy at the time.
But oh well :)

[Addie]

Oooo... 10/10

[Extra77]

Oooooooooooooooooooooo 20/20

[Foob]

All the people are confusing me. Whose who? Good though 8/10