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Jasmin
14-11-2005, 06:35 PM
Please note that these chapters are not short ^_^

Chapter One

There is one specific week I shall always remember. One week where my life changed, one week that made me think, about how lucky I am to be here, telling you my story.
Is was a Friday night, around five, it was already dark, as the autumn had come in, and the nights started getting colder. The year was 1939. Maggie had just celebrated her fourth birthday. I was freezing cold that night, my hair dirty and sticking up on end. Maggie crawled into my bed and kissed me goodnight
“Good night sister!” she said, with a smile on her face. And she waddled out of my bedroom, she was so funny and cute when she waddled.
Mother came in, she was quiet and pale, like a ghost or something, she sat on my bed, and I knew what it was,
“Grace, there’s a war coming, you know that don’t you.”
She paused, and looked down at my sheet,
“Grace, you have to understand, your father is going to be fighting in this war, and you’re old enough to understand that he might not come back”
I saw tears rolling down her cheeks, I looked up at her and nodded, she tried to hide her tears by looking away. I asked her if she had told Maggie. She shook her head,
“She’s too young to understand darling,”
She cupped my head in her hands, her hands where warm and soft, and she kissed me on the forehead. Then she left, as quiet as she had came.
I sat up on my bed, I could not sleep, I couldn’t picture a world without my father, I mean, he was so great, he even gave me my own bedroom, and I was the only girl out of my friends to not have to share a bed.
How I yearned to be young and little like Maggie, I don’t know how, but I managed to sleep. I woke up around six, it was still dark, I could here Maggie’s tiny feet pitter pattering around on the floorboards, and then it was quiet again, but then I could here my mother’s feet, and the stairs creaking as she walked down. I could here her sobbing. I couldn’t just sit there in bed, so I tiptoed downstairs and sat with mum.
“Grace, she said quietly “Me and maggs, we are going to Cornwall as evacuees, you have to come,”
I looked at the window,
“No,” I said
“I was born here, and I will die here, if that’s the case, I will not go, you cant make me, I will stay here, I have too many memories, here and im not going to leave.” I said sternly.
I could see mother was shocked, but she nodded her head slowly,
“I understand Grace, I Know you’ve been through a lot, but you have to come with me, this place is far too dangerous for a 12 year old little girl to stay on her own”
“IM NOT GOING, IM NOT! IM NOT GOING TO BE SEPERATED AGAIN”
I shouted at mother, I didn’t mean to, but I was very serious, and I was NOT going to leave. Next it was mother, who shouted,
“GRACE YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW DANGEROUS A WAR IS, YOU HAVNT BEEN THROUGH ONE!”
“NEITHER HAVE YOU!” I yelled,
Mother’s face was red with anger. or maybe it was embarrassment by being shouted at by your own child, I couldn’t tell.
I stormed up the stairs and left mother standing there.

Addie
14-11-2005, 06:52 PM
:rolleyes: Thats really good. 10/10 Can't wait for next chapter :):eusa_danc

Jasmin
14-11-2005, 07:10 PM
Chapter two

I said nothing to mother for that day, and she said nothing back, I was determined not to leave, and when I was determined, I would always find a way. I sat on the sofa, listening to the radio, on every radio station there would be something about the war, I through it on the floor, I had had enough, enough of this war, and it hadn’t barley started, I sat on the sofa and cried, The house was empty and lifeless without father, well apart from Maggie’s endless talking to herself, that was it. Mother came in, she looked at me and sighed,
“Grace, we are leaving in early February, so that gives you some time to say goodbye to your home and friends”
I could not believe what I was hearing, I wasn’t going, and I wasn’t going to go with her, I couldn’t, I’d do anything to stay here, no I wasn’t going to leave.
Christmas came and passed, I got a new doll, some socks and a nice woollen cardigan. Maggs’got a new doll and a pink dress with some socks of course, we had a traditional Christmas roast dinner, with a turkey, but it was so dull without father’s jokes. January came and it was getting closer to the leaving date, as I said I was not going. All my friends where being evacuated, so I had no one apart from my doll, to talk to. Mother became quieter and quieter as the time passed, she barley spoke to me, and the one time in January that she did, was something about making socks for the army men, I refused to do anything with her. One day I decided to talk to mum, but before I said anything, she hugged me and kissed me,
“Oh Grace, I love you so much”
I Looked confused, one minute she hated me, and now she loved me like there was no tomorrow.
“Grace please help me make socks, it’s so lonely, and I really need to talk to you”
So I sat and helped mum knit socks, she looked at me,
“Grace, if your that desperate not to leave, then you can go and stay with Ms Parker, next door, she has a shelter, and she’s nice”
I was shocked, I hugged mother tightly,
“Do you and maggs have to go?”
She nodded. She told me about how Maggs was far too young to stay.
A few weeks passed, mother came into my room, her face white,
“The Germans, are coming, they are coming Grace, they will search every house, you have to come with us,”
Oh no, I thought, im not backing out now, I told her all my thoughts, and she turned whiter than paper, she stood up and walked out without saying a word. The next day, Mother went out, to the butchers to get her ration of meat for the week, me and Maggie stayed at home. Then there was a siren going off, I could here it, Ms Parker came screaming to us, she grabbed Maggie and took my hand, and we hid in her Anderson shelter, to us she was like a Godmother, we kept hearing explosions and we stayed in the dark damp shelter for that night, mother didn’t come home, and a note came to me, saying she was missing, I cried all that night, she was obviously died in the explosions. Ms Parker saw the note, and shook her head, “What is this war doing,” she mumbled, and then walked off. I crouched down and looked at Maggie,
“Maggs, Mummies not coming home,” I told her, she gazed up at me, I never knew it was so hard, trying to explain someone dieing to a four year old. Maggie stared up at me, with her big blue eyes, and started crying, I didn’t know whether she was copying me because I was crying, or she understood, we stayed together that night.

Addie
14-11-2005, 07:14 PM
:'(. Poor kids. 10/10, I've just finished my World War II project:rolleyes:

Jasmin
14-11-2005, 08:15 PM
fun xD lol

Extra77
15-11-2005, 07:50 AM
Cba to read lol

Jasmin
15-11-2005, 05:03 PM
But if you cba, why did you post :l

milky1-2-1
15-11-2005, 07:44 PM
Lol, its v.good, how long it take you to write?

Jasmin
15-11-2005, 08:35 PM
Quite a long time xD

milky1-2-1
16-11-2005, 05:00 PM
:o I thought it would
+ rep for story / mite use it in english now
lmao

Jasmin
16-11-2005, 06:56 PM
:l please dont steal it =[

milky1-2-1
16-11-2005, 09:07 PM
I wont really
lol
teacher would know
cos am shocking at english

Jasmin
17-11-2005, 03:58 PM
heehee xD

xhannx
19-11-2005, 10:49 PM
Is there no more ='(

Jasmin
22-11-2005, 05:30 PM
xD Yus, But im doing the whole thing before I post it here
=']

milky1-2-1
22-11-2005, 06:52 PM
OK get on with it :P

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