View Full Version : Going..Going..Gothic.
Embean
16-11-2005, 02:01 PM
[Courtney's new name is Daisy, Miranda's new name is Alex]Next Chapter: 1 Month Later.
One month later and Daisy walked in, she was wearing her black boots with studs all the way down, and a black leather jacket, she has heavy eyeliner all around her eyes and she has lip liner on. Her hair covered her eyes now.
Alex had gone totally gothic too, together they looked so cool. Jake has always worn eyeliner and loads of black, so he was really happy when he saw them both after the break they had for spring.
Charlie caught up with them in the field, they has a chat as Daisy fiddled with her lip-ring.
'Its hard to think what a loser I was, with my pathetic blonde hair and what not' Daisy moaned.
'Totally, you look really hot now Daisy and Alex!' Charlie added.
'Bringggg.' It was time for french.
To be continued.
Next Chapter: Causing trouble.
Addie
16-11-2005, 02:04 PM
:'( -Murders Charlie- Mwahahaha. 10/10
Embean
16-11-2005, 02:08 PM
:'( -Murders Charlie- Mwahahaha. 10/10
:o EVIL
Addie
16-11-2005, 02:11 PM
:o EVIL
Well im evil. Mwahhaha Me and Stewie sha'll take over the world!
Embean
16-11-2005, 02:20 PM
Chapter 2: Causing Trouble.
The next day, they were all in the field again.
'What do you do for fun?' Daisy asked.
'Ummm, I tease the year 7's..' Charlie replied. 'Then lets do that!' Daisy said. Jake and Daisy held hands as the other two followed. In the middle of the field was some little year 7's making fun of a younger year 7. Charlie grabbed one of thems jackets and dragged him to where we were sitting, 'If you think your so cool, beat me up' She screamed to him. The other 3 watched and laughed at the little kid who started crying. Charlie flinged him back, let go of him and let him fall over then the gang walked away. Charlie Hawkins, Alex White, Daisy Black and Jake Johnson please report to the principal's office immediatly. They all walked towards the door, sat on the chairs outside the office and waited till they could go in. The little year 7 boy who Charlie pushed around was there with mud all over his face crying, sat on a big sofa in the office. They all sat down infront of the desk. 'I believe you have something to say Charlie?' Mr.Brooks said to her. 'Not really..' She smirked. 'He was picking on a younger year 7...' Daisy blurted out. 'So then we just brought him to us, and told him if he thinks hes so strong then he can beat us up, he fell down on purpose to get us in trouble.' Daisy lied.
'Okay, seems like we have a misunderstanding, but I cannot be positive your telling the truth Miss Black. So i'll have to give all 4 of you detention for the next week. 'Fine!' Jake shouted and we all stormed out the room together.
Addie
16-11-2005, 02:22 PM
:O Lol. :eusa_danc :rolleyes:
Embean
17-11-2005, 11:28 AM
lol hehe ;]
Embean
17-11-2005, 11:44 AM
When Daisy and Alex we’re walking through town they found leaflets outside the shop.
Daisy peered through the window, and looked inside.
Inside there was rocking horse’s, lots of wooden and old furniture, pot dolls.
Daisy looked closer into the back of the shop.
There, stood inside a glass box, was a bass guitar.
Daisy played the bass extremely well, as soon and she set eyes on it, she couldn’t take her eyes away.
‘What’s in there, Daisy?’ Alex asked suddenly, ‘Bass guitar...’ She replied while still staring at it. ‘Daisy, you haven’t played the bass in ages, girl, what makes you think you will be able to now?’ She asked again. ‘Well, I can always learn again cant I?
‘Mum, I want that bass!’ Daisy screamed to her, ‘And where do you suppose you’d get the money from?’ Her mum yelled back. ‘FROM YOU, YOUR LOADED, REMEMBER, IF WE WERENT WHERE DID WE GET THIS HOUSE FROM?’ She screamed and slammed both her doors to her bedroom.
She lay back on her bed, thinking. ‘If only I could get the money from somewhere for that bass…’ she wondered to herself. She got up, walked over to her phone and called Jake. After a few minutes Jake rang the door bell, and he walked up the stairs to Daisy’s room. ‘What’s up, you seemed really angry on the phone…’ He asked Daisy. ‘Well, its like this, I was walking around up town earlier with Alex, we both passed this shop and it had loads of brouchers and it was about a camp, and you all got put in a band, its called Camp rock ‘n’ roll or something, its only like 2 hours away from here, and you need to take your own instrument with you, I used to be able to play bass guitar back in Junior High, and in the shop has only one bass, but it costs loads, I asked my mum for some money, because as you know shes loaded with it, but she said no. I need a I plan to steal some money from her or another way to get the money so I can get the guitar…
To be continued.
Today – ‘Plan in action’
Addie
17-11-2005, 03:32 PM
:omg! Lol/ 10/10
Emicat
18-11-2005, 08:08 PM
I think this is a bit steriotypical. "Goths" as you put them don't go and pick on year 7's. And don't steal money. I am, as you put it, a "goth" and find it a bit offensive that you think all goths are trouble makers...
Nice title though. I might nick it for a song... :p
Embean
18-11-2005, 09:06 PM
I think this is a bit steriotypical. "Goths" as you put them don't go and pick on year 7's. And don't steal money. I am, as you put it, a "goth" and find it a bit offensive that you think all goths are trouble makers...
Nice title though. I might nick it for a song... :p
I'm not saying all goths are like that, its just that, these pick on people.
Rofl, thanks anyway xD
Embean
22-11-2005, 07:36 PM
Chapter: Plan In Action.
'Okay, but, there's cameras all over my house Jake! How am I going to get past them, without them seeing me getting my mums money from her purse!?'
'Hmmm, well, how about, I distract the 'camera guy' who keeps watch, and you grab the money.' He replied to her while looking down out the window. 'Omg, thats a great idea, thanks Jake!' She said as she kissed him on the cheek. Jake scratched his neck and looked down at the bed, 'Um, yeah I - I gotta go, see ya.' 'Oh, well, bye' She said as he walked out of the room.
The next day they both began their plan. Jake walked into the cameras offices upstairs in the house. 'Um, hey there' he said as he walked up closer to the security guy. 'So, i'm Daisy's mate, I wondered if you would teach me some stuff about how to control the..um, cameras! Yeah - uh, thats it!' He trembled. 'The security guy swallowed the last piece of his sandwich, 'Now why would you wanna learn about that kid?' He said still chewing on a little piece of ham in his mouth. 'I um, i'm took up media, and, we're doing about... controling cameras..' He replied, as he scratched the back of his neck. 'Well.. 'Daisy's friend..' He said. 'I'll have to turn of the cameras to show you..' Has this happened, he turned of all the mini T.V'S that linked to every camera in the house. Daisy crept into her mums room and grabbed for her purse, she dashed out and went into her own bedroom. 'Uh, thanks for that, tour of the cameras!' Jake thanked the security guy, as Jake dashed out to Daisy's bedroom. 'Well, have you got it?' Jake asked her impatiently. 'Well duh!' She replied with a little smirk on her face. Jake loved the way she grinned, she had little dimples at the side of her face when she did, and she looked so sweet and cute. Jake smiled at her, then he came back to reality, 'So, urh, when you gonna get the bass?' He asked quickly. 'When the shop opens, not often you see shops open at 11pm!' She replied as she looked over to her clock at the side of her bed. 'Umm, do you wanna come to my house?' He asked her nervously. 'When?' She replied with her normal little smirk on her face. 'Tonight, my mum and dad have gone out to the bar tonight and they won't be back till late, my sisters at home and my cousin.' He told her. 'Okay sure.' She said bouncing on her bed.
-Next chapter.
-Today.
Emicat
22-11-2005, 07:42 PM
Cameras? You have a very crazy imagination...
How rich are they?
And they even hired someone to run them?
Unbelievable!
Whoops, a pig just flew into my window....
Lmao xD
Nice story anyway.
Embean
22-11-2005, 08:06 PM
Cameras? You have a very crazy imagination...
How rich are they?
And they even hired someone to run them?
Unbelievable!
Whoops, a pig just flew into my window....
Lmao xD
Nice story anyway.
Very rich.
ROFL.
I like my imagination.. it's.. creative x]
Embean
23-11-2005, 08:03 PM
Next chapter:
The next day, Daisy walked down to Jake's house, it wasn't that far away, so she decided to walk instead. When she arrived, she knocked on the door, she could hear music coming from Jake's room, so she knocked harder and louder. 'SH**!' She screeched just as his sister opened the door. Daisy hates Jake's sister, she has long light brown hair, and likes the same music as Daisy, only that she one hell of a brat, she tries to get you into trouble for anything, and basically she hates her. She's only 14, but she still can get her into trouble. She stromed past his sister without saying a word to her, and bumped up the stairs. She knocked on the door to Jake's room, and he opened the door with his guitar still in his hand. 'Hey' he said to her giving her a grin. 'Hiya' she replied to him, with her little smirk. She went in and sat on his bed, 'What you playing on your guitar?' She asked him looking down at a stack full of songs piled ontop of each other. 'Nothing really i'm just playing a few tunes.' He said to her. He picked up one of the papers from the pile, and handed it to her. She read the lyrics to it, and he started playing the tune to it on his guitar. When it was time for dinner, they all went down to the dining room. On their way down the stairs, they both passed his sister again, Melanie. She gave Daisy a glare and she walked into her room, slamming her door behind her. 'What's her problem?' She asked Jake, 'Dunno, just born that way.' He giggled, they both laughed.
-Next chaper
- Today or tomorrow.
Addie
24-11-2005, 03:44 PM
:O Hmm.. Good again. 10/10
SHEEPY
24-11-2005, 03:49 PM
Your stories are appalling, please stop.
Addie
24-11-2005, 06:36 PM
Your stories are appalling, please stop.
How are they? I love her stories.
Embean
25-11-2005, 09:52 PM
Your stories are appalling, please stop.
So, maybe to you, but i'm not going to let a noob like you ruin the fun for other people, maybe you don't and some other people don't like my stories, but I don't right them for ignorant people like you. Thanks Spork for posting btw x :)
Addie
26-11-2005, 12:18 AM
So, maybe to you, but i'm not going to let a noob like you ruin the fun for other people, maybe you don't and some other people don't like my stories, but I don't right them for ignorant people like you. Thanks Spork for posting btw x :)
Yvvw :) Btw Emm? Ive done more chapters of My story Lily :).
Embean
27-11-2005, 02:27 PM
Next chapter:
They both walked into the dining room, that overlooked fields, and even more fields. Daisy pulled out her chair and sat down. The food was already on the table. After tea, they both went back upstairs, Daisy set out her sleeping bag. 'I guess this house is different from yours.' Jake said to her as he watched her pulling out her pillow from a black bag. 'Yeah, I guess. But it's better than my own, i've always just wanted to live and have a normal life, but with my house, you can't.' She reliped, out of breath from setting out her stuff. 'What you mean?' He asked her, confused. 'Well, my house is... not normal.' She replied, as she turned around to look at him. He laughed, 'Trust me, you wouldnt want to live in this house!'
Finally, after she'd set out her things, they walked out into the street. They walked to the park, and jumped up onto the roof of a small building at the side of the pathway, covered by trees. Daisy let her feet dangle of the building, and stared at the water trickling down from a mini water-fall by the wall. 'You know, how you said, you'd like a 'normal' house.' Jake began, 'Well, you can stay with us as long as you like you know.' he finished, looking down at his feet shyly. Daisy smiled still looking at the pool of water, 'Thanks.' she replied. he put his arm around her waist and she leaned on his shoulder. They just sat there, dangling their feet. Until finally, Alex and Charlie ran up to them and jumped up onto the roof.
'Did you know - theres - a - fight going on - up town?' Charlie said slowly, out of breath from running. Jake took his arm from around Daisy's waist and looked at Charlie sternly. 'Whos in the fight?' He asked, still looking at her stiffly. 'I think James is in it actually.' She said to him. Jake jumped off the roof and looked at Daisy and the rest. 'Are you coming, when James is in a fight, you expect us to not help him?' He said to them all.
Daisy jumped off, taking Jake's hand, and the other two caught up with them as they left the park gates.
As soon as they got to the top of the street, someone was screaming for Daisy and Jake's name. 'Guys, HELP JAMES!' Said James' sister, Roxy.
Jake took Daisy's hand again and took her through the crowd.
'DUDE HELP!' James screamed as he saw Jake. He ran behind him. 'You better move, or i'll hurt you too.' The guy said who was trying to beat up James. 'No' he replied quickly. The guy punched Jake right in the eye, and Jake fell back. 'JAKE!' Daisy screamed, and everybody in the crowd gasped.
THE BE CONTINUED.
-Next chapter, -today or tomorrow.
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