Unfinished Alt - Please Rate [Batchelor Pad]

[Xylon!]

Ok well at the moment im doing a slight alt, i was wondering if you could point me in the right direction.

http://img332.imageshack.us/img332/8079/room21mw.png (http://imageshack.us)


any tips?

its not done yet, so i just wanna know if i should just like, trash it and start again or whatever.

[Rachz]

Nice start :D, one thing is that the floor is kinda a bit too ... complex.

[Xylon!]

Nice start :D, one thing is that the floor is kinda a bit too ... complex.

thats a bad thing?

o.O lol

[Danzilla]

So far so good, Dont forget a door, x] I dont like the fish, 10/10 so far. :d

[Xylon!]

ty ^^ ill colour it in

[.Lynn]

The floor is kind of in your face. Try to tone it down a bit.

The shape of the room is cool, but it might look better if the stairs we facing front.

The fishtank is coming along nicely, but make the fish isometric.

[joe:-,]

Add sofas and maybe a love area :o
and a door

[whiteman12]

Hmm. floor is kinda too detailed and draws your attention so you cant look at anything else. maybe make fish 3D and bigger?

[Rachz]

Lol. thats what i said bout floor :p.

[lildeep]

lol! i agree with every1 about the floor, but maybe u cud ask zampo if u cud use his "V.I.P bars" to bar off the lurrrrve area (if u do 1 that is) ;D but its getting along well m8!

[Xylon!]

omg
bad rep for this thread
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pathetic!

[Jay™]

The Floor Has Too Much Detail
And Messes Up My Eyes :S
8/10
Dance Floor On The Bottom Level Maybe?

[Rachz]

:O omg! bad rep! Thats majorly harsh

[Colourful™]

I liek the floorboards and the fish tank. But why are the fish white?

[Xylon!]

i havent coloured them in yet lol

[Rachz]

Because they are white fish! They DO exist ;D as do Xray feesh ;D

[Xylon!]

o.O oooo

xray fishhhhhh :P

[Rachz]

Lol yay for x-Ray Fish ;D And Venezuaelan Mooses and Dave Teh Llama

[Xylon!]

oooooooo

xy ray ^_^