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Yazamiinx
16-11-2005, 09:57 PM
Rating - PG13, Contains mild drug references and language.

Plot - On a Sunday night at Lexington, everything seems to be going ok. Until Lyra, falls inlove, with a man way too old for her. They both swap numbers and text for days, realising that their love means more.. This man is a helper at her school, so they keep their love on an all down low..
Until one day, Lyra met his brother. She and his brother had got talking.. without Lyra not knowing at all that he was the man's brother, Lyra then realises shs falling for the brother.. more than the man.. Lyra tells Raye everything... but little does Lyra know, Raye has a nasty secret that could ruin their friendship forever.
Which one would she choose.. Love or her Best Friend?
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A mirror is like life, staring right back at you. A mirror is like a potrait of yourself, but the other way round.

If you looked at a mirror properly, you would see that the reflection of yourself, is not how others see you. You only see the good side of you, so what happens when they see the bad? Do they get angry, do they lash out... or does the sheer pain of envy *****le their necks?

Would you like to see the bad side of my mirror?

***

I hate mornings, especaily Sunday mornings. Even though you get to sleep in, you just know that its going to be a boring yet sunny day like any other.
I sat up in my bed, gazing at the clouds passing by. Atleast I had one thing to look forward to, and that was the Sunday night Heaven and Hell night at Lexington.

Lexington is a nightclub for under 18's. They aren't allowed to sell alcohol, but since the security at the nightclub is so dim and dense that you could sneak in a whole stack of barcardi's if you had the space. On Sunday nights, they have a Heaven and Hell theme; In the 'Heaven' side they would play, trance music and what have you.. and in the 'Hell' side they would play, rock and other genre music related to that.

I suppose I better get up, I could guess Raye was buzzing around on MSN. She wanted to plan tonight, which is a major bummer since she goes on and on, and practically floods my computer with, 'Omg' and 'Lmao'.

I slumped over to my computer and switched it on; as I waited, my phone rang. Quickly, I grabbed it and pressed the green answer button.

"Hello?" I said.

"Ha! Lyra, right; ok, yeah" .. Great, it was Raye. She's decided to flood my phone now..

"Ugh, Hi Raye.." I grumbled.

"Ok, yeah, right; tonight, if gunna' be real good, ya' know that kid from School, ya' know, da' well ot' one..?" Raye asked,

"Um, yeah.." I said, trying to carefully understand what she was saying.

"Well, he's coming tonights right.. And he wants to MEET YOU" Raye shouted.

Not interested. So I decided to humour her weird little self.

"Me.. meet me? Oh my god! Wow, that is .. so... cool.." I said, gradually turning into a whisper.

"Okay then girl, meet ya' 9pm at Lexies?" asked Raye.

"Mhm.." I answered.

Raye hung up. Which was rather rude..


The boy she was on about from school, was the schools fittie. Everyone called him, Mr F for short. He knew he was hot, and he was an egotistical pig.

***

Location - 9pm outside Lexies.

I really find it funny when Raye is late. Its quite entertaining actually. I love the way she turns up in her so called, 'Hot MOTOR CAR', which is actually a Ford Fiesta that has a few under-car neon lights and some fancy body work. The most best thing about it, is when Raye comes out of the car looking like a right tart.
She always wears shorts skirts, low-cut tops to show off her huge breasts (Which looked sick,) and she wore too much make-up that she looked orange.

Ha. She's turned up, and oh my god. She is wearing a psycho short skin tight black mini dress.. ugh, it doesn't complitment her cleavage at all.

"AIGHT LOVE!" she shouted, waggling her arm.

God, we are only 16; and she thinks we are friggin' grown ups. Just to annoy her, I blurted out..

"Heh.. Hi love, you've been tangoed,"

"I WHAT?!" She shouted,

"Nothing.." I said, smirking.

She gave me a dodgy look for a second, and then linked arms with me. We both went to que up. This was one of my favourate parts, because I get to see what everyones wearing. All the women come dressed like total prozzies.. and the men dress like they are gay.

"Oh my god.." whispered Raye, "Look, three couples down the line infront of us.. Janice and her lovely mate Lindsay.."

I splurted out with laughter. Janice and Lindsay were total FREAKS, yet the boys still surround them.. its like they have this magical aura (Ugly aura with orange streaky legs) that pulls boys in. But tonight, they looked really pathetic. Everything was short about them.

Finally, we were entering Lexington. I could hear alsorts of music buzzing around my head, and thats when I started to get fired up.

Me and Raye went hunting for our gang that we normally 'party'/'mosh' with. Heh, funnily enough they were all in the loo's having a quick cig.

"Oi, Erna, put that cig out.." said Raye, dragging me behind her as we entered the Toilets.

"Er, naw love.." Erna said, flicking a bit of ash on the floor, "Smoking is my life you nerd, you know that.."

I gave Erna a whopping fat hug, since she is one of my favourates out of the gang. She was one of them happy go lucky girls who had everything perfect about them, especaily her personality.. it was so free and badass girl style.

Emma, Lorna and Chloe were sat on the floor, sharing a cigerette between them all.

"So then, Lyra.. seen anyone cute?" asked Erna, slanting on her hip.

"Nah, but apparently Mr F wants to meet me.. Which is a load of cods to me.."

"Haha! Who said that..?" asked Erna again, practically dropping her cig on the floor with laughter.
I really didn't find what was so funny, but still; I pointed to Raye, whom then looked guilty.

"Girl, why have you been telling my baby that Mr F wants to get with her?" Erna snapped.

"I aint, lay off for godsake," moaned Raye.

Erna raised her eyebrows and walked out of the room, dropping cigerette ash on Raye's shoes. Ha, serves her right.

***

As the night went on, I decided to find someone who had some booze.. Which was a total mistake because I found no one, so I had to persuade the Bartender. I walked steadily over to the bar, and slumped my body over the counter and shouted,
"OI! BARTENDER GIMME' SOME BOOZE!"

Everyone looked at me, but I didn't care. I just want some alcohol..

Suddenly, the bartender appeared from the corner. He walked over and smirked,

"You're not getting any booze m'love"

"Why not?" I asked, furiously.

"Because its the rules love, you need to be over 18.."

"Pfft.." I brushed him off totally.

I was nodding my head to the music, still stood at the bar, until someone nudged my shoulder..

That nudge, made me shiver.. shiver with adreniline..

[Chapter still not finished since I have to go.. (-: So, I'll add some more on.. I know the story is pretty naff, but yeah.. I was bored)

Ellis.
17-11-2005, 04:15 AM
ooo The story line seems okay :) I like all the detail you put in. Good work.

Yazamiinx
17-11-2005, 07:03 AM
^_^
Ty.
I personally think its rubbish..

Addie
17-11-2005, 07:56 AM
OMG I LOVE IT!

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