Sabra's Pool Tablie- FROM SCRATCH!!!

[Sabra]

This Is The Pool Table I Made On Paint And COMPLETELY From Scratch. Rate Out Of 10 And Leave Some Tips/Comments! Ty :)
Sabra :)

[Kekea]

It needs some work... like try making it 3-D? Is that the word...? :s

[Sabra]

Its kinda of hard to make it 3-D ..

[Trance]

You seem to be fairly new to the alteration world.

Firstly, I would work on making your alterations isometric.
Isometric is the angel the pixels in Habbo furniture have, you might want to look at some tutorials that will explain isometric angels further.

Secondly, I would study the pixels of other alterations and get a clear idea on how you're going to create your next alteration. Study what colors look too bright and what colors look too dark.

Lastly, I would start an alteration and work on it carefully and with a lot of effort to make it just right. Work on shading and shadows and the more detailed your alteration is, the better it will come out most of the time.

The alteration you have now isn't reaching Habbo's standards as to what they'd want to sell in the catalouge. The coloring and shading is basic but pretty good, the wood effect can have a little improvement, and it needs to be isometric. Good luck with future alterations!

[Wild-Play]

you need to make it habbish, which means u need to make it so it would fit into habbo, like make it 3D and put it on the habbo angle

[Sabra]

If some one wants to make it 3d Feel free but i need some like ratings!!!

[Adzeh]

need aloit of work 3/10

[Sabra]

I Dont See How It Is SOOOOO BAD

[Repps]

You seem to be fairly new to the alteration world.

Firstly, I would work on making your alterations isometric.
Isometric is the angel the pixels in Habbo furniture have, you might want to look at some tutorials that will explain isometric angels further.

Secondly, I would study the pixels of other alterations and get a clear idea on how you're going to create your next alteration. Study what colors look too bright and what colors look too dark.

Lastly, I would start an alteration and work on it carefully and with a lot of effort to make it just right. Work on shading and shadows and the more detailed your alteration is, the better it will come out most of the time.

The alteration you have now isn't reaching Habbo's standards as to what they'd want to sell in the catalouge. The coloring and shading is basic but pretty good, the wood effect can have a little improvement, and it needs to be isometric. Good luck with future alterations!


You might as well do her alts for her

[nets]

You have to make it look like a habbo object, trying making it Isometric.

Look at the tutorial ''My first box'' in the tutorial section (Graphics Help -> Tutorials).

[Sabra]

OK it was my first EVER alt by scratch! GEEEEZ

[P@ND@]

I'm not sure, and not critisizing your wirk, btu again, is the wood not from Kirk?
(I'm really not sure, will check it out ^^)
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Besides that, very good, for a "newbie" to the Alterations World you did very good, I'am suprised that you put shadows from the balls =D

Edit: It's not his =D
So I have to add: Great shadign asswell.
For this piece of PIXEL ART it deserves a ten, tobad it's not a alteration ^^

[Sabra]

Thanx Finally Some Good Critism Ty :)

[P@ND@]

Not a problem, critism is good, aslong as you tell them hwo to improve, and I think you can, you have the skills ^^

[Pixel-Artist]

http://rhysd.syntesis.org/tutorial/

[Sabra]

Thanx :) I Will Use That In The Future!

[Pixel-Artist]

Now, Try to remake it. :D

[djotto1991]

It needs some work... like try making it 3-D? Is that the word...? i have no idea what this word meens but it mite give u an idea

[Hwong1994]

its not "habbo-ish". good try tho 6/10 :D

[*.Glitter.Rip.*]

Yes is a good start but try to neatten up the shading a bit.
6/10

[danny6660]

i think u need a bit more work on that but 7/10 well done

[Ziabotsu]

Not isometric.
Isometric is the form of habbo furniture. Try zooming in to habbo furniture and look how its made. 6/10.
And... add shading on the balls.

[Pulchritudinous]

I think your better at clothes.
Sorry I said hair.

[Mr.Kylee]

you gota make it 3-d and a tip, stay on the making dresses and stuff they are way better, no offence thought :) 5/10

[Mafro.]

yer it wud be betta as 3-D 8/10

[jamie5k]

hey not bad like the way u made the balls and the shadows, plus why is everyone repeating each other it dont dont 8 of u to tell her it needs to be 3d i think it take one of you nice work.

[Alfrayer]

Can i have permission to re-make the pool table as its a great idea ( we can split the credits ) half for you making it and half for me making it 3d :D i will have a good at it (may no tbe perfect tho)

[Sabre_1]

its not isometric, it has no Habbo-ish features therefore cannot be an alteration of anything Habbo-ish, and the pckets are a little crude. Sorry, but seeing as it has nothing to do with Habbo its getting a 2/10, for your effort.

[8Marcus8]

I Dont See How It Is SOOOOO BAD
You can't see how its soooooo bad? Lets list why:
Not isometric,
Totally like a piece of cardboard,
Not 3D!
Thererefore 2/10

[Sabra]

Darn Why R U SOO Nice? lol this was about 4 months ago when i started making alts. now im a graphics designer maybe i've improved?

[G-flow]

is it supposed to look like a habbo piece of furniture?

[Demi]

lol
everyone is rating her like 3 2 or 1
well i give it a 6/10 because
its probably her first try
and she did ask for improvements
durr***

[Alfrayer]

yea i tried to make it 3d but the corners where to hard to i gave up

[miss-t]

not being rude but it needs to be 3-d and it just dont look habboish i think it dont look habboish coz its not 3-d soo 8/10 for the effort try makin 3-d tho

[bad-man10]

9 out of 10