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Addie
02-12-2005, 04:50 PM
Chapter One-

I lived in Scotland for seven years. Then when my dad got a job promotion we moved to Wales. I missed my friends. Especially my best friend Ellis. We did keep in touch by writing. But it wasn't the same. School was worse. Jerry [The school bully] was so so so SOOOO mean to me. She would push me and call me names and teased me about my name. Then one day I was walking home from school and Jerry came up to me. ''Cheese and Pickle sandwich TOMMOROW!'' She said. ''Yea Yea!'' I said walking away. I got home and went into the living room. ''How was school today?'' Mum asked. ''The same as always!'' I said. ''Oh, Make some friends hun'' Mum said giving me a sad look. ''No point!'' I said walking up to my room. I shoved my bag under my bed and had a nap. Next thing I know is dad is waking me up. ''You have a parcel hun.'' He said handing me it. ''Thanks.'' I said. ''See you later,'' He said. I opened it. Yey! It was from Ellis!

Chapter 2-

Sooooon.

Wolfie
02-12-2005, 04:52 PM
1. Great story just like Callie
2. Can You Show Me What Dino Looks Like Hatched

Addie
02-12-2005, 06:55 PM
Chapter Two-

She had sent me a letter and a penguin teddy. She had went on holiday two weeks ago. ''Aww..'' I said queitly. I put it on my bed and read her letter. She said whats shes been upto blah blah blah. I got a pen and a piece of paper and wrote a letter back. I put it in an envelope with a stamp and went downstairs for dinner. I ate and then went out. I ran to the post office with £1. I posted the letter and went to the shop. When I came out I saw Jerry. I ran to the park and climbed up the tree. I checked my pockets. Thank god. My mobile. I dialed my mums number. ''Urm, Mum, Im up a tree. Jerry the bully is looking for me.'' I whispered. ''Hunny. Were about?'' She asked. ''Park.'' I said. She hung up. Then Jerry went into the shop. I climbed down and ran home. ''Hunny! I was comming to get you.'' Mum said. ''Yea Yea!'' I said breathing heavily. ''Hunny. Make some friends please.'' Mum said sitting back down. ''No! I had friends. But you took that away from me!'' I said going away. A couple of days later a letter arrived for me. FROM ELLIS! I read it and it said. ''Dear Cosmo, I'm moving to Wales. I'm moving to 23 Chef Street. Love Ellis.'' OH MY GOD! ELLIS WAS MOVING NEXT DOOR TO ME!

Chapter 3-

Plssssss comment.

Frank459
02-12-2005, 07:08 PM
was ellis moving away or next door?
and its good so far x]

WANT MOREEEEEE

Addie
02-12-2005, 07:09 PM
Ellis is moving next door to Cosmo. Ill write more in about 10 minutes.

pechie100
02-12-2005, 07:10 PM
Ellis is moving next door to Cosmo. Ill write more in about 10 minutes.
likikng it !
keep going

Addie
02-12-2005, 11:47 PM
Chapter Three-

This was great! I could finally see my best friend again. I wrote back and ran downstairs. ''GUESS WHAT!'' I shouted. ''What?'' Dad asked. ''ELLIS IS MOVING NEXT DOOR!'' I said looking really happy. ''Thats great. When?'' Mum asked. ''Ermmm... Next week.'' I said. But. One week passed. Then two, Then three. Then a month. But on the 5th week I was in my house alone because mum and dad were at asdas and Knock Knock. I went to my door. ''Hey Cosmo!'' Ellis said. ''ELLIS!'' I screamed hugging her. ''Sorry about all that time. We were held up on *****ng.'' Ellis said. ''Its ok. As long as your here safe.'' I said. ''Want to help me unpack?'' She asked. ''Yea.'' I said getting my shoes on. Then mum and dad came up. ''Oh hey Ellis.'' Mum said. ''Hi.'' Ellis replied. ''Mum I'm going to Ellis's house.'' I said. ''Ok.'' She said. Me and Ellis walked to her house. ''Mum! Cosmo is here.'' Ellis shouted. ''Oh hey Cosmo.'' Her mum shouted back. ''Hi.'' I replied. Me and Ellis went to her room to unpack. ''By the way, Watchout for Jerry. Shes a bully and teases me because of my name.'' I said. ''Thats ashame!'' Ellis said. About an hour later me and Ellis went to the park. Guess who was there? Yup. Jerry. ''Oh look Cosmo has a friend.'' Jerry shouted. ''Lets go.'' I mummered to Ellis. ''No!'' She said walking towords the park. I obviously followed her. ''So. Who are you?'' Jerry asked Ellis. ''Ellis! Who are you?'' Ellis said. ''ELLIS! HAHA! ELLIS'S TAXI! My name is cool,. Jerry.'' Jerry said. ''Hahaha! Whos your big brother? TOM?'' Ellis laughes. ''RIGHT! YOU AND ME! TOMMOROW. 3PM. SHARP HERE. BE HERE!'' Jerry said walking off. ''Oh no Ellis.'' I said.

Chapter 4- Who wins Jerry/Ellis.

Frank459
03-12-2005, 01:38 PM
wow i think ellis will win x]

issaa.
03-12-2005, 01:43 PM
wow :o nice story <3 this is the first time ive ever read one of your stories <3

Addie
03-12-2005, 01:44 PM
wow :o nice story <3 this is the first time ive ever read one of your stories <3

Lol. Read Callie [My other story] Its my bestest one. I'll do chapter 4 in about 10-15 minutes ;]

And omg who bad repped me.

Addie
03-12-2005, 03:55 PM
Chapter Four-

The next morning I woke up with a horrible feeling in my stomach. I looked at the clock. Oh no! 2:48pm. I got dressed quickly and ran to Ellis's house. I knocked on her door and she answered. ''Oh there you are. I was just about to leave for the park.'' Ellis said shutting her door. ''No! Ellis. Jerry is tough, I mean it.'' I said breathing heavily. ''So?'' She shrugged heading to the park. I ran after her. 2:58pm. We arrived at the park. No sign of Jerry. Now it was 3:02pm. Jerry came. ''I'm sorry I'm late. I was busy beating up a kid.'' She said. I gulped. ''So...Here we are.'' Ellis said. ''Yupp! And your gonna get it.'' Jerry said. I knew Ellis had a tough side. ''Got my Cheese and Pickle sandwich?'' Jerry asked Ellis. ''Nope.'' Ellis said. ''What!?'' Jerry yelled. ''Not today. Not tommorow. Never again.'' Ellis said getting really mad. ''And! If you ever bother me or Cosmo again I swear to god!'' Ellis said madly. ''I'm sorry!'' Jerry said covering her eyes. ''So, You can make your own sandwiches from this day on! GOT IT?'' Ellis yelled. ''Yes. Yes just please don't hurt me.'' Jerry cried running away. ''ELLIS YOU DID IT!'' I screamed. ''Well. No one bothers me!'' She said. ''Anyway I'm away.'' She added. ''Were?'' I asked. ''Home.'' She said. ''What do you mean? Home?'' I asked. ''To un-pack.''She said going away. I went home too.

Chapter Five- Later.

Embean
03-12-2005, 04:16 PM
Lmao.
I love your stories Spork.
[Forgotten your real name]

Addie
03-12-2005, 04:30 PM
Chapter Five-

When I got home I went to my room. I looked out my window and saw Ellis in her garden. I wondered what she was doing. She looked at my window. I ducked quickly. I looked back up. She was gone. Weird. I lay on my bed. ''Hmmm maybe I'll go on MSN.'' I thought to myself. So I got up and sat on the computer chair. I logged on and Ellis was online. ''Hi'' I messaged her. ''Urm. Hi. I needa pack. Bye'' She typed logging off. Ellis had been acting really strange lately. The next day I went to the shop for my dad and I saw Ellis. I ran up to her and said ''Hi'' ''Emm I'm just leaving. My mum wanted magazines.'' She said. ''Ok?'' I said. I went into the shop and bought what my dad wanted. I paid the £4 and went home. Ellis was at her front door. I didn't speak to her or look at her just went inside. I put my dads things on the counter in the kitchen and went into my garden. I raked the tool shed. Nothing intresting. So I just left and went to my room. Bring Bring. The phone went. ''I'LL GET IT!'' I shouted. I picked it up and said ''Hello, Whos that?'' ''Look. Cosmo. Don't come for me this weekend as I won't be in'' The voice said. ''Who is it?'' I asked. ''Its Ellis'' She said hanging up. Weird. The weekend came. I saw Ellis. She looked weird. I didn't bother. Until I saw her looking really really weird....

Chapter Six- Later

Embean
03-12-2005, 04:33 PM
Chapter Five-

When I got home I went to my room. I looked out my window and saw Ellis in her garden. I wondered what she was doing. She looked at my window. I ducked quickly. I looked back up. She was gone. Weird. I lay on my bed. ''Hmmm maybe I'll go on MSN.'' I thought to myself. So I got up and sat on the computer chair. I logged on and Ellis was online. ''Hi'' I messaged her. ''Urm. Hi. I needa pack. Bye'' She typed logging off. Ellis had been acting really strange lately. The next day I went to the shop for my dad and I saw Ellis. I ran up to her and said ''Hi'' ''Emm I'm just leaving. My mum wanted magazines.'' She said. ''Ok?'' I said. I went into the shop and bought what my dad wanted. I paid the £4 and went home. Ellis was at her front door. I didn't speak to her or look at her just went inside. I put my dads things on the counter in the kitchen and went into my garden. I raked the tool shed. Nothing intresting. So I just left and went to my room. Bring Bring. The phone went. ''I'LL GET IT!'' I shouted. I picked it up and said ''Hello, Whos that?'' ''Look. Cosmo. Don't come for me this weekend as I won't be in'' The voice said. ''Who is it?'' I asked. ''Its Ellis'' She said hanging up. Weird. The weekend came. I saw Ellis. She looked weird. I didn't bother. Until I saw her looking really really weird....

Chapter Six- Later
More or i'll slit your throat x]

Addie
03-12-2005, 04:45 PM
Chapter Six-

She had greenish looking skin. I was really scared. I ran to my bed and hid under my covers. I woke up the next morning. I got up and ran outside. Everything was normal. Phew. I went back into my house. I didn't dare tell anyone what I saw. Then I looked out my window and in the sky was a U.F.O. ''OH MY GOD!'' I said to myself. I got my video camera out and videoed it. Then It landed in Ellis's garden. OH NO! Out came Ellis, Her mum and her dad. Was she an alien? I turned my video camera off. I ran to my mum and dad and showed them the video. ''Hunny. Maybe its just a play.'' Mum said. ''Its not! Shes been acting weird.'' I said turning it off. Then knock-knock. I answered the door and guess who it was?

Chapter 7- Later

AGH! PLS DON'T SLIT MY THROAT!

Embean
03-12-2005, 04:52 PM
Chapter Six-

She had greenish looking skin. I was really scared. I ran to my bed and hid under my covers. I woke up the next morning. I got up and ran outside. Everything was normal. Phew. I went back into my house. I didn't dare tell anyone what I saw. Then I looked out my window and in the sky was a U.F.O. ''OH MY GOD!'' I said to myself. I got my video camera out and videoed it. Then It landed in Ellis's garden. OH NO! Out came Ellis, Her mum and her dad. Was she an alien? I turned my video camera off. I ran to my mum and dad and showed them the video. ''Hunny. Maybe its just a play.'' Mum said. ''Its not! Shes been acting weird.'' I said turning it off. Then knock-knock. I answered the door and guess who it was?

Chapter 7- Later

AGH! PLS DON'T SLIT MY THROAT!
i'll write my next chapter, then you write yours :P

Addie
03-12-2005, 05:16 PM
Chapter Seven-

''Hi'' Ellis said. ''Urmm...H..h.i'' I said. ''Whats wrong?'' She asked. ''Nnnot..hi..ng.'' I stuttered. ''Ok,. Well want to come to my house?'' She asked. ''No thanks.'' I said. ''Well can I come in?'' She asked. What could I say? ''Yea.'' I said. We went up to my room. ''Look Ellis I know.'' I said to her. ''Know what?'' She asked. ''Your an alien.'' I said. ''No. I'm not.'' She said. ''Yea you are!'' I said putting the video in. ''Thats not my family.'' She said. ''Who is it then?'' I asked. ''Look. I'm not ment to say but Its us in mars. Even you have aliens like you up in mars or space.'' She said. ''WHAT?'' I said. ''They are ment to look like everyone. Its like a normal world there.'' She said. ''Cool!'' I said. ''BUT! If anyone knows they can be dead. You see a man went on the moon. He saw them. But the aliens had to kill him before he told anyone.'' She said. ''Who came out the U.F.O then?'' I asked. ''My other side.'' She said. ''I want to see my other side!'' I said happily. ''Meet me in my garden at midnight then.'' Ellis said walking out.

Chapter Eight- Later.

Wolfie
03-12-2005, 06:27 PM
:) probally better than my story lol

Addie
03-12-2005, 06:34 PM
Chapter Eight-

Midnight came. I was in Ellis's garden. Ellis came out. ''Ok, The U.F.O will be here in two seconds.'' She said. Then I saw it come from the sky. The U.F.O. I was so excited. It landed halfway in the air. Then a big looking slide came out. ''C'mon in!'' Ellis said walking in. I followed her.. ''WOW!'' I said. ''This is my other sided mum.'' She said. ''Nice to meet you.'' The alien mum said. ''Hi.'' I said. ''Oh hi!'' The other Ellis said. ''Hi.'' I replied. The slide thing shut. ''Now. We are going to mars so put these suits on.'' The alien dad said. I put it on so did Ellis. About ten minutes later we were in mars. The slide opened and I stepped out. ''Wow'' I thought to myself. Towards me came my other side. I was happy. I saw an alien me! She was cool looking. She shook my hand. ''Hello Cosmo.'' She said. ''Hello.'' I said back. ''We would like to come to earth someday.'' She said. ''Its not that bad.'' I said. ''I want to have a vist.'' She said. ''I love mars.'' I said. It would be cool if I could live there. But I couldn't. I rememberd I had my mobile. I tried to call mum. But no signal. Oh well. I slipped it back in my pocket. We explored until the alien mum of Ellis said ''Time to go.'' So we all went back into the U.F.O. When we arrived back I said ''I really like it there.'' ''No problem. Come back soon.'' The alien mum said. I went into my house. My mum was standing in the kitchen. ''WERE HAVE YOU BEEN YOUNG LADY?'' She shouted. ''Look mum,'' I told her what happend. ''Oh really?'' She said. ''Yes. Come tommorow ok?'' I said going to my room. I fell asleep feeling really happy. The next morning I woke up and went to Ellis's.

Chapter Nine- Tonight.

Wolfie
03-12-2005, 06:38 PM
More More More :)

Addie
03-12-2005, 06:47 PM
Chapter Nine-

No one answered. So I went around the back. Nope. So I went home. I didn't do much but reserch on my family. Nothing yet. So I left it on and I was sooooooo tired so I had a sleep. I woke up and went downstairs for a snack.
I found a note saying ''Cosmo, Went to ASDAS Be back later love mum and dad.'' Oh well. I watched some television.
Mum and dad came in and put the shopping away.
I went out to the library to find some books of my family. I found three and took them home. I sat on my bed and looked through them. I saw my great great great aunty. She was an ALIEN! I felt weird. And then I saw me. I looked like an alien. I was only two.
Was it true was I an alien. ''MUM MUM DAD DAD!'' I shouted running downstairs.

Chapter Ten- Later

Wolfie
03-12-2005, 06:53 PM
brilliant +rep tomoz coz i cant now

Addie
03-12-2005, 07:03 PM
Chapter Ten-

I ran into the living room. ''MUM! ARE WE ALIENS?'' I screamed. ''Hunny. We were going to tell you at the right time.'' Dad said. He looked green and ALIENISH. ''So its true?'' I asked. ''Yes.'' Mum said. ''Everyone is an alien.'' She said. ''W...what!?'' I asked. ''Yep. Everyone is an alien.'' Dad said. ''How come I don't look it?'' I asked. ''Because. You will when you turn fifteen.'' Mum said. ''Do we have powers?'' I asked. ''No, But we have a U.F.O'' Mum said.
We boarded it. We were going home. Real home. The home we were born in. That was our home. I eventually found out we came to earth because Dark Lord was having a 10 year war with Lord Black. But now we had to go home. No humans had been on earth. I even saw Jerry. Me, Jerry and Ellis are friends and Jerry regreted bullying us. All humans on earth were aliens. No one talked about it until this day forward.

The End.

By Addie

Wolfie
03-12-2005, 07:06 PM
W00T W00T

Addie
03-12-2005, 07:07 PM
:Sign10: I'll do my next story later.

Wolfie
03-12-2005, 07:08 PM
it says the end

Addie
03-12-2005, 07:11 PM
I meant story.

Wolfie
03-12-2005, 07:12 PM
oh kwl :)

OMGitsaROSS
03-12-2005, 07:22 PM
wow
i missed COKE CRIMBO ADvERT on ITV cuz i was readin it :p

goooood +rpe

Addie
03-12-2005, 07:24 PM
wow
i missed COKE CRIMBO ADvERT on ITV cuz i was readin it :p

goooood +rpe
ROFL!

Frisked
10-12-2005, 06:08 PM
The story's are great! Well done :D

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