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Embean
02-12-2005, 08:00 PM
First chapter:

'GET OUT OF MY LIFE!' Yeah, thats my dad. I won't forget him, I hated him so much, he put me through so much pain and anger. I'll never be his friend again. I haven't seen him for 4 years... and that's a good thing. They we're the last things he said to me, while I was crying on the stairs. Then he slammed the door. No suitcase, nothing. He just walked out.
My life is better without him though, who needs a dad? Tom has made my life so much better since he left. Tom's my boyfriend, he's the same age as me... 14. 'See you mum.' I shouted to her, just checking myself out in the mirror before I left for school with my best friend, Hannah. 'Bye hunny!' She replied back to me, from the bathroom. I just brushed my hair - Dark brown and blonde streaks. Hannah opened the door for me, and we both walked out. 'Wait for me!' My sister, Becky said to us both and we walked up to street. My sister is like one of my best friends too. Ever since dad left. She's really helped me with my life, and with my problems.
I smiled at her, and we carried on walking.

Continued - Later.

Addie
02-12-2005, 08:14 PM
Great so far :)

Embean
03-12-2005, 12:14 PM
Chapter 2:
By the time we arrived at the school grounds everybody was lined up to go in school.
Me, Becky and Hannah sat down at registration.
'Justine Hill?' Mrs Withey called.
'Here miss.' I replied to her. Mrs Withey is sooo kind. She's one of the best teachers in the school, and shes quite pretty.
'Hannah Love?' She called again. 'Here miss.'
'Becky Hill?' 'Here miss.'
She'd just registered everybody in the class in time, the bell rang.
After maths and german, it was lunch time.
Me and Tom were walking together close, with Hannah and my other good friend Sammi next to me.
I picked up a tray and walked over to the canteen bar.
I picked out salad and some chicken. And we all walked outside and placed our trays on the benches. I had to put on my sunglasses, because I couldnt barely see, because the sun shone so brightly.
After lunch, Tom pulled me over to a quiet spot outside.
'What!?' I said laughing. 'I need to tell you something...' He began, as he sat me down. I looked at him sternly. What did he need to tell me? Did he want to break up with me? He can't break up with me can he? 'I'm... not going to be at school tomorrow...' He finished. I was still staring at him, waiting him to fill me in on details. '...And i'm not going to be at school the day after that...' 'Tom, what are you saying?' I asked him, confused and worried.
He stopped, and then spoke... 'I'm moving away...'

To be continued - Later.

Addie
03-12-2005, 01:11 PM
Nooooooooooooooooo! TOM!

MORE!!!

Frank459
03-12-2005, 01:41 PM
yes more before i put ma foot in toms backside x]

issaa.
03-12-2005, 01:46 PM
omg more more more <3

mynameishelen!
03-12-2005, 01:48 PM
yes more before i put ma foot in toms backside x]

Lmao
Yer more.

Embean
03-12-2005, 03:39 PM
Chapter 3:

When I arrived home from school, my eyed were still filled with tears.
How could Tom. The love of my life. Move away!? He was the one that made me life better since dad left. He was the one who cheered me up if my sister and I had fell out. Tom couldn't... he just couldn't leave. I walked up to my bedroom. And plopped myself on my bed, with my feet dangling off the edge. I placed my hands on my belly. It hadn't sunk in that he'd be leaving in 2 days time. I walked over to my computer and logged onto MSN.
Tom spoke to me straight away. 'Hi.' I didn't reply to him. I couldn't talk to him, not now. Inside I knew it wasn't his fault. But I couldn't forgive him. This was the worst thing that was going to happen ever. 'Look...' He began.
'I know you don't want me to move away... but it's not my fault.' He nudged me. I logged off. At this moment in time, I didn't want to speak - to anybody.
Not even my own sister. Not even my mum. Tears we're streaming down my face. I stuffed my face into my pillow. Crying. Someone knocked on my bedroom door. My sister and my mum. I looked up to them, still crying my heart out. Both of them ran up to me and hugged me, both starting to cry with me. 'Hunny, I hate seeing you like this.' She said to me. I snuffled my nose, 'I'd just like... to have some rest.' I said to them, trying not to be in a bad mood. My sister smiled at me, and they both left the room.

To be continued - Later.

Addie
03-12-2005, 03:40 PM
Awwwwwww.

Moreeee I love your stories.

Embean
03-12-2005, 03:52 PM
Chapter 4:

'This is the day.' I thought to myself as I got changed for school.
Today Tom was going to leave, he was going to vanish completly out of my life.
Tears starting filling my eyes again. 'No, I'm not going to cry.' I told myself bravely.
I paced my room. How was I going to cope now? The only people who can help me now is my mum and sister, and when I have fights with them, i'll have no-one...
I walked out of the door, I didn't want anything to eat, and I didn't want to speak to anybody - just not yet. I sat down and looked around. Bethany Coombs, she was so pretty. There stood the girl, touching lips with her boyfriend on the football team, who everybody loved. I had the christmas tune on my mobile phone already. Tom wanted to know where I was, he wanted to talk. - I didn't. How could I? I'd left school yesterday, not saying a word to him. I couldn't face him now. I went into the girls bathroom and looked at myself in the mirror. What a state I was. My mascara had ran down my cheeks from tears. 'I've definatly got to buy some waterproof mascara!' I laughed to myself. But, although I was laughing. it didn't seem right. This was the last day I was going to see the love of my life...
And then, I'll be alone forever.

Next chapter - Later.

Addie
03-12-2005, 03:54 PM
~:'( :'( Tommm

Moreee :)

Embean
03-12-2005, 04:14 PM
Chapter five:

I walked out into the hallway, there we're loads of students hanging around.
I turned the corner. I paused... 'JUSTINE!' He ran up to me and took my hand. I had to smile. 'Before you say anything!' he said to me smiling. 'I have something to tell you...' I looked into his blue eyes. 'I'm not going away!' He exclaimed. My jaw dropped and he hugged me. I hugged him the tightest I could. Tom wasn't leaving, and now, I wasn't going to let him leave ever!
'How come!?' I said to him grinning. 'Well, at first we had to go away because dad got a promotion with his work, and he accepted it.' 'He knew I was so unhappy, and that he knew how much I loved you, that he cancelled it, so we could stay together!' He squeaked to me. I hugged him again, and then he kissed me gently on the lips. 'OH MY BLOODY GOD.' I though to myself. This was my first proper kiss ever in my life. The school bell rang and I walked home with Tom to his house. I took my bag off my shoulders, and put in down in the hallway next to tom's. And we walked up to his bedroom.
Passing his sister, who's the same age as me, whos one of my really good friends. I grinned at her, and carried on walking down the hallway.
I sat on his bed and stared out the window. I lay down. I loved the smell of Tom. He smelt so sweet and clean. He sat on his set of chester drawers, and stared at me straight in the face. I sat up on his bed at looked back at him. 'What?' I smiled at him. He walked over to me and hugged me, and kissed my lips gently again. 'I want to be with you forever.' He said to me.

To be continued - Later.

Addie
03-12-2005, 04:16 PM
:O Tell me they're not getting married!?

Embean
03-12-2005, 04:17 PM
:O Tell me they're not getting married!?
LMAO!
They're only 14.

Addie
03-12-2005, 04:18 PM
LMAO!
They're only 14.

Rofl/ I thought they were 16.

Embean
03-12-2005, 04:21 PM
Rofl/ I thought they were 16.
read the first chapter.
14. x]

Addie
03-12-2005, 04:32 PM
More or I'll poke you with a blunt spoon!

Embean
03-12-2005, 04:42 PM
Chapter six:

'I want to be with you forever to.' I said, letting go and smiling at him. Then the phone went and I picked it up for him. 'Hello?' I said to the person at the other end of the phone line. 'Hey, is Tom there please?' The woman on the other end of the line said. 'Sure.' I passed over the phone to Tom. 'Hello?' He said. He carried on talking to the person. I watched him talking while I was skipping through CD'S. Then he put the phone down. 'Who was that?' I asked. 'My mum, just said shes on a night shift.' He said, while sitting down next to me and looking at the CD's. 'Um, do you wanna stay here tonight?' He said as he turned to look at me. 'Okay!' I exclaimed. I went over to the phone, and rang my mum to tell her I was staying at his house. She said okay, seeing as it was saturday tomorrow. I put Greenday's album on in the disc drive, and skipped to number 3, Jesus of Suburbia. I danced round his room, shaking my hips while he watched me smiling. I pushed back my wavy hair again that i'd curled earlier. And I sat down. My mobile went. It was a text from Becky, my sister. She wanted to know where I was, I told her I was at Tom's house, and she replied that she would be over soon.

To be continued - later.

Addie
03-12-2005, 04:45 PM
More or I'll poke you with a spork :P

Embean
03-12-2005, 04:46 PM
More or I'll poke you with a spork :P
Lmao.
I will soon!

Addie
03-12-2005, 04:57 PM
Ill write next chapter of Cosmo when youve wrote this one.

Embean
03-12-2005, 05:06 PM
Chapter seven:

Knock-knock. Then Tom's bedroom opened, Becky and Adele, Tom's sister. Walked in a plopped down on the bed. 'Tom, Becky's staying over in my room.' Adele said to her brother. 'Okay.' He replied smiling. 'Isn't there a gig at the Horse and Jokey later tonight?' Becky said to us. 'Yeah! Some of my mates are playing in there.' Tom said. 'It's at 8.' 'Well, It's half 7 now, so i'll have time to get ready.' I said. I put my hand down on the bed sheets. Tom was looking at Adele and Becky talking, and as he was doing so, he put his hand on mine, pretending he didn't mean to. That's Tom, he's so sweet.
I ran over to my house and got some clothes and put them in a bag. And took them back to Tom's house. I searched through the bag, and got two bobbles and put hair pig tails in on each side. I dressed myself punky, and wore my pink and black converse. Tom wore his vans and ripped jeans with a t-shirt. I re-did my black eyeliner, while waiting for the other two girls. It was already dark, seeing as it was winter. And we walked up to the pub together. We nearly got to the top of the street, we passed the park.
As we did so. We all heard a really loud scream. I jumped and grabbed Tom's hand. 'WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?!' I whispered. 'I don't know... but it came from the park...' Tom said. We walked into the park. 'HELP ME!' We heard a girl's voice screaming again. 'HELP!!' I ran up... 'SAMMI!' I SCREAMED.

TO BE CONTINUED - Soon, or later tonight.

Addie
03-12-2005, 05:09 PM
OMG MORE OR -Gets out spork-

Embean
03-12-2005, 05:10 PM
OMG MORE OR -Gets out spork-
Dad wants to come on computer.
Might be back afterwards.
Might not, but i'll be on later tonight hun.
Bye <3

Addie
03-12-2005, 05:17 PM
Dad wants to come on computer.
Might be back afterwards.
Might not, but i'll be on later tonight hun.
Bye <3

Ok :'( Ive done other chapter of my story.

Wolfie
03-12-2005, 06:57 PM
she is writing nxt chapter now :)

Embean
03-12-2005, 07:03 PM
Chapter eight:

At the hospital. I sat. And waited. While I was holding Tom's hand. Finally, the nurse came out of the room. 'Sammi has a servre injury in her hip.' She said to us. 'She was shot from an unknown area.' Tears started to stream down my eyes. 'We'll do a check on her, and a few operations, she'll be out in a few days.' The nurse finished, and walked off. I wiped the tears from my cheeks. Later that night. The 4 of us decided to go to the gig again, and tried to forget that anything happened. Tim, one of the guitatists from one of the bands was amazing! He played the bass really well. And it sounded so cool. 'Justine, your sweating to much...' Tom said to me as I was jumping. 'Your right, I'll take a break, I'm going to pop to the toilet.' I said to him, and pushed my way out of the crowd to the toilets. After the gig, Tom lead me out, and we found Becky and Adele again. We went back to their houses, and got some rest on the sofa. I switched over the channels, and turned over to 'Most Haunted' I leant onto Tom's shoulder and he placed his head on mine. 'We're gonna go and refill the sweets bowl.' Adele said, and she and Becky walked down the hall to the kitchen. I switched onto music, and put My Chemical Romance - I'm Not Okay (I Promise) on. Me and Tom LOVE that song. I got up and danced and danced. Once Ray's part on, i started headbanging. Then Tom turned me around, and without saying anything, he kissed me on the lips. Just as it happened... His mum walked in.

To be continued - Later or tomorrow.

Addie
03-12-2005, 07:06 PM
Dum Dum DUM!

Moree or Ill poke you with a spork.

Wolfie
03-12-2005, 07:07 PM
Briil story both of you

Embean
03-12-2005, 07:31 PM
second part of chapter eight:

She stared at us and smiled. Then left the room...

Chapter nine:

5 years on, and me and Tom are happily married.
And best of all, we have a lovely house, and i'm pregnant.
Sammi recovered and visits my house everyday.
As for my mum, she lives a few miles away but I still get to see her.
Becky is living with Hannah and Sammi.
And they come over for daily visits.
I'm having the baby in a few months time.
And if its a girl we're thinking of calling it Poppy.
And for a boy, Jake.
But for now, I think i'll live a happy life, and keep an eye on whats around the corner.
;)
The end.
Written by Emmy.

Addie
03-12-2005, 07:35 PM
OMG AMAZING +REP

Embean
03-12-2005, 07:35 PM
OMG AMAZING +REP
yey.

Wolfie
03-12-2005, 07:36 PM
my last chapter is last post on page 2

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