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Wolfie
03-12-2005, 05:41 PM
Chapter 1:

"Awww she is so cute" I said "can i have her please" I added. "Ok I Suppose So" Replied my mum,Jane. "Yay" I screamed.
"I am gonna call her Hilga" I Said. Later That Day, Me and my mum went into the living room to find Hilga(My new dog) had trashed the living room. My Mum entered the room "ARGH! That stupid dog we are taking it back tomorrow". "No" I screeched, tears running down my face. My mum kicked the dog, "STOP PLEASE" I Yelled. She kicked it once more so i lost it. I went up to my mum and slapped her as hard as i could. "I order you and your damn dog get the hell out of my house now" Jane replied. I went outside and slammed the door i sat down with Hilga, "It'll be ok girl" I stroked her ears. I pondered down the street lost.

Chapter 2 Coming Later Tonight

Addie
03-12-2005, 05:48 PM
Great 10/10

Wolfie
03-12-2005, 05:59 PM
Chapter 2:


We wondered into a rather popular park, St Joes Park. Hilga started going mad although a corgie dog she was pulling as hard as a german shepard, I was worried. All of a sudden she broke her leash and ran into a nearby forest. I ran after her. "Hilga, Hilga come here girl" Still no answer. BANG! I woke up and found i was in someones house, i could not see well as my vision was blurry. "She's awake" Said a strange voice, i reconised it from somewhere. "Hi hunny" the voice said. "Is That .....DAD!" I replied my dad was right infront of me i had not see him since i was 6, as i am 13 now. "Dad mum through me out and....." I yapped. "I know it was on the news, It said local girl missing so i went searching for you i only lived in the next town across. I found you out cold in the forest u had some kind of scratch marks on you" He went on to tell me everything. "I had a dog but now she's gone" I mermered, I started to cry. "Look Up" My Dad said. So i did and there was Hilga. I ran foward and started to squeeze her. I had finally found home.


Chapter 3 Later Tonight

Addie
03-12-2005, 06:16 PM
aWW.. More or I shall poke you with a blunt spoon.

Wolfie
03-12-2005, 06:22 PM
Chapter 3:


The next morning i woke up in a HUGE king sized bed. Then my dad came through with a bed in breakfast. He looked kind of shakey. "Are you alright dad" i said. "well..." he answered "you're mum wants you to go live with her" he added. "No way, she had her chance never" I Said. "Are you sure you want to take this really far, it could even go to court" he said. All i could do was nod. "Well your mum must have custody of you until the court appearance next week" My dad said. I then agreed because i knew everything would be better after that. So later on me and Hilga went to my mums. We were greeted at the door by her, strangly she was smiling. Later that night it was actually...Good we had cake and a huge feast for tea. Then at about 3:15 am i was awoken and my mum was standing next to me. I was tied down to the bed. "Look you little brat if you go to live with your dad i swear, i will kill your stupid dog". I noticed Hilga was tied to my bed post covered in gasoline. My mum lit a match "You don't want Hilga to die then you stay with me" she said. I agreed and tried to scream but i was gagged.



Chapter 4 Tonight Or Tomorrow Morning

Mexel
03-12-2005, 06:23 PM
What? .

Addie
03-12-2005, 06:24 PM
OMG MORE!

Wolfie
03-12-2005, 06:25 PM
i will do nxt chapter later i need rest lol

Addie
03-12-2005, 06:36 PM
i will do nxt chapter later i need rest lol

:'( I did my next chapter :'(

Wolfie
03-12-2005, 06:37 PM
Chapter 4:


Jane untied me and let Hilga go as soon. As soon as she left the room i got up and started to get dressed. I thought to myself "I couldn't sleep in the same house as a women who deserves to get stuck in the mental asylum" I picked up Hilga and climbed outside my bedroom window. I was on the roof of the house every childs dream. I had to escape by crawling to the other end of the roof and climb down the ladder. I started to crawl across then i was there "Oh No" I thought to myself my mum was standing outside with the ladder on the ground she said "I'm coming up". I started to panic on no she is gonna hurt Hilga. She climbed out of the window and came towards me. "ARGHHHH!" I screamed. Then Bang! she dived on me we both fell off the roof. "ARGH" We both said, screeching our heads off.


Chapter 5 Later On

Addie
03-12-2005, 06:38 PM
OMG! WHAT A MENTAL PERSOn!

Wolfie
03-12-2005, 06:39 PM
lol yeah u got a really good story

Addie
03-12-2005, 06:48 PM
lol yeah u got a really good story


Ty. I did next chapter.

Wolfie
03-12-2005, 06:52 PM
Chapter 5:


Smack! We both hit the ground on my last vision i saw my mum getting up. "Time To Teach You A Lesson" Said my power crazed mum. "ARGH" I screamed i was tied down in a car. Outside the car was my mum all i saw was Her, Hilga And A Crobar. She hit Hilga with a crobar then drove me away furiously. "You stupid cow" I Roared. "You, Me And The River Are Having A Little Date" She whispered. I knew exactly what she meant. We approached the river she rev'ed the car. This Was It My Life Was Over. She drove foward at 95 mph. SQEEEEEEEEEEK! She braked the car on the edge i forgot something. She drove back picked up Hilga who was bleeding like mad and laid her next to the river. She rolled the car back "Here is a lesson for you little miss perfect" She Screamed "When you mess with me you mess with death" She put all the windows and locked all the doors. She drove foward towards Hilga and the river. "Hilga I Love You" I Cried

Chapter 6 Tomorrow

Addie
03-12-2005, 06:53 PM
What a mad woman! Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :rolleyes:

Wolfie
03-12-2005, 06:54 PM
sorry thats all for today :) ure story Rocks :)

Addie
03-12-2005, 07:14 PM
sorry thats all for today :) ure story Rocks :)

-Gets out blunt spoon ready for poking-

Wolfie
03-12-2005, 07:14 PM
lol -grabs a spork-

Addie
03-12-2005, 07:15 PM
-Pokes- Plsssssssss do more

Wolfie
03-12-2005, 07:17 PM
Chapter 6:


Smash! What was this my mum got out of the car Hilga was sitting in front of her growling. She was a magic dog. Hilga jumped up onto Jane's face and started to scratch and bite it. My mum fell into the river Hilga jumped into the car and unstraped me by biting the ropes. I started up car and reversed. Jane was starting to get out of the river I then spun around and drove away. In mirror i saw she hi-jacked a car and started to chase us. At that point i heard her scream "You Stupid B****". Her car hit mine and i skidded off the road. She got out of her stolen car, grabbed my hair and hit it off the car bonet. "Let Her Go" shouted my dad who put Jane at gunpoint. My mum walked towards him slowly and grabbed the gun. Bang!Bang!Bang! She shot my dad three times. Bang! "OMG! You Killed Hilga" I Roared. Then i lost it. A stranger would of thought i was possessed i grabbed the gun and kept hitting her. Then shot her 12 times in the head.

As I Write This Now I Am In An Asylum. No-one Believes My Story But Now I Must Go BANG!


The End

By Ben(Spikes007)

Addie
03-12-2005, 07:19 PM
i'll start nxt chapter at about half past


Yeyeeeeeeeee

Wolfie
03-12-2005, 07:36 PM
last chapter is last post on page 2

Addie
03-12-2005, 07:38 PM
What a weird dog Great story.

Wolfie
03-12-2005, 07:38 PM
thanks lol!
i g2g cya i'll start new story tomoz

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