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Ryder
05-12-2005, 05:39 PM
the main thing i was trying to focus on was on the bars where they meet the water, i tryed to make it look like they go under water, please help me!!!
http://tinypic.com/i6gp6p.png
Ryder
05-12-2005, 05:50 PM
No edit button.
Oh and BTW its meant to be a beach with one of them piers.
Kasabian
05-12-2005, 05:54 PM
ALOT of shading needed on that Ryder.
This is not one of your best ;)
Jay™
05-12-2005, 05:56 PM
Just Jack The Same Principle Of Roboevil's Carnival Thing.
Jack Meaning Rip :P
Ryder
05-12-2005, 05:57 PM
Its only the layout. have you actually noticed that there is only 3 colours in there not including black and white.
Ryder
05-12-2005, 05:58 PM
Just Jack The Same Principle Of Roboevil's Carnival Thing.
Jack Meaning Rip :P
:s :s :s What are you on about?
I didn't rip.
Jay™
05-12-2005, 06:10 PM
Im Saying Take It Off Roboevil
Im Not Saying You Did.
Ryder
05-12-2005, 06:12 PM
No way, I'm not going too do that, once i ripped one thing i got bad repped like 20 times.
Edit i give up on this work because i cant make the beach isommetric.
ItsDave
05-12-2005, 09:50 PM
You made the same mistake I did, with the pier, you need to make it qute small at the end of it and it needs alotta shading. 6/10
?WhyNot?
14-12-2005, 01:57 AM
I think he was only asking for help, not for rating.
fdb
14-12-2005, 12:01 PM
No way, I'm not going too do that, once i ripped one thing i got bad repped like 20 times.
Edit i give up on this work because i cant make the beach isommetric.

Adapting someones graphic technique for your own artwork is not ripping, if anyone says otherwise send 'em to me and i'll set 'em straight on that one. :)

As for the beach area, it's more a matter of how you shade it rather than it actually being drawn in iso, have a look at other peoples beach scenes and see how they do it, as i said before, using someones technique to benefit your own work is not ripping, i still look at other peoples artwork for inspiration/ideas as do every other graphic designer on the planet. :)
Paintball-7-8--
14-12-2005, 12:51 PM
:-/ 2/10
Ryder
14-12-2005, 02:13 PM
It is actually kinda a help thread lol
:paschendale:
14-12-2005, 04:22 PM
It doesn't look like the pier is connected to the land..
Ryder
14-12-2005, 05:42 PM
I know thats onew of the main bits i am stuck on.

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