GoldenMerc
07-12-2005, 08:15 PM
Death tag
There was a boy called peter who lived with his uncle his mum and dad passed away with unknown deaths they were to be told that everyone in this line of the family will die it was called the heshs virus. The only people who knew were his uncle. Peter had no clue what they died of just thought nothing. Next was peter.when peter was aged 15 his uncle was talking about the memeries of peters mum and dad then peters uncle jon said to peter the truth that he could be next peter had a older sister who was 19 when peter was 13.she also died of it.peters uncle didn’t get hit though which surprised peter first he thought it was a huge joke.satday morning at 9.00 jon calapsed on the floor peter didn’t know until he woke up and 11.00 he called for and ambulance but it was too late peter was next for sure.he knew it was coming.peter soon had a thought that if he had a child what would happen would the mother of the child die too or would she live.in 2001 peter was 20 he soon left school.he had no money,no job,nothing exept a crummy £100 will.he thought he couldn’t do much now with his life so he went to get a job at a local pub.he got around £25 a week which he lived on.peter came up with another thought he could get a girlfriend and get some money of that.then he soon came to his sences.at 9.00 peter collapsed no one came until next doors dog was barking at the window nextdoor the old woman said “ow my gosh hes dead”she tilted side to side home then called for help.in the hospital they found a little chip inside him the staff named it the Death Tag.it was beside his heart.the took it out and stiched peter back together again.arount 5 hours later peter lived.he lived up to 64 then died of unknown death.
i hope you like it i enjoyed reading it again.
Edited by Sianness (Forum Moderator): Thread closed due to being bumped.
There was a boy called peter who lived with his uncle his mum and dad passed away with unknown deaths they were to be told that everyone in this line of the family will die it was called the heshs virus. The only people who knew were his uncle. Peter had no clue what they died of just thought nothing. Next was peter.when peter was aged 15 his uncle was talking about the memeries of peters mum and dad then peters uncle jon said to peter the truth that he could be next peter had a older sister who was 19 when peter was 13.she also died of it.peters uncle didn’t get hit though which surprised peter first he thought it was a huge joke.satday morning at 9.00 jon calapsed on the floor peter didn’t know until he woke up and 11.00 he called for and ambulance but it was too late peter was next for sure.he knew it was coming.peter soon had a thought that if he had a child what would happen would the mother of the child die too or would she live.in 2001 peter was 20 he soon left school.he had no money,no job,nothing exept a crummy £100 will.he thought he couldn’t do much now with his life so he went to get a job at a local pub.he got around £25 a week which he lived on.peter came up with another thought he could get a girlfriend and get some money of that.then he soon came to his sences.at 9.00 peter collapsed no one came until next doors dog was barking at the window nextdoor the old woman said “ow my gosh hes dead”she tilted side to side home then called for help.in the hospital they found a little chip inside him the staff named it the Death Tag.it was beside his heart.the took it out and stiched peter back together again.arount 5 hours later peter lived.he lived up to 64 then died of unknown death.
i hope you like it i enjoyed reading it again.
Edited by Sianness (Forum Moderator): Thread closed due to being bumped.