Completed House

[brodeo]

Inspired by a house on my paper round, and of course the home sweet home competition.

103 Balmoral Road
Without the christmas lights...
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/9691/house5do.png

So tell me what you think :)

[Tommy]

Personally i think its been rushed...

[Jinxxed]

The circular window looks wierd ;s

[brodeo]

Personally i think its been rushed...

Hokay :$ But what would you say was wrong. If you can find something which looks rushed then find it, don't just exclaim it has been rushed though.

[Tommy]

Well the walls are just white... there is no detail. All the detail you have done is amazing put its like youve just quickly done the walls and roof...

[Lozzoling]

its really nice but it does look a bit rushed

7.8/10

[ItsDave]

I dont like the way that there's one step and then nothing, when its not even touching the ground, the grass could be darker, and I dont understand why the window is so straight with the window above it. 8/10

[joeyjo21]

Its really good, but i agree the walls need some work. It would look amazing if the white walls had the brick detail that you've made all the way around.

[Mr.Mity]

Well the walls are just white... there is no detail. All the detail you have done is amazing put its like youve just quickly done the walls and roof...
squirted, it is inspired by an actual house, so maybe that is what it actually looks like... :l

[joe:-,]

+Rep i like it and im in the giving mood

[Middlesbrough]

hmmm...
i dont liek the door i think it should be thinner xP 9/10 if you fix the door

[babeloverchris]

I think you probably could have done better, as said previously it looks rushed... Sorry I cant exactly place what part of it looks rushed.. It just kind of.. all looks rushed. Far better than I could have done but not near your best. 8/10

[mynameishelen!]

Need more detail on the walls, and another step below the door because the top one isn't touching the ground. The circular window looks a bit dodgy too. The pointed fireplace wall bit doesn't look like it's in the centre either.
7/10

[Rachz]

Needs
x Detail
x Drainpipes
x Door needs proportioning

[Zampo-III]

theres also summin strange about the roof angle type thing xP Cnt explain but it looks kinda odd... like one side of roof is longer than the other side :S

lol

anyway 7/10

[.Mike-]

The circle window looks a bit messed up on the left corner, but other then that it looks good, try adding habbos? ;-)
8/10

[Ferccia]

Looks okay.. :)
6/10 - Needs more shadding I think ;o

[babeloverchris]

theres also summin strange about the roof angle type thing xP Cnt explain but it looks kinda odd... like one side of roof is longer than the other side :S

lol

anyway 7/10

Oh wow you've got a good eye, looking back at it your right... The roof angle appears to be off.

{Side Note: Most roofs go off the edge of the house... like its not just a box with a triangle on top.. you probably wont understand what Im saying.. hard to explain.

[Demynx]

The roof looks rushed and the window. 7.3 out of 10 its also to boxy

[joboman]

dont really like the shape of house. and the windows are wonky. 6/10

[.Lynn]

The roof needs to be fixed. Look at this tutorial: http://www.pixelfreak.com/tutorial/tut1.html

Put the brick all around the house. I agree with everyone else, it looks sort of rushed.

If your editing it, and want the edited version on the competition just pm me..

[Jay™]

Ok.
There Are a Few Wierd Things.
I Think The Errors Below Are Quite Self Explanitary.
And They Wouldn't Really Be There On a Real House.
Ok.
The Side Windows, Why Would They Be So High And Small?
Isn't That a Living Room?
7/10
I Really thing You Rushed this.
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/4664/messed3gx.png

[Hecho]

Thats Absolutely Awesome

[?WhyNot?]

Looks pretty nice, continue working on it :)

[brodeo]

http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/4664/messed3gx.png
No they aren't self explanatory. Please explain. About the high windows, tbh, you wouldn't know without visiting the house i based it on. All of the houses up that street have a pantry which is where the high windows. They are only meant to allow light in seeing as that siude of the hoise is facing the side of another. I think some things you have just randomly circled like the top window, i skewed it 27 degrees like you should, and theres nothing else wrong with it? It's a loft window. The door...? The cable wire? The roof on the outty bit? Whats wrong with all those, please explain otherwise your circles are just circles to me.

[.Lynn]

The door should be a bit smaller. With the sides of the house where the roof ends, needs to be straight, not kinda wonky lookin'.

Center the roof!!!

[-dukes-]

The door looks a little big, and as someone said, the step doesnt even touch the ground.

[BigT13]

Its ok.. It just needs alot of fixing up to do! 6/10