artist ( 2nd alt )

[Faye]

i dont know if its good or not so i would really like ur opinion and if theres anything i could add ,delete ,change or make better please let me know:)14860

[ItsDave]

1. Work on that white bit on his foot.
2. The hair still needs shading.
3. That hat needs shading.
4. Choose darker colours.
5. Make shades which are the same colour.
6. Make shades slightly darker, not so dark that it changes dramtically.
7. 5/10

[Faye]

14865
is this any better ?:s

[Rachz]

thts much betta ;]