[PATZZ][F-4][Take 2]

[Incision]

New lineart (Keeping missiles and exhaust):
http://users.telenet.be/teerling/GFX/PA_GFX/f4phan2.PNG
Full changelog:
- Improved nose
- Crooked wing fixed
- Crooked tail fixed
- Smoother lines
- Improved shading (Line -> Dithering)

We based the changes on comments of Prexis, X, Moose, Xero and several others.
I hope we’ve fixed everything mentioned in the old F-4 thead.

-New colors (Were going for a more modern look)
Panda created this mini F-4 to show what we’re aiming for.
http://users.telenet.be/teerling/GFX/PA_GFX/phan.gif

Greetings, Nets & Panda

PS: I apologize for my behaviour in the past.

[brodeo]

Panda is backkkk <3 I think... hope it goes well. Other habbo alts though?

[Revis]

I don't like it, I think it's too curved to be honest. The nose really should be shorter I think.

[ItsDave]

I think the other wing should be bigger, the one on the left, and nose a lil smaller as ProperGanda suggested. 8/10

[Incision]

I don't do habbo alts no more* ;) I'm more into pixelart.
And I've been on and off this forum for a while, all under different names.
You'll probably won't see me till next month or so.
If you'd still like to see some work of me you should visit my PJ Gallery.
PJ: www.pixeljoint.com

*The Phantom is more normal pixelart as I will leave the interior "unhabited".
You won't see anything habborelated in the next version, just good ol' Iso Pixel Art.
Greetz. (And thanks for the warm welcome :p )

Edit: The plane is that curved, and perhaps a bit shorter nose, I will look at my ref pics.
Now visible in the original post.
Can't edit the post anymore, why not type in "phantom f4" in google and you'll see what I mean.
And I double checked, the nose is in proportion with the rest of the body ;)

[Roboevil]

Well the "line art" is pretty simple? Colour and shade it.

[Incision]

That's just the point of lineart.. it's unshaded and has no color.
Your title contains "Pixel Artist", I'm not sure to believe that now.
(Line art is a sort of a WIP, you use it to simply edit the shape of your object, you should visit more Pixel Art related forums and you'll see the importance of lineart.)

[Roboevil]

How hilarious... My point being that I don't care whether it's a WIP or not, you don't state that it's a WIP, if you stated that, then I wouldn't have hesitated to even look at this thread. I don't really want to look at a few black lines? The nose is incorrect anyway, it's slightly bent westward.

[Incision]

I stated it is "Take 2" in the topic.
A new F4 would be named "New F4 Phantom"
I also clearly mention "Line Art" in the first line of my post, not my fault that you don't know the meaning off it.
And this post was originally made for the mini F4, wich seems to be missed out by many off you.
Btw: The nose goes up, not westwards ;)

Edit: Can we stop argueing now :)

[?WhyNot?]

Quite nice :)

[Roboevil]

Ironically, perhaps the lack of shading makes the nose look as if it's bending up? I would also assume that "Take 2," meaning you've had another go in revamping the original, would have actually been better than it's original. I am well aware that it's line art, if you read my post I explained how it was too simple, therefore shading would enhance it.
As of this being an arguement? I'm unaware of that, although I would assume that an online one would consist of alot of "j00 R n00bz0rz!11." Oh well?
Whatever, for the sake of preventing somone from accusing me of SPAMming now and going off topic, I won't post anything irrelevant to the thread, ending our "arguement" anyway =/...
It's in the wrong section anyway, unless you consider this to be furniture?

[Wootzeh]

Shade the inside of the missiles.
Can't see anything else so far.

[Incision]

...It's in the wrong section anyway, unless you consider this to be furniture?
'tis been a while since I've been on the forum.
But it proved again why I left it.. Like I sed Dollars, won't be back till next month or so, since "14/\/\ 50 1337" according to Robo ;) The Hx "Pixel Artist"

[Jay™]

I See an elite coming on
Welcome Back <3

[brodeo]

I See an elite coming on
Welcome Back <3

I beg to differ. There are absolutely no moderatprs on this forum to move it to elites even if it was. This forum has turned into a trash can for WIP's and many non habbo related (or other) alterations.

[Ferccia]

I dont really like it.. you should put some color! :rolleyes:
It would look much better with color & a bit more shadding
Anyways.. overall : 5.9/10 <3 Gd job though!

[Revis]

Your right about the nose, but maybe make the seperation further towards teh front. I still don't like the curve, I reckon it should be straight untill the end of the wing then curve (the wing we can't see).

[Faye]

quiet good
finish it off with colour and details
7/10

[:paschendale:]

:O PANDA!! Sorry, I love your work + the alt looks great so far.