Propergander Industries... [WIP]

[Revis]

I'm going to make an entire factory compound, but my mouse is playing up so I can't finish it tonight :@ I've just done the Depot, from where my Pixelated goodness is distrobuted via a cheap freighter I got 2nd hand of some Russain. It's brought to the depot by a Hideous orange train, for which I apologise.
http://img277.imageshack.us/img277/2448/port7jb.png
CC will be listened to, as will suggestions for the rest of the alt.

[.:Subarusti:.]

this is the first alt by you were ive had to say this :'( it doesnt look right :o maybe when youve added more detail (even though theres loads and finish it!

[Revis]

this is the first alt by you were ive had to say this :'( it doesnt look right :o maybe when youve added more detail (even though theres loads and finish it!
How? Where?! I need to know!!!

[ItsDave]

It looks cool. 7/10

[Revis]

It looks cool. 7/10
I appreciate the rating, but what'll get me the extra marks?

[.:Subarusti:.]

well front of the ship (the underneath bit) is to straight and i dunno it looks bare!

[Revis]

The bareness will probably sorted when it's finished. The water needs ripples which i'll do once I can get the bloody things right.

[ItsDave]

Its quite plain. There's not enough to quite, make the scene, so like, and containers on the ship, or other little boats. And maybe fix the waves.

[Revis]

Okie, cheers.

[King-Jark]

:O
thats a big boat!, compare the boat to the train, maybe make the train bigger, or the boat smaller, as well as the building

[Revis]

I think it's the right size, it's just gonna have to be a huge boat.
http://img421.imageshack.us/img421/4502/port24ge.png
Better, or worse?
http://img286.imageshack.us/img286/9360/port27xn.png
Another update.

[King-Jark]

yeah, hat looks much better, cept now the watter marks... i dunno know about so many...

[Revis]

Yeah, i'll delete them when I'm finished if there is too many.

[Roboevil]

The waves aren't parallel to the back walls, I know they don't have to be, but it doesn't look right. Unless, wchich you should do anyway, add an extra lighter tone to the sea for more realism. Also, as it's a cross-section, you should add depth to the sea on the edge. I'm not too keen on the stern is it? The front of the boat, that dark grey line on top of the egde thing of it, it's hard to describe, it looks strange and n00by, like when people shade by adding a dark line around the whole object, and then a lighter one, and a lighter one after that, if you get me o.0. Other than that, it's just little details that I'm sure you'll add in later anyway. Good though, wouldn't expect such intricacy from you.

[Revis]

I added the third wall to finish the cross-section, I might add a huge lock as the 4th wall to box it in which should also block the front of the ship from view. The grey line around the black on the boat should be a rail and I actually like that effect on this.

[Roboevil]

The grey line around the black on the boat should be a rail and I actually like that effect on this.
Oh, you could raise it slightly? Or make it seem railed by adding like 1 pixel per every 2 along, it'll make it look spiked if you know?

[pechie100]

hmm
good so far

[Revis]

Oh, you could raise it slightly? Or make it seem railed by adding like 1 pixel per every 2 along, it'll make it look spiked if you know?
Yeah, i'll try some stuff out when I next work on it, I don't have much time over the next week...

[Kasabian]

- Train should be Bigger
- Should see the bottom of the boat & sub in the water(I know it's hard but is has to be done.

On the whole, 7/10 so far

- Stealth

[Jay™]

Its going on well, the only thing i will point out is that it isnt very proportional, the freight train is nearly bigger then the buildings, so is the sumbarine.
8/10

[Jasmin]

I think it's nice, i think the ripples or waves in the water, are a bit to huge, and maybe dark, ripples are like shiney o.O unless i have colour problems,>.<
I think the ship looks nice, but the trains to small :o Maybe add some lifeboats, or some builders or something =] It's cute so far,
i spy a pixel error xD
http://img490.imageshack.us/img490/5219/pixelerrorrrrrr7kg.png (http://imageshack.us)
Unless it's supposed to be there..

[Revis]

http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/5426/port20ci.png
Gone =]

[Jasmin]

xD Yay, w00tness
Looks hot now

[Jay™]

Tis better. The building on the left looks as if its floating, add roads / water...
9/10

[Catchetat]

need bold lines and detail for the ship and the waters

overal rate = 7/10

[Revis]

What? Black lines on the outer edges on shapes? That'll make it look stupid. I'll sort the other building out when I make more, i'm at my mums and the wireless mouse is so jerky, it's impossible to work with.

[viperkyle1]

im liking it alot =]

[Joe.]

lol i think its nice, :o

mabye improve the graphics on the boat

[Revis]

Can you say how to improve them instead of just saying improve?

[Revis]

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/4196/port7bf.png
Improved yet again.

[Adam$]

Not bad, but the one you sent me on MSN was better.

Edit: Just realised that was the one you updated. :p

[babeloverchris]

Can you explain this one part to me?
http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/6040/boat18nh.png

Sorry but im not quite sure whats going on there... At first i thought it was a pixel error because it appears... I dont know.. its really hard to explain.. but then I thought it was an over hang on the boat... but then I was confused as to what it was. So yeah.. but aside from that part that looks weird to me, 9/10. Nice :)

[Kyle.tk]

I know this is edited from one of your old ones, but i like the way this looks. You might not but eh.

[Craig]

Tis ace xD

[Revis]

I know this is edited from one of your old ones, but i like the way this looks. You might not but eh.
Dam Kyle, that looks much better, I might change it to that later. And yeah, it's spoed to be a walkway/overhang.

[DJ-Snax]

Nice I Like It :D +Rep

[Revis]

Last update for a bit. I've added Ak Motors :p
http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/2932/port1tr.png
I'm going on the basis that people are 2 pixels tall, and that a one story building is 5 pixels tall. That sound/look ok?
http://img462.imageshack.us/img462/1857/port5lm.png