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[Revis]

http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/3386/port43bl.png
Erm, Ideas/CC are needed, alot. I don't want ratings as they don't help.

[Scriptermone]

The long bit coming out from the water/submarine could be an air strip?

C+C. Its very good overall so far, but do what I said above ^^

[Revis]

Yeah, thats why I made it, just couldn't get the bloody plane right >=[

[Scriptermone]

Make the like random white lines to show it is a runway first, and some people with those glowy things in their hands *doesn't know what they're called*

[Chaz]

Mabey Stick some cars on it?

[Revis]

Make the like random white lines to show it is a runway first, and some people with those glowy things in their hands *doesn't know what they're called*
Problem with the people is that due to the scale, the people are 2 pixels tall, so you can't add detail to them, but the white lines are a plan.

[Jay™]

Woah, its grown a lot... umm.
Make a truck getting searched ?
Helipad ?
Stuff like that
Army stuff :D

[ixxel]

I like the water =)
but why is the ship black inlined? because you don't do that anywhere else.
edit: so is the little wall around the grey little square.
shading is pretty basic, add some texture
You change your center to often.
You don't stick to the patern, you just place buildings where you like them.
The crane ,well it looks bad.
The platform on the ship looks weird.. to thin.
http://www.freewebtown.com/audiotrash/wrong.png
Overall, allot of pixel errors. You wanted constructive critisme, well here you have it :p

[Revis]

Cheers dude, someone has already pointed out the ship outline on a different thread which I'll probably do towards the end. I had difficulties making the crane but i've just seen some ideas which I'll probably add. The building alignment and center line are petty things which I didn't notice but will change and I'll add texture when Im finished.

[Catchetat]

enhance ship outline with deeper borders and fix those pixel errors

[Adam$]

Yeah, thats why I made it, just couldn't get the bloody plane right >=[
Do it without the plane. Anyway, excellent job. You should just add some surroundings where the white area is.

[Revis]

http://img417.imageshack.us/img417/6865/port47mg.png
Think I've sorted some of your points Mr.Ixxel.

[ixxel]

Looks better :) good job.
few more things, the "gate" in front of the submarine.. is wrong i don't know if it's the point ,but you forgot to make an angle at the botom, like you did on the upper bit.
and right in front of the boat, you got a small glitch in the wall :p

greetZ - Ixxel

[Revis]

Cheers for that, sorted them. I'll upload it when i've done more, i'm just trying something else out atm.

[Concentric]

It looks great so far, just keep adding more detail like little soldiers, trucks, tanks and stuff. I like the airstrip idea.