A Poem I Wront ^^ Rate Pleaseee

[Hannaa]

Tears of blood

Tears of blood
A heart of stone,
Lost and cold and all alone,
Silent yet you scream in pain,
When darkness falls on you again.

I watch and see what you've become,
The twisting path down which you've gone,
And knowing you wer'ent meant to be
The souless monster that I see
Hurts more then the foul deeds you've done.

I know that once you laughed and smiled.
I know that once you cared,
I know that this was meant to be-
But no-one was prepared.

I didn't know it hurt so much
To lose you in this way,
I didn't know the pain gets worse, every single day.

You sit there,
Far away from me,
And yet so very close,
As silent and unsmiling as a spirit or a ghost.
And as I look at you, I think,
You never would have thought,
That such a gentle person could make me so distraught.

But no longer are you gentle, or caring, or kind,
Even when I strain my eyes, I see no beauty inside.
You've lost yourself in hatred, you never will come out,
You've forgotten all the things that we used to talk about.

And it's wrong of me to give up hope,
It's wrong of me to cry,
But I know that even though you're living,
Inside you'll start to die.

But you go on sitting there,
Wrapped in smoke and choking fumes,
You know but you don't care
That this despair consumes.

And if you go on as you are,
If you don't look for the light,
Then lost and gone forever
Will be everything that's bright.

RATE PLEASEEE <3 :D

[Hannaa]

I spelt the title thing wrong :l **Wrote

[Lissie152]

Awww thats lovely hun x x Very creative..and nicely written

[Hannaa]

Awww thats lovely hun x x Very creative..and nicely written
^^ Thanks.

[t0tsy]

That's.. like pretty good. I mean I try to write and I just sux..

well done looks like you have talent =]

[Hannaa]

I'm not THAT good at writing poemsssss.
I think the one I posted was pretty... bad!

[t0tsy]

I'm not THAT good at writing poemsssss.
I think the one I posted was pretty... bad!

I thought it was ok...

[SHEEPY]

Why do you have to write sad poems? what's wrong with picking flowers and cuddling fluffy bunnies?

[Hannaa]

I thought it was ok...

*Shrugs*

[t0tsy]

picking flowers and cuddling fluffy bunnies?

Awwwwww

[Hannaa]

Why do you have to write sad poems? what's wro
ng with picking flowers and cuddling fluffy bunnies?

LOL.
WELL.. I write poems about what I know.. And stuff that means something to me.. And maybe i'm not the 'Picking flowers and cuddling fluffy bunnies' kind of person?
LMAO.

[t0tsy]

LOL.
WELL.. I write poems about what I know.. And stuff that means something to me.. And maybe i'm not the 'Picking flowers and cuddling fluffy bunnies' kind of person?
LMAO.
I'm gonna write a song about picking flowers and cuddling fluffy bunnies

[Hannaa]

I'm gonna write a song about picking flowers and cuddling fluffy bunnies

Well lucky you ^^

[SHEEPY]

I'm gonna write a song about picking flowers and cuddling fluffy bunnies

I look forward to that.

[Hannaa]

I look forward to that.

Same here.

[Craig]

Wrong section but nice poem. I heard the first lines before somewhere tho ;s

[t0tsy]

Well lucky you ^^
hahaha you have to read it!!

Flower and bunny

Picking flowers?
Such a thief!
Leave them alone
don't pick and cause grief!
Poor little flowers
left to die and decay
maybe you'll realise some day!

When you cuddle a little cuddly bunny it's so cute.
Sheepy loves the bunnies.
Would never kick them with a boot.
Bunnies are so wonderful
we love them all
so never be mean to a bunny
or we'll all catch you
and make you fall....

erm there pmsl ;']

[Hannaa]

Wrong section but nice poem. I heard the first lines before somewhere tho ;s

My mate done the first verse for me ^^ Where should I post poems then..?

[Hannaa]

hahaha you have to read it!!

Flower and bunny

Picking flowers?
Such a thief!
Leave them alone
don't pick and cause grief!
Poor little flowers
left to die and decay
maybe you'll realise some day!

When you cuddle a little cuddly bunny it's so cute.
Sheepy loves the bunnies.
Would never kick them with a boot.
Bunnies are so wonderful
we love them all
so never be mean to a bunny
or we'll all catch you
and make you fall....

erm there pmsl ;']

ROFL.
THATS BRILLIANT! :rolleyes:

[t0tsy]

ROFL.
THATS BRILLIANT! :rolleyes:
roflmao ;']

[Hannaa]

roflmao ;']

No seriously it is ;']
I'm gonna write one about fluffy bunnys, clouds, blue skys, picking flowers blah blah blah.

[SHEEPY]

That almost brings a tear to my eyes.

[t0tsy]

No seriously it is ;']
I'm gonna write one about fluffy bunnys, clouds, blue skys, picking flowers blah blah blah.
Is it? omg lol i didnt even try with it xD!
you should see my other songs (serious-world-issue-ones-and-politic-things) lol


That almost brings a tear to my eyes.
Aww. If you cried, I'd cry too ;']

[Hannaa]

Is it? omg lol i didnt even try with it xD!
you should see my other songs (serious-world-issue-ones-and-politic-things) lol


Aww. If you cried, I'd cry too ;']

I'm just writing one now ;]

[t0tsy]

I'm just writing one now ;]
Okey :) Brb I'm hungry. Hey, food- I wrote a song on beans once.. pretty oisum <3

[Hannaa]

Okay, here it comesss.
Skipping threw the long fresh grass,
Picking flowers, on her way to class? [LMAO]
Smelling the fresh, summer air,
And there it is,
A fluffy cuddly teddy bear,
She picks it up, and holds it tight,
Through morning and night?
That took me 2 mins :']

[t0tsy]

Okay, here it comesss.
Skipping threw the long fresh grass,
Picking flowers, on her way to class? [LMAO]
Smelling the fresh, summer air,
And there it is,
A fluffy cuddly teddy bear,
She picks it up, and holds it tight,
Through morning and night?
That took me 2 mins :']
Awwww wow that is dead sweet lol :P

[SHEEPY]

Makes you feel nice a warm inside.

[t0tsy]

Makes you feel nice a warm inside.
Or makes you look queer ROFLMAO

[SHEEPY]

Or makes you look queer ROFLMAO

Bahaha, he told me he was big.

[t0tsy]

Bahaha, he told me he was big.
Oh my lord! :o

[Hannaa]

Or makes you look queer ROFLMAO
Lmao..
What are your habbo names?

[t0tsy]

Lmao..
What are your habbo names?
;') Jah.

AngJum2002! (Noobish, I know.)

[SHEEPY]

Lmao..
What are your habbo names?

chainsaw. i'm hardly ever on habbo though.

[t0tsy]

chainsaw. i'm hardly ever on habbo though.
Your last post confused and scared me at the same time :O


Bahaha, he told me he was big.

[Hannaa]

Okayy.
Mine's lellow-
just incase any of you wanted to know :)

[t0tsy]

Okayy.
Mine's lellow-
just incase any of you wanted to know :)
Thanking you. I'll add yah.

[Hannaa]

Thanking you. I'll add yah.
;]
I didn't know that SHEEP person was a guy..
I thought he was girl..

[t0tsy]

;]
I didn't know that SHEEP person was a guy..
I thought he was girl..
Ohgoodnesspls.
I hope he doesn't read that lolz ;']

(It may touch a nerve)

[SHEEPY]

and there's me, thinking you were both girls.

[Hannaa]

and there's me, thinking you were both girls.
LMAO SORRY.
But when you came out with 'Why not write about picking flowers and fluffy bunnys'
It made me thing you were a girl :rolleyes:

[t0tsy]

and there's me, thinking you were both girls.

Ha, very funny.