View Full Version : Undiscovered Island.
Embean
12-01-2006, 07:24 PM
Chapter 1
I was 8 when I first got into geography.Everyday when I went to school, I was always looking forward to learning about new things around the world.
As I grew older and older, I knew i'd want a future career as a geography teacher. On my 12th birthday, I got the most amazing shock of my life, I was going to Africa. I'd never been to a hot country, and I'd always wanted to go to Africa. We were going in a few weeks time, so I had to get all my things ready. A few weeks later, we we're at the airport, in the queue to give in our passports. We went onto a really posh plane, and it had playstation 2's in the back of the seats aswell! Half way through the night on the plane, I started to feel really sick. The pilot started to speak through a microphone. There was going to be a slight turbulance, but I had never expected what was to come later on that night...
To be continued.
Addie
12-01-2006, 09:50 PM
:o MOREEEEEEEEEEEEE 10/10 :o
Embean
18-01-2006, 11:33 AM
Chapter 2:
I quickly buckled up my seatbelt, and just sat there, with my eyes closed. Praying. Praying that nothing would happen. I'd watched all the movies and real life stories of plane crashes, but I always knew nothing like that would ever happen to me. I just sat there, for hours, waiting till we arrived at Africa.
My mum suddenly touched my hand, as the whole passengers screamed as the plane jerked us from side to side. I looked out the window, all I could see was dark clouds and blackness.
Then, we heard silence. Everybody had gone quiet, as the engine switched itself off. Tears were starting to stream down my pale cheeks, I just wanted to die peacefully, not like this. I closed my eyes, and fell asleep.
I woke up by the sound of screaming, I could see more light outside, I looked downwards out of the window. All I could see was hundreds of miles of water. I knew I wasn't going to die because of a plane crash, I now knew I was going to drown.
letsdance6
18-01-2006, 04:28 PM
Ooooo Can't wait for more O.O
10/10 So far :P
Embean
18-01-2006, 09:22 PM
Chapter 3:
'Please, tell me this is a dream' I thought to myself.
Everybody were just screaming for their lives. There was a little girl who sat on the row beside me. She was crying her eyes out, I looked up at a woman who had something wrong with her, it was her mother.
She stared at me with eyes of water. 'Help me' she cried out to me.
All of a sudden, with a large jerk, a suitcase came falling down from a cabinet ontop of her, and hit her on the head, killed her.
I looked towards my mum, 'No matter what happens to me, I will always love you, you mean the world to me, and I couldn't wish for a better family' I said to her.
With a massive pull of gravity, there was a stop. I looked out the window, and I could see sand and the sea. I undid my seatbelt, and I took my mother's hand as she lead me out of the plane. I walked down the corridor, with broken T.V screens in the back of the seats, and people that we're either dead or unconsious, I walked down to a smashed in window near the front of the plane, and I lined up behind a few other passengers, to get out of the horrible death trap.
Addie
18-01-2006, 09:29 PM
MOREEEE<3 Its looking like the next LOST ;D
Embean
18-01-2006, 09:31 PM
MOREEEE<3 Its looking like the next LOST ;D
Yep, It's King Kong/Lost. :D
Addie
18-01-2006, 09:35 PM
Yep, It's King Kong/Lost. :D
Ah. I'm gonna start writing more soon :) MORE!
Embean
18-01-2006, 09:38 PM
Will sooon :)
Embean
19-01-2006, 10:24 AM
Chapter 4:
I walked out onto the soily sand, all around me was just the clear, blue ocean, sand, and tree's that went into a far off distance.
I walked up to my mother, 'Mum, where are we?'
She replied, 'I don't have any idea, Isabel.'
She gave me a map, 'Look at this, see if you can figure out where we've landed'
'Lets see,' I said to myself, 'So we flew out of Manchester Airport, and started travelling over the Atlantic'
I remembered, that when I looked out of the window when we were crashing, all I could see was water. I looked on the map for any little island's in the middle of the ocean. 'None!'
There werent any island's in sight!
My stomach turned a couple of times, and I got up off the sand.
'Mum..' I began, 'Not only have we crashed onto a island we don't know about.. we've also crashed on island that doesn't exsist!'
SHEEPY
19-01-2006, 10:33 AM
Utterly woeful story.
Embean
19-01-2006, 11:02 AM
Utterly woeful story.
Isn't it? :rolleyes:
May I just ask you a question?
Why do you spend your time on here?
If you hate it so much?
You have 500 something posts, and all them posts are made up of rude and trashy comments to peoples stories/other threads.
You need to get a life, it's so much better off than posts horrid comments to people. You never know, maybe you'll grow out of it and get some friends.
And fine if you dont like my story, because im not writing it just to impress you. Some people enjoy reading my stories.
So if you don't like it, don't post in my thread.
I'm no longer going to waste my time on you because theres no point, seeing as your just childish and pathetic.
Addie
19-01-2006, 11:42 AM
Isn't it? :rolleyes:
May I just ask you a question?
Why do you spend your time on here?
If you hate it so much?
You have 500 something posts, and all them posts are made up of rude and trashy comments to peoples stories/other threads.
You need to get a life, it's so much better off than posts horrid comments to people. You never know, maybe you'll grow out of it and get some friends.
And fine if you dont like my story, because im not writing it just to impress you. Some people enjoy reading my stories.
So if you don't like it, don't post in my thread.
I'm no longer going to waste my time on you because theres no point, seeing as your just childish and pathetic.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
But I lovedddddddddd it! Moreeeeee<3 I'm gonna start writing one :)
SHEEPY
19-01-2006, 12:15 PM
It's okay to cry.
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