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:Bleh
12-01-2006, 10:27 PM
Him

All through the day he ignores me,
He takes my friends away,
Why do they choose him?
I have known them for so much longer,
I used to be so good.
Am i really a bad person?
They all used to be there for me,
But since him.
He was the one that did thism
If only, if only, i could rewind time,
If only, if only, i hadn't done it.
Then you woudn't abandon me,
For him
I want to be his friend,
But he feels to awkward,
Why must he complicate things?
We used to be so close,
Now i feel abandoned, alone,
in this vicious world.
What am i to do if you all leave me?
For him.

That poem was about my ex and how i feel he is taking my friends away.

Why is life so mucked up,
What have i done to deserve this?
I would do anything to make life right,
I just need to know.
They don't seem to notice,
They don't seem to care,
Hidden behind a fake smile,
Is lots of misery and ware,
My life is not perfect,
Not the way it seems,
I have learnt to hide it,
Make sure no one knows,
I have feelings to.
So much pain is in me,
I stay and help a friend in need,
But you are with him,
This is not what i planned.
You all claim to still like me,
You all claim to still care,
Friends Forever is what you say,
But i know to be aware,
You don't know what he's like,
Slowly taking you away,
You don't realise,
Your so perfect.

Thats a poem about my friends and ex. And how i hide my feelings. If i think of more poems i'll add them. Comment but be constructive with critisism and also i do relise they don't rhyme.

ilovejordan
12-01-2006, 11:02 PM
I think their wicked :o + rep and oh yeah do some happy ones :)

littlewilsy
13-01-2006, 02:06 AM
i think its horrible tbh
gg

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