First Alt - DeskTop PC

[.:TeamAmerica:.]

This is my very first alt. Took me about 30 minutes to do it. There are a few dodgey things on it like the mouse and on/off switch but please rate.
http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/3276/alt1comptureanddeskalt8ip.png

[Clinky]

It's ok for your first alt except it looks a bit bland and dull plus the screen looks as thin as paper. You could improve it by making the monitor thicker and by adding detail to the hard-drive with buttons etc.

5/10

[Laura.]

It is good for a first alt.

It would of been better if you maybe changed the colour of either the desk.. or even the computer, as it is hard to see. Also, maybe add more detail to the hard drive buttons ;)

5/10