Need help - Badly Please

[Laura.]

In English, we have to write a speech, the thing is, is ive done everything, and ive figured out my introduction, is carp. I hate it. This is what it is at the moment;

Smoking is a big issue in the UK, with just over a quarter of the popualtion smoking. Do you like it when you walk into a place, and you get hit with a cloud of smoke, and you start to cough, and you smell like that untill your clothes get washed? There are many chemicals in a cigerette.. Lets just say 4000 odd. Britain needs to cut down, slow down with the amount of cigerettes, Britain smoke a day.

Can anyone help me make it a near perfect introduction?

+ rep if you help me <3

[Adam$]

Don't know if it's just me but that's a good intro. O_O

[Seatherny]

In English, we have to write a speech, the thing is, is ive done everything, and ive figured out my introduction, is carp. I hate it. This is what it is at the moment;

Smoking is a big issue in the UK, with just over a quarter of the popualtion smoking. Do you like it when you walk into a place, and you get hit with a cloud of smoke, and you start to cough, and you smell like that untill your clothes get washed? There are many chemicals in a cigerette.. Lets just say 4000 odd. Britain needs to cut down, slow down with the amount of cigerettes, Britain smoke a day.

Can anyone help me make it a near perfect introduction?

+ rep if you help me <3

You do know that crap has been unfiltered. anyway, this link should help
http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=125808
anyway, thats a great introduction.

[issaa.]

Don't know if it's just me but that's a good intro. O_O
I agree with that. 0.o

[Laura.]

You do know that crap has been unfiltered. anyway, this link should help
http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=125808 Ive tried that. Therees where i got half of my information from. ;o I never knew it was u/f

[dittobrain]

Smoking is a massive issue in the UK, and it has been for many years. Over a quarter of the British population smoke and it is seriously affecting our lives. The main problem with smoking is it's serious health risk; people who smoke have a much higher chance of developing chronic diseases such as bronchitis or lung cancer, which can often be fatal. The goveremnt have been trying to crack down on smoking, but how can we help?

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[joe:-,]

Im not sure :(
But good luck with it
and your sig used to have much more names :o

[Laura.]

Im not sure :(
But good luck with it
and your sig used to have much more names :o Lol I know. I deleted the ones I didnt want :eusa_ange

[Seatherny]

Smoking is a massive issue in the UK, and it has been for many years. Over a quarter of the British population smoke and it is seriously affecting our lives. The main problem with smoking is it's serious health risk; people who smoke have a much higher chance of developing chronic diseases such as bronchitis or lung cancer, which can often be fatal. The goveremnt have been trying to crack down on smoking, but how can we help?

;]]

thats fab
even thought it isnt my hw, +rep lol

[joe:-,]

Aw i have stayed there and second on the list :)

[Laura.]

Aw i have stayed there and second on the list :) Lol. I couldnt chose between you and Rupsie, So I did eeni meeni mini mo. :d


Thanks for the into :D I shall +, rep you.

[dittobrain]

Lol no problem, hope it helps :) Just random frooble I came up with on the spur of the moment.

[Laura.]

Lol no problem, hope it helps :) Just random frooble I came up with on the spur of the moment. Its really good though. :).

Im crapping my self about this speach tomorrow though. ;[

[joe:-,]

I wil rep you also for helping dearest lozza

[dittobrain]

Its really good though. :).

Im crapping my self about this speach tomorrow though. ;[

Do you have to do it in front of a lot of people? Just practice it slowly in front of the mirror or something and eat lots of breakfast to keep energy levels up.

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[Laura.]

I wil rep you also for helping dearest lozza Aww Ty. Wow, this dude has recieved near 10 rep, from one post.

[dittobrain]

if your talk is anything like that intro, dont expect a good grade for it.

My intro or Laura's?

[Laura.]

Do you have to do it in front of a lot of people? Just practice it slowly in front of the mirror or something and eat lots of breakfast to keep energy levels up.

I have it tomorrow morning. My eeth hurt as i had my braces changed today. So im taking paracetmol into school tomorrow. And Ive gotta do it infront of a class of 30

[Steven.]

Good luck <33 im no good at speaches ;)

[dittobrain]

I have it tomorrow morning. My eeth hurt as i had my braces changed today. So im taking paracetmol into school tomorrow. And Ive gotta do it infront of a class of 30

Well it's easier to do it if it's in front of your own class who you know well. Is everyone doing one? If so, try be one of the first because a) you get it over with b) the people who haven't done theirs yet will be nervous and won't really notice if anything goes wrong c) they won't compare it with the other speeches

[Laura.]

Good luck <33 im no good at speaches ;) Thanks ste. Ill try my best tomorrow. My best mate isnt in tomorrow, so she doesnt have to do it, or she might, when she gets back Looool.


Well it's easier to do it if it's in front of your own class who you know well. Is everyone doing one? If so, try be one of the first because a) you get it over with b) the people who haven't done theirs yet will be nervous and won't really notice if anything goes wrong c) they won't compare it with the other speeches

Well a few weeks back, we did this test and the lower you got the first you would go. I got 8/25 :rolleyes: So im going to be on of the first 10 people maybe. I would rather go 1st than last aswell.

[dittobrain]

Well that's a good thing I guess :p

[Laura.]

Well that's a good thing I guess :p Yups. I just want to get it over and done with. Its been stressing me out for the last 2 weeks.

[dittobrain]

good good, it'll all be over by lunchtime :eusa_danc

[Laura.]

I just hope im not kept to do it on the Wednesday.

[Laura.]

- Double post i know-

This is my speach. I believe I can tell you cos you helped me with my intoduction.

Smoking is a massive problem in the Uk with just over a quarter of the population smoking, this is seriously affecting peoples lives. The main problems that smoking causes is that it is a serious health risk and increases your risk of getting diseases like; Bronchitus and cancers. The government are trying to crack down on smoking, but how can we help?

Passive smoking is a large issue in the Uk. A risk for everyone, nearly everwhere. A near 30,000 die a year from passive which is a quarter of passive smokers. But a large 114,000 smoke a year. Children's risk of being born disabled, are increased if the parents smoke. They might also think that smoking is best for them and start before the legal age, which is 16.

A cigerette contains over 4,000 chemicals that are harmful. These include;
Nicotine - An addictive drug, and a deadly poison
Arsenic - Used in rat poison
Methane - A componant of rocket fuel
Ammonia - Found in floor cleaner
Cadmium - Used in batteries
Carbon monoxide - What comes out of car exhaust
Formaldehyde - Used to preserve body tissue
Butane - Lighter fluid
Hydrogen Cyanide - The poison used in gas chambers.

Everytime someone inhales from a cigerette the air sacks in their lungs get damaged, and die. Also the Cilia which is the lining of the lungs gets paralysed.


I still have the Conclusion to do, which is the hardest bit - Gotta wrap everything up. Ill try and do it now. But how is that so far?

[PonyboyCurtis]

Smoking. One of the most original, boring threads, that knowbody gives a rats bobba about.

[Laura.]

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