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:Bleh
18-01-2006, 08:52 PM
Okay, most of you don't like my poems and stuff coz they are 'depressing' but some people do. And im gonna post my songs anyway :P They are all really old before i started goign out with my ex. But oh well,

Whisper

I heard a whisper,
and it told me,
you are the best one,
i ever fancied.

It told a tale,
that needn't be told,
but it will stay with me,
until im old.

It said you liked me,
as more than a friend,
but should i get hyper?
I'll be heart broken by the end.

You know i like you,
And i won't deny,
but im not fool proof,
Are you the right guy?

Im not okay with you making my heart flutter,
For every time you go a piece of my heart shatters,
but really, what can i do?

You push me down and break my heart,
but it's not you're fault,
You pick me up, but it won't help,
Coz i already lost myself.
I love you so, but you already know,
How can i prove myself..

(Repeat verse 1)

Okay, it's not good, just a stupid song. I was gonna post my other two but the post will end up too long lol. I'll try put it. It's also a stupid one ;]
The guy i like

I got the guy i really wanted,
But im not sure if it's the best,
He chose me over the others,
but they have experience (eww, that sounds bad now)
And now it's really awkward,
Coz we don't know what to say,
to each other, and on it goes day by daaaay,

He said he liked me and i like him too,
But we don't know how to act or what to dooo,

Thats only half a song :P I never made the rest. Haha.

thesnowflake
28-01-2006, 10:03 AM
These are ok, but quite tedious...
and flutter and shatter dont rhyme lol

GJay
03-02-2006, 12:23 PM
meh i remember writing songs like that when i was like 13 when i had no crushes...as time goes by, the songs have no meaning. Before I would have liked that, but now, no sorry love, needs more maturity in it.

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