'AoJ' Studios (MUST SEE)

[kobi626]

Hello.

As I think the thread was removed.. I'll re post it ;)

Anyway This alt, In my opinion so far is my best alt. It took me over 4 hours to make it. No lies. I worked on it tons of time.

If you cannot understand, This days i'm making a flash show called 'AOJ' (Adventures of Jessica) which is placed at www.the-bec.net

The alt contain few rooms:
-: Main room above
-: Make up, Costumes and decorations room (Cptn.kewl - the show's pixel artist placed there, and one of the shows characters)
-: Tech & Control room ( LuckyRare - BEC's owner & Jackolusss - BEC owner aswell and the show's animator placed there)
-: Filming area (Me - Show's director placed there and one of the shows characters)

Anyway, Few mentions about the alt:
The red dragon, Crystal ball, Skeleton costume & Candle habbo was made by Cptn.kewl which is my show's pixel artist.
Also
The ghost costume was made by Roboevil which let me use it for my show.

PLEASE do not be harsh. Rate out of /10. Be nice.

http://img275.imageshack.us/img275/5628/aojoffices7wq.png

[Mxrt]

OMG that is BRILLIANT. There are a few pixel errors, but only 2. Basically, all I'm saying is

ELITES.

[brodeo]

Are you blind?
6/10, mostly basic PA. This has been posted before, don't put us through it twice.

[Mxrt]

No I am not blind but I can see you are!!!

[kobi626]

Are you blind?
6/10, mostly basic PA. This has been posted before, don't put us through it twice.

I so like people that aren't reading everything, and then blame you on nothing :rolleyes: .. As I said ALLREADY I thought and still think that my post been removed cus the forums backups and that's why I reposted the thread.

Second thin, I highly don't think that my alt is basic. I don't think it desrves 6/10, and I think your just being jealous.

But of course, that's only my opinion. Thanks <3

[Mr.Sam]

i think a bit more care could be taken;

for example the shadows are the wrong shame and many are the wrong shape.
some items such as the bush's on the top floor and the stickers on the left room could be improved.

7/10 | Good effort :)

[IAtePants]

Nice Im Liking It Parts I Like Most

The Hair Mop Great Idea :)
The Mirror <3
And The Costume Hanger

Bad Parts :(

Horrible Colours I Think Sorry
Lack Of Shading Sorry

I Give It 7/10 Great Try

P.s. Loving The Show <3

[ItsDave]

The shadows are horrible. The mirro needs tons of work with lighter colouring and better lines. The black tables... what happened? Too little shades of blue for the ball, the floor is horribly un-shaded and the wall needs a diffrent colour than MS Paints default blue. 6/10

[brodeo]

Second thin, I highly don't think that my alt is basic. I don't think it desrves 6/10, and I think your just being jealous.

But of course, that's only my opinion. Thanks <3

Should have gone to specsavers. Let's read some of the other comments in this thread.


i think a bit more care could be taken;

Horrible Colours I Think Sorry
Lack Of Shading Sorry

The shadows are horrible. The mirro needs tons of work with lighter colouring and better lines. The black tables... what happened? Too little shades of blue for the ball, the floor is horribly un-shaded and the wall needs a diffrent colour than MS Paints default blue. 6/10

Please shout at these people before directing it completely towards me. Now, for your errors, i thoight i'd point out a view seeing as you seem to be completely oblivious to the fact this alteration should not have been reposted.

http://img371.imageshack.us/img371/6136/kobi11xv.png
Lets explain further:
1. Grey/green line in the floor, shows no effort whatsoever in floor shading.
2. That icky ball thing. What is it? Why is it so poorly shaded? And why does the shading go light/dark/light when it should be getting darker.
3. Who has ever heard of a blue shadow please raise your hand.
4. The stand has some pixel errors in as well as black lines which are not needed, somebody got black line happy in this alteration.
5. A copy and paste mark, it looks like this alteration has been cut out and pasted into the main 'masterpiece' and then poorly coloured in after.

http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/2057/kobi24gx.png
Lets explain a little further:
1. The divide has pixel errors again.
2. What in gods name created this desk? Either somebody got it off a scrap heap or lost their instructions for a flat pack ikea shelf.
3. Who spilled white paint on the desk? I just don't get why there is a white square there. In fact it can't even be paint because it's so square.
4. Everything is black, no shading and to top it off it's outlined in GREY.
5. That amazing floor again. Next time you print screen a habbo room put in the effort of colouring in ALL of floor? And maybe so the colour do not clash as bad.

And as for the me being terribly jealous of your alteration please take that thought out of your head immediatly. Hey, maybe you can check out and comment on one of my recent alterations sometime:
http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=148150 - Furni Xposed
http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=148283 - Recliner
http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=147966 - Coaster Pieces
http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=147914 - Tea Light

Hey i'm not amazing at alterations, i'm not special at all but at least i don't inflate my own head so much it won't fit out of the door. How do you fit so much self excellence in your post.

[Arth]

Great effort 7.5/10

[Prexis (Neil)]

as far as colourschemes go, it's hideous. the bunnies that look like they could give someone an epileptic fit? they don't help.

as for how it's pieced together... dreadful.

the dreads turned into a mop? that would be a nice idea, if it wasn't for the fact that it's been done 2 or 3 times before (originally on pixeli i think).

the one likeable thing is the dragon. but that's not exactly perfect.

[brodeo]

as far as colourschemes go, it's hideous. the bunnies that look like they could give someone an epileptic fit? they don't help.

as for how it's pieced together... dreadful.

the dreads turned into a mop? that would be a nice idea, if it wasn't for the fact that it's been done 2 or 3 times before (originally on pixeli i think).

the one likeable thing is the dragon. but that's not exactly perfect.

Couldn't have put it better myself, and the dragons not even his. Rofl.

[Menshevik]

Looks fine to me except I don't like the blue.
I think people in this forum are too hyphy on pixel errors.

[brodeo]

Haha. Too hyphy, if habbo shaded like that and made errors like that i doubt many people would be playing.

[kobi626]

Haha. Too hyphy, if habbo shaded like that and made errors like that i doubt many people would be playing.

Would you shut up and stop being evil? god! I tried my best, and I accept critizisem, but not being mean just like your attitude.

Go bugging someone else =\

[lone_wolf]

I have only one comment for it...

Crap

[brodeo]

I have only one comment for it...

Crap

Something we can all agree on...


Would you shut up and stop being evil? god! I tried my best, and I accept critizisem, but not being mean just like your attitude.

Go bugging someone else =\

I'm not being evil, i'm just saying stop telling yourself it's an amazing alt when it isn't by far. And i only said that if habbo had pixel errors all the time people wouldn't play. My comments are similar to many in this thread - so please stop aiming your complaints at me.

[Catchetat]

honestly, this doesnt deserve to go on elites but this is good work :)


pixel errors stated by dollars - you should fix them

overall 7-8/10

[-Wolverine]

Definately not a must see but it's ok.
6.5/10?

[Foxx]

I Like to see people combining alternations together to make something neat, but there are alot of Pixel errors and most were pointed out.. Id say
8/10

[Ekalb]

I have only one comment for it...

Crap
Please don't give abusive comments like that without something to back them up like CC. You havent even tried to explain what is wrong with it.

[lone_wolf]

ahahahha he badded repped me :P (not cpt.kwl)

[brodeo]

Same here. Didn't even put a name. He's given everyone a bad rep who told the truth.

[lone_wolf]

What a funny n00b...

I have to give CC for the comment i gave saying 'crap' well here it is...


Throw it in the bin & dont make an alt again ^_^

[brodeo]

Should have gone to specsavers. Let's read some of the other comments in this thread.





Please shout at these people before directing it completely towards me. Now, for your errors, i thoight i'd point out a view seeing as you seem to be completely oblivious to the fact this alteration should not have been reposted.

http://img371.imageshack.us/img371/6136/kobi11xv.png
Lets explain further:
1. Grey/green line in the floor, shows no effort whatsoever in floor shading.
2. That icky ball thing. What is it? Why is it so poorly shaded? And why does the shading go light/dark/light when it should be getting darker.
3. Who has ever heard of a blue shadow please raise your hand.
4. The stand has some pixel errors in as well as black lines which are not needed, somebody got black line happy in this alteration.
5. A copy and paste mark, it looks like this alteration has been cut out and pasted into the main 'masterpiece' and then poorly coloured in after.

http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/2057/kobi24gx.png
Lets explain a little further:
1. The divide has pixel errors again.
2. What in gods name created this desk? Either somebody got it off a scrap heap or lost their instructions for a flat pack ikea shelf.
3. Who spilled white paint on the desk? I just don't get why there is a white square there. In fact it can't even be paint because it's so square.
4. Everything is black, no shading and to top it off it's outlined in GREY.
5. That amazing floor again. Next time you print screen a habbo room put in the effort of colouring in ALL of floor? And maybe so the colour do not clash as bad.

And as for the me being terribly jealous of your alteration please take that thought out of your head immediatly. Hey, maybe you can check out and comment on one of my recent alterations sometime:
http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=148150 - Furni Xposed
http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=148283 - Recliner
http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=147966 - Coaster Pieces
http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=147914 - Tea Light

Hey i'm not amazing at alterations, i'm not special at all but at least i don't inflate my own head so much it won't fit out of the door. How do you fit so much self excellence in your post.

Just thought i'd quote myself to emphasize the point that this alt is quite bad.

[lone_wolf]

Hahahaha,And he has the cheek to call you jealouse HAHAHAHA

[Piipp]

4/10. It looks good at first, however, once one begins to observe the errors become clear. The shading, the lighting, what were you thinking when you chose those colours? First impression = great. Second look = terrible.

[Dash]

Definatly NOT a must see.
There are many pixil errors (cant be botherd to point them out)
The bunnys make me want to throw up and your shading is atrocious.

[Desjardens]

Rabbits arent the best. 6/10 +Rep

[Mr.Big]

Rabbits arent the best. 6/10 +Rep


you give hime a 6/10 then rep him?

[keister1-2-3]

great, like the colors, dollars was being horrid, overall 9.1'23'/10.0*

[kobi626]

This starting to be stupid.

You two now proved how n00b you are by nagging all the way. Maybe ""I was wrong"" first place, and didn't let you say your nasty comments about my alt (crap), but from then, It just started being a kind of noobs revenge, non stop bad repping me, quoting urself, keep being mean. This showing how noob you are.

You two are sad.

And especially you Dollars, trying to revenge me after we fought , rofl. You make me laugh. I won't say about lone_wolf because I don't think he deserve a comment. He is just another n00b or maybe a clone of yours, I won't be surprised.

[Dreams]

IMO, I hate it. & as you said yeah, you had you're opinion before, well I'll have mine, it lacks shading, it lacks colour co-ordination and ofcourse, it lacks talent.

[Lozzoling]

the only decent thing is that dragon

[brodeo]

This starting to be stupid.

You two now proved how n00b you are by nagging all the way. Maybe ""I was wrong"" first place, and didn't let you say your nasty comments about my alt (crap), but from then, It just started being a kind of noobs revenge, non stop bad repping me, quoting urself, keep being mean. This showing how noob you are.

You two are sad.

And especially you Dollars, trying to revenge me after we fought , rofl. You make me laugh. I won't say about lone_wolf because I don't think he deserve a comment. He is just another n00b or maybe a clone of yours, I won't be surprised.

Despite the fact everyone is agreeing with me?

The sort of comment i expect from a 12 year old though. Kobi, i'm not 'revenging' you as you so stupidly call it, i'm just telling you the truth like evryoner else what a bad alt it is. You're basically calling everyone in this thread a n00b which i highly doubt they are - just because they are disrespecting your poor alt. You sound like the typical immature person who think's everyone is a n00b except them because they are so 'elite', well this is your wake up call.

You are not.

And i only bad repped you once for your rep for me telling the truth. After that i think everyone in this thread bad repped you for your immature attitude.


You iz all n00bs cos my alt is 1337 and u iz all n00bs you two are n00bs the whole world is n00bs go get your make believe clones and get out of my 1337 alts thread all j00 n00bs

[Bear-Max]

Really awful colours, but good overall idea, and if you stick with it it could really be improved.

6/10.

Just remember, that is above average. All too often these days, people seem to think that 6 or 7/10 means something is bad.

[Webhamster]

I have to say, you've put effort in, but the black and blue is not working, try finding a dark blue off of habbo, use that one. :)

[Colourful™]

I'll get the criticism out of the way first. A lot of things on your alteration look out of proportion and as Dollars has excellantly spotted, there are a lot of tiny mistakes. The shading on the fountain could also improve.
Overall it is a great piece of work and must of taken a long time, so i'll give you a 8.5/10.

[Kasabian]

When does Furniture cast a Light Blue Shadow on a Dark Blue Floor?

Agree 100% with Dollars.

[Crocopix]

that isn't a ''must see''
thats a ''throw it in a bin''

[Liberation]

Ye!
I like that....Mayb some errors to pick up on but i really do like it...
I would rate it 8/10....

[Sapphire007.]

The ball on the top level has bad shading the shadows are the wrong shade, some of the furni has no shading either, but I like the dragon. 7/10

[brodeo]

The ball on the top level has bad shading the shadows are the wrong shade, some of the furni has no shading either, but I like the dragon. 7/10

Dragons not his :)

[NintendoFreak]

Despite the fact everyone is agreeing with me?

The sort of comment i expect from a 12 year old though. Kobi, i'm not 'revenging' you as you so stupidly call it, i'm just telling you the truth like evryoner else what a bad alt it is. You're basically calling everyone in this thread a n00b which i highly doubt they are - just because they are disrespecting your poor alt. You sound like the typical immature person who think's everyone is a n00b except them because they are so 'elite', well this is your wake up call.

You are not.

And i only bad repped you once for your rep for me telling the truth. After that i think everyone in this thread bad repped you for your immature attitude.



Ok I see your point but If your beloved pet dog had just died beacuse it was old you wouldn't expect people to come and say "Hahaha your old mut died" AGAIN AND AGAIN AND AGAIN AND AGAIN Im using that to display the fact that you keep posting the same load of crap so just stop fighting he admits he got it wrong big deal don't keep being big and forcing you power by reposting and quoting what youv'e all ready said.

:// This is honestly' truly pathetic fighting over pixels.....:rolleyes:

[Bouncing]

Oh for god sakes, except for the mistakes its BRILLIANT no doubt about it!

[kobi626]

Thank you folks from above :eusa_clap I really needed this support :rolleyes:

[blaster.]

Thank you folks from above :eusa_clap I really needed this support :rolleyes:
Its a sext alt
well done <3
REP 4 U

[Art]

Ok I see your point but If your beloved pet dog had just died beacuse it was old you wouldn't expect people to come and say "Hahaha your old mut died" AGAIN AND AGAIN AND AGAIN AND AGAIN Im using that to display the fact that you keep posting the same load of crap so just stop fighting he admits he got it wrong big deal don't keep being big and forcing you power by reposting and quoting what youv'e all ready said.

:// This is honestly' truly pathetic fighting over pixels.....:rolleyes:

Thanks for bumping :eusa_wall

[foxyfox00]

Its A Really Really Good Try. Id Say 7.5/10.
The Shading Is Not The Best. And The Floors Need Work.
For Effort 9/10

[iluvben]

Its good but you could of put more effort into the plants and the big blue water display at the top as the edges are really dodgey and same for the changing room curtain it needs 100% more shading apart from that its quite good 8/10

[NintendoFreak]

My little brother whos 9 recolured it for you.http://i3.tinypic.com/vwq1qo.png the red tiles are the sets.

[Vibe]

6/10 sorry i don't like it ;-]

[Vibe]

And maybe adding pillars so it looks like the 2nd floor is being held up well ;)

[ReviewDude]

I'm not particularly keen, but it's not bad. I don't like the bunnies though, they freak me out...

7/10

[Everlong]

Its exactly the same layout as the habbox office room in the elite, but i dnt know if it was him that made it or not :S... ill check lol

[Lozzoling]

the floor is ABOMINABLE,couldn't u be BOTHERED to go over the grey-green lines between the squares

[Crimson]

I think alot more time needs to be taken on this. the only things you have done is creat about 8 bad quality alts of your own. the rest are recolours and items taken from the different habbo homepages. The floor for example;
You havnt spent any time on, most likely, because you can still see the grey flooring from the previous floor.

overall - 4/10but for effort - 6/10

[blaster.]

My little brother whos 9 recolured it for you.http://i3.tinypic.com/vwq1qo.png the red tiles are the sets.
Ask the creator of the alt for premisson before editing it :l
And the old
"My brother recoloured it"
:l

[kobi626]

Its exactly the same layout as the habbox office room in the elite, but i dnt know if it was him that made it or not :S... ill check lol

1. WHAT?! The layout is different.. Why ur saying stupid stuff with no base? =\

2. I made this.. You think I'v ripped an alt about MY flash show? Pmsl.

[Ekalb]

Its exactly the same layout as the habbox office room in the elite, but i dnt know if it was him that made it or not :S... ill check lol
Its completely different.
For starters this one doesnt even have staairs, Roboevil's offices only has 3 sections whereas this has four, the bottom section of Roboevil's is allot smaller and doesnt go very far under the rooms above it whereas the bottom room in this is allot bigger and goes far under the rooms above it. Check before you accuse.

Ask the creator of the alt for premisson before editing it
You try to act superiror to him but fail dismaly. You dont need permission if you edit it for Constructive Critisism and you dont claim it as your own. Its like you writing a song and a friend of yours thinks of a better word to go in it - He isnt ripping it because he edited it for construction critisism.

[Revolve]

I really do think all you guys need to give him a break.

He has obviously tried his very best, and if you're just going to go into the finest detail to go against him over an alt... then that says an awful lot about you. I think the theme is very good. If you change a few colours and shading then it'd be an excellent alt.
Overall, well done.

[kobi626]

I really do think all you guys need to give him a break.

He has obviously tried his very best, and if you're just going to go into the finest detail to go against him over an alt... then that says an awful lot about you. I think the theme is very good. If you change a few colours and shading then it'd be an excellent alt.
Overall, well done.

Thank you.

I think aswell, because when you simpley speak nice, explaining my mistakes in a neat way - I accept that.

But if you just write "This is crap" or "Throw it to the bin", it shows that your sad, and your the one who should be thrown to the bin. Acting like some of the people here, just make me laugh. People qoute themselvs, and trying to convise others to say it's bad -.-'' Do you feel better now? =\ and how the hell you have the right to say I didn't put effort?! I worked on this alt hours, and I didn't just copy & paste. Mostly, this alt contain some of Cptn Kewl's alts because he is the alter for my alt, and I didn't make this alt to show the world. I wanted to make it to push my show on and give it abit fame.

And for you Dollars, from seeing other alts people made, which I can see were worse, you guys saying "Its ok. nice try", but when you catch me on little tiny mistake it's just being sad. The white "square" u said, is a paper, if you like it or not. The frames around the floor, ment to stay like that, that's how I like them. The blue shade must be blue because it is made on a blue floor.

So anyway if you have any preasours or stress to get out because your real life (I shalll not say more :rolleyes:) , please don't get them out here.

If some of the people here would be a lil nicer, they could of stopping this arguement, and I would accept the critisizm.

Anyway, thanks for the comments, i'm working now to fix errors and colours as mentioned here.

[MattUH]

i really must agree with 'Dollars'

why even bother posting that? its ulgy!

K tht was ickle harsh but its true, you need to work on it alot nice try dude.

[kobi626]

Your comment isn't harsh. It's very harsh :l

I don't get the people who keep saying It's ugly or crap or w/e pops in your damn mind. If you spot any more stuff which weren't mentioned above, please post. But if you wanna be nasty as some of the people above - get lost.

God. I'm so fed up with this comments. It seems it's not fun anymore to show alterations at this forum :@. Your ruining all the fun of it.


i really must agree with 'Dollars'

why even bother posting that? its ulgy!

K tht was ickle harsh but its true, you need to work on it alot nice try dude.

[MattUH]

Everyone is allowed to post their view.

[kobi626]

Everyone is allowed to post their view.

But as I said above, It's not relevant if it was said already.

[Crimson]

God. I'm so fed up with this comments. It seems it's not fun anymore to show alterations at this forum :@. Your ruining all the fun of it.

What is the point in posting it. You post your alterations to get rated or commented. so why even bother to post when you get worked up if people dont like it and state this.

[kobi626]

What is the point in posting it. You post your alterations to get rated or commented. so why even bother to post when you get worked up if people dont like it and state this.

If ull read all this thread with it's all comments ull understand what I mean ^^

[Lozzoling]

No,it's just purely revolting

[brodeo]

Thank you.

I think aswell, because when you simpley speak nice, explaining my mistakes in a neat way - I accept that.

But if you just write "This is crap" or "Throw it to the bin", it shows that your sad, and your the one who should be thrown to the bin. Acting like some of the people here, just make me laugh. People qoute themselvs, and trying to convise others to say it's bad -.-'' Do you feel better now? =\ and how the hell you have the right to say I didn't put effort?! I worked on this alt hours, and I didn't just copy & paste. Mostly, this alt contain some of Cptn Kewl's alts because he is the alter for my alt, and I didn't make this alt to show the world. I wanted to make it to push my show on and give it abit fame.

And for you Dollars, from seeing other alts people made, which I can see were worse, you guys saying "Its ok. nice try", but when you catch me on little tiny mistake it's just being sad. The white "square" u said, is a paper, if you like it or not. The frames around the floor, ment to stay like that, that's how I like them. The blue shade must be blue because it is made on a blue floor.

So anyway if you have any preasours or stress to get out because your real life (I shalll not say more :rolleyes:) , please don't get them out here.

If some of the people here would be a lil nicer, they could of stopping this arguement, and I would accept the critisizm.

Anyway, thanks for the comments, i'm working now to fix errors and colours as mentioned here.

Way to bump an old thread just so you could bad rep me, whoever it was :)

Anyway, back to this post. I don't want to hassle you as much as your hassling me seeing as i've already had a warning from this thread which is totally dismissable seeing as i am not the sole person arguing and throwing insults around, and the fact i've just got back from an 8 hour car journey.
Just because you like your alteration does not make it okay. I would like to draw a black squiggle in paint and post it 'because that's how i like it' but it just doesn't work like that. If you're going to make it an alteration it doesn't matter whether or not you like it doesn't make it better or worse, so you need other peoples opinions to.
As for this comment:
So anyway if you have any preasours or stress to get out because your real life (I shalll not say more :rolleyes:) , please don't get them out here.
Who are you to tell other people they are having problems in their lives. If you are that immature to bring life situations into arguements online you have a lot on your hands yourself. If you're going to argue with me please be curteous enough to keep it online and not predict my 'pressures' and stresses.
And i mean come on, the arguement was only started because you couldn't accept our opinions at the beggining and now you have you arms open to everyone? I think the main problem here is that you think everyone is marching out of step except you when it really is the other way around. Do not expect anyone to be nice to you if you treat them like dirt in the first place.

[Crimson]

how can you type so much.. lol, i would get bored =P

[brodeo]

how can you type so much.. lol, i would get bored =P

Ya it took me ages and it was the first post i made after being on holiday for a week, ouch.

[Wootzeh]

Just let the thread die already!

[kobi626]

Thread closed ;) Having a headache of all this, pfft.