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:.:LordJames:.:
16-03-2006, 05:48 PM
hi people this is my public room so far i still need to make the floor 3d and add shading and give floor some colour then finally design the room. please give constructive critisism and do not rate as its not finished the things i need to do are marked in red =-)http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/5861/bighabboroom23mo.png (http://imageshack.us/?x=my6&myref=http://www.imageshack.us/)

Stitch
16-03-2006, 08:22 PM
i fink the floor tiles are too big for public room sized

Crocopix
16-03-2006, 08:26 PM
hi people this is my public room so far i still need to make the floor 3d and add shading and give floor some colour then finally design the room. please give constructive critisism and do not rate as its not finished the things i need to do are marked in red =-)http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/5861/bighabboroom23mo.png (http://imageshack.us/?x=my6&myref=http://www.imageshack.us/)

does not look like habbo, suxx

:.:LordJames:.:
16-03-2006, 08:55 PM
does not look like habbo, suxx how is that constructive critisism? ok then how is it not habbo ish explain? ill post how its gettin along and to follow up on the first post thank you for the post i think it shall be a new guest room then lolhttp://img89.imageshack.us/img89/882/bighabboroom14du.png (http://imageshack.us/?x=my6&myref=http://www.imageshack.us/)

Crocopix
16-03-2006, 08:58 PM
thats much better, but what i don't like: the bride and the door

the rest looks very habboish ;)

:.:LordJames:.:
16-03-2006, 09:37 PM
kwl tell me how to improve door and bridge

.Lynn
17-03-2006, 01:08 AM
Put black lines on it.

Stress Free
17-03-2006, 11:27 AM
looks alot better but i aint keen on the bridge

:.:LordJames:.:
17-03-2006, 07:16 PM
thanks for feedback i will edit the door

Disaronno
17-03-2006, 07:36 PM
I like both. The bridge and water is great :) Nice Job 6/10 Not nice colours on 1st one... and the door

:.:LordJames:.:
17-03-2006, 07:44 PM
thanks im actually gettin pretty good feedback for 1 of my alts keep it comin lol

Crocopix
17-03-2006, 11:35 PM
kwl tell me how to improve door and bridge

light effects that you can see that there is an imaginary line on frontside watching, left side looks like the water is on tzhe bottom, right side is close to the floor (i hope you understand that, my english is horrible sometimes)

:.:LordJames:.:
18-03-2006, 09:58 AM
nope didnt understand can some1 else explain wat coropix is sayin please no offence i fink i hav the reading-understanding of a 3 year old lol

ItsDave
18-03-2006, 04:01 PM
Shading isn't seen at all on there. Needs work. 4/10

:.:LordJames:.:
18-03-2006, 04:10 PM
well actually david there is shadin and i dont see that as constructive critisism you are ment to say exactly where otherwise theres no point in postin

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