[First Thread] Who Am I?

[TheUnknownPoet]

Seing as i helped to create this forum aswell as the marvelous staff of habbox, it would be an honour to introduce its first ever poem =]


Who am I?

Who am I to disagree?
To a false sense of immortality
How can you be kind?
How can you be sweet?
When every time I see you
I fall down to your feet.

Who am I to pick a fight?
With someone who is probably right?
Why are you here?
Why are you even trying?
When every time I see you
I always know your lieing

Who am I to make fun of you?
When the things you say are pretty true?
Who are you with?
Who holds you tight?
When did I realise
That something wasn’t right?

Who am I to call you names
When I am the one who plays your games?
What are you doing here?
What are you accomplishing?
When will you let me off?
This puppet transforming string

Who am I to understand?
What is going through your head
Your sins will not be forgotten
For, I am already dead.

[JT-Fan]

Dude that rocked, I love poems whre you have to read between the lines :)

[TheUnknownPoet]

lol
yeh
ps. you know me ;]
but i will not reveal myself to you yet :P

[FullyInsane]

That was excellent , I've never been a poetry person.. but that was good x] .

[chilloutrich]

Posts in the new subforum of my forums :P.

Very nice poem ;)

[TheUnknownPoet]

why thankyou chilloutrich =]
and thankyou fullyinsane, for your rep ^^ very appreciated.

[Adam$]

Very good. I'm not really into poetry that much, nor am I good at writing poems, but this was very good.

Who are you? If people know you I'd rep you on your account which you are known on. ;)

[TheUnknownPoet]

lol
people do know me
they know my account
they just dont know im associated with that account =]
besides, i was banned lol.

[Polly-alyssa]

I envy u ur so good and poetry