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flipnic
20-03-2006, 01:09 PM
It's not very good. Give rating out of 10 please. COmments about improving it would help. Thanks. http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y237/brandonokeeffe/McDonalds-RoomLayout.png
Webhamster
20-03-2006, 01:38 PM
I think the door is not so good. The flooring yellow is a bit too green. The habbo behind the door isn't affected by glass, and no glass is perfectly clear ;). The picture is not so good. The person behind it should have some way of getting in.


...but overall well done.
Catchetat
20-03-2006, 02:03 PM
the door and the outside area needs more detail and better color combination

I think u should actually include the m logo in it as well..

the cupid too pixelated and unclear include more details like ppl queueing up or cashier? dont make it too habbo based..
ItsDave
20-03-2006, 04:09 PM
The floor is a horrible colour, maybe choose a like lighter red, the stuff on the desk where the man is working isn't good and needs some work. Overall I think it needs alot of work and needs to be improved. 5/10
Liberation
20-03-2006, 04:31 PM
Look OK...
But i would really know that it was McDonalds...Just not much on there to show what it was....
But it good anyway...
Kong
20-03-2006, 04:52 PM
If i walked into that i'd properly think it was oxfam.

2/10
:.:LordJames:.:
20-03-2006, 06:41 PM
search my name i dun a mc donalds but i dont really like urs
Adam$
20-03-2006, 07:15 PM
It's coming along.. Roof is too high IMO, floor is a good effect but I dislike the colours. The glass should fade what is behind it, and should be reflected.

Other than that, good effort. ^_^
cocaine
20-03-2006, 07:17 PM
Lmao at the guy behind the door!
Toes
20-03-2006, 07:21 PM
It's not very good. Give rating out of 10 please. COmments about improving it would help. Thanks. http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y237/brandonokeeffe/McDonalds-RoomLayout.png

Put some spots on the worker. Nearly always spotty teenagers!
.Mike-
20-03-2006, 08:37 PM
I think the door needs to be more transparent
flipnic
24-03-2006, 01:04 PM
An updated version... Still not very good. Only made small changes. Ill make bigger changes when I get home.
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y237/brandonokeeffe/Macdonalds.png
P.s. I couldnt change the girl around. If anyone notices, the girl isnt perfectly reflected as her arm is out on the same side, no reflected. And theres a glitch above doorway.
chubbzilla
24-03-2006, 01:11 PM
well to be honest i really dont like it and that small tree outside isnt vary effective sorry well i think its a tree:s :s
Colourful™
24-03-2006, 09:22 PM
4.5/10. It's very basic and a 10 minute job, sorry.

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