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Jasmin
23-12-2004, 12:28 PM
aslong as You belive me This is my poem and ill evan go dramsitc and paste it on here if you dont beilive me lOL [the book with the poem in it which is mine]
ok
Autum Days.

Autum Days
The Grass swiftly sways
The dew twinkling before my eye,
The geese honking as they swiftly fly by.

A Robin Flys down and Plucks at a worm
Then washes itself, Free of Germs.
The sun Is Shining,
But my fingers are cold and numb,
Who Knows when winter will come.

[I wrote this in Autum]

Simonac55
23-12-2004, 02:32 PM
Really good happy poem! You're pretty good to write happy poems because it's rare that I can write happy poem except for the love ones.

Jasmin
23-12-2004, 09:15 PM
Lol Thanks :)
I Like happy Poems although I do, do poems about Anger and Sadness and Jelousy

Adzeh
03-01-2005, 11:01 PM
very good. it represents you, jumpy and happy.

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