MY SECOND ALT! PLZ C 1st 2 RATE IMPROVEMENT!!

[cookie-bee]

Yep, This is my second alt, if you could kindly observe my first and tell me if it this one is better, Please rate, with your reason and improvements. And please be kind and not to put rude remarks! Thank you! Cookie-bee :)

[Jasmin]

Umm I dont know realy the ttops are recouluring and the carrot is adding green lines On :s
dont really know
6/10

[Bradd]

Millions of pixel erors.. 3/10

[G-flow]

Not bad. 4/10.

[Adzeh]

its alittle better 8/10

[micky.blue.eyes]

sorry to say it but you look fat
or is that suposed to be??
and the prezzie isnt very well
lots of pixel errors :( srry
5/10