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Biseinen
28-03-2006, 05:47 PM
I can't be bothered to reanimate it as of yet... But here is the shaded version since people said that was the only fall back on it...

C+C accepted. ^^;

http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/7893/pixelwork9uy.png

benjirofl
28-03-2006, 05:48 PM
Cool <3 plus rep if i can !¬

benjirofl
28-03-2006, 05:48 PM
Wooopsss <3 Sorry

Faye
28-03-2006, 05:55 PM
nice lol , i cant see any faults in it now 10/10 + rep :)

Barmi
28-03-2006, 06:02 PM
Need grass texture, needs to have petals merged together, needs window texture, needs texture on roof, needs reflections and highlights, needs additional work on the railway, needs pixel errors amending, needs more detail on road, needs Habbo to be "tidied up", needs HABBO sign to be "tidied up", needs scale correcting on road*, and possibly some detail adding there, need to get rid of the "double-thickness" join lines in some corners, needs signs to be finished off, and needs a better job on the shadows.

Sorry for all the criticism, but hopefully you see it as constructive and it will help you in improving your work. :(

Still, it's nice that you took on board what people said in the last thread. ;)

amy-tha-angel
28-03-2006, 06:04 PM
Yeaaa.. I like it! What is is supposed to say ??

ItsDave
28-03-2006, 06:18 PM
Do you know what shading means? Although I do lke what you've done, here, I'll post you a sample.
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/9426/suminididforujames8yq3kj.png (http://imageshack.us)

Biseinen
28-03-2006, 06:27 PM
Well, it was only a quick job whilst I was a bit bored, not exactly pixel perfect. Thanks for the constructive critisism. ^^

GJay
28-03-2006, 10:27 PM
I think it looks nice :) nice go baby. Are you trying to spell something out in the design?

Kasabian
29-03-2006, 06:27 AM
I like the way you used the Habbo Orange & Yellow, But much more shading on that. The habbo banner... Go round the edges in black line. Love the way you use the small rares, but they need imporving. Grass! Grass isn't all the same colour!

ProJoker17
29-03-2006, 09:10 AM
LOL! Nice Touch Up Good Work!

9/10 :D

:Dazza
08-04-2006, 02:38 AM
So much better 8/10

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