Ma Public Room

[TeenAnger]

Hi , Ermm This isnt brilliant , iv'e used mainly furniture from other public rooms on habbo, ill admit that.


But a few things are my own , But what do you think of the Entire room ?


http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/3176/oocloob1ut.png (http://imageshack.us)

[ExtraKen]

Hi , Ermm This isnt brilliant , iv'e used mainly furniture from other public rooms on habbo, ill admit that.


But a few things are my own , But what do you think of the Entire room ?


http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/3176/oocloob1ut.png (http://imageshack.us)

Hmm it looks good but.. the bar is weard because its not flat on the side :s:s
fix that! 8/10

[lukeisok]

Umm, I think the tree need to be around the pool on this side <^

[TeenAnger]

Ok , Bars Been Fixed... Ill Work on the trees next, do you mena have them the opposite side of the pool?

http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/5268/oocloob6xg.png (http://imageshack.us)

[Nemo]

theres a lil brown/red bloch thing inthe "deep space" bit lol

[lukeisok]

Yup :)

[Kasabian]

http://i2.tinypic.com/so4j14.jpg

Tommo's Pointers

As we see, I have gone round in red. Let's start shall we?

Line around the whole thing - This is where the other part of the wall should be, Without this, it would collapse.

Circles - Pixel Errors.



Stealth
iTommy || Tommo

[TeenAnger]

ok. Now the trees have been moved, tell me if it looks better. And What 'deep space' thing are you on about ? with the red/brown blotch ?

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/4633/oocloob18de.png (http://imageshack.us)

[Kasabian]

Read My Post ^^

And the red thing is under teh habbo.

Also the trees look, Well crap.

Put them in puts

[.Mike-]

http://i2.tinypic.com/so4j14.jpg

Tommo's Pointers

As we see, I have gone round in red. Let's start shall we?

Line around the whole thing - This is where the other part of the wall should be, Without this, it would collapse.

Circles - Pixel Errors.



Stealth
iTommy || Tommo
pic is too small, but i know what ur talking about, i see them too ;p

[ItsDave]

Get rid of that thick black line near the entrance and there's a pixel error on the bar. Everythings been 2 sqaured except one which makes it go up a little bit. 6/10

[LoverRule]

Thats a pretty nice alt, also its good you've said that you did get pieces from other public rooms :) The bar looks a little too square, maybe needs to be a little more rounded? :s Well, also the trees kinda look like theyre growing from the water :o But 7/10 :) Keep it up! :P

[:Dazza]

B-e-a-utiful

[Mxrt]

B-e-a-utiful

Can we get an ambulance for this girl? I don't care if I sound rude that is horrible. All you've done is copy and paste - apart from on the bar - which has the world's population's amount of pixel errors!

I'm sorry but you can do way better. Redo it all.

1/10 for effort.

[Faye]

erm it looks better now uve fixed the bar but there are still some errors like other people have pointed out.Try and make the trees stand up so we can see the bottom of them instead of them disapearing-if that makes sense
but good try and good idea 5/10 for now