rate my layout (plz)

[redtom]

hi guys this is the latest thing ive made plz rate it (it has preview on so people do rip and its used on another site) there all basically the same

http://img432.imageshack.us/img432/9048/preview24je.png
http://img432.imageshack.us/img432/6599/preview2tr.png
http://img432.imageshack.us/img432/9215/preview31fd.png

can you guys rate it out of 10 thxs and tell me what i could have don't better and were i have gone wrong Thxs :D

[My3tery]

Kinda hard to see with all that preview signs on it but look good 8.5/10
btw i like the banner,

[JoeComins]

5/10

I just dont like it

Sorry