3 or 4th alt im rubbish =[ (laser cage)

[Nemo]

doesnt look like a laser cage,im not much of an alter but i was bored and it was like 12am so i thought what the heck....also not sure where 2 put it but since i used part of a mocha
i thought i shuld post it here:http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/850/lasercage2tw.png sorry its not transparent and the side laser looks a bit weird not sure how 2 do it so c+c please (some1 tell me wot c + c means :P) */10 please :)

[Ben.]

I cant see anything :S

Edit: It apperad :P 7/10

[Nemo]

http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/850/lasercage2tw.png there incase u cant see it i the time limit to edit ran out whilst i was typing :@

[lew!]

c + c Means Constructive Critism, Like instead of saying its rubbish, You could say, I dont like the shading, I think it goes too dark or something.

i would give it 5/10. Good Idea, But i think you should practise Doing Lines first of all.

[Re101]

Construct it in isometric and at an angle otherwise it gets to hard and looks wierd.

[roaddemon]

7/10, looks pretty good.
I would bye one to keep n00bs in <33

[Lyca]

The front laser gate is bigger than teh last one
Nice try though

[Crimson]

its hard to do lasers... like what i did wrong, they look to much 2D .

maybe start with somthing abit easier. That looks rather advanced for a 3rd / 4th alt.

:lD

[heartQUIVER]

I like it :)

[Nemo]

The front laser gate is bigger than teh last one
Nice try thoughits ment 2 b like when u looked a straight road it gets smaller (so it seems) and closer 2gether...

[Bear-Max]

The perspective is very dodgy, and the laser looks more like barbed wire.

Might I suggest some isometric pixel tutorials? www.zoggles.co.uk is a very good place to learn the basics.

3/10 - Keep at it though :)

[:Dazza]

Its original 6/10