My fishing item.

[ItsDave]

I finaly finished my wounderfel piece of work, the bit I like the best is the catolouge, because the rod looks terrible :( Any tips on how to improve will be greatfully appreciated. So outta 10 and cc.
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/6605/fishingproject9qd.png (http://imageshack.us)
Xzoid

[Frank459]

Try doing it in the North pole.

- Floor icy :)
- Eskimo Costume
- Frozen tree
- Frozen floor
- Jagged bits around the hole with fish


Sorry if its a bit to much

Btw 9.9/10 for your current picture xD (Nothings perfect)

[Matt.]

:O, Thats great:P But I dont like the tree:s Sorry
8/10

[heartQUIVER]

Hm well it's quite good. But im not sure about the tree and like you said, the rod.

Rods are usually made out of metal or plastic or something like that, not wood - thats more like 7 year olds out on an adventure to find destiny.
Also, the tree looks strange beacuse its sliced off. It's not very 'guest room sized' either. Hm, i'd give this alt 6/10.

On the catalouge the title is lovely, but you spelt equipment wrong (has a p) (sp?). But it's good, welldone and i'll rep you for effort ^^ it's not perfect but nothing ever is.

edit; some are wood - sorry x)

[:Dazza]

Fishing rod should be straight in catalouge. 8/10 so far

[heartQUIVER]

Fishing rod should be straight in catalouge. 8/10 so far

Where would we fish? The lido?

[Nemo]

Where would we fish? The lido? why do we need a loo wen we dont go toilet? lol :P

nice i love it the tree looks........ flat on the wall fix that! 9/10

[Art]

What's with the black ... patch on top of the tree?

[-mad-monkey-]

The rod looks like his... Rod.

[King-Jark]

doesnt seem to resemble a fishing rod to me... if you have to get a picture of one then go off of that, cuase most fishing polls are straight and not bent!

also you spelled EQUIPMENT wrong.... you spelled it equitment

[Brainpower]

The rod has got to much shading,
and is not the right shape.

[Laurensh1]

I don't like the rod, it is.. Ugly,

Make it from metal, or make it in a right like.. I hope that's gonna look better

7.8/10

[H.bubbly]

The rod has got to much shading,
and is not the right shape.


I agree , comming along well though ;)