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Dj-dids
13-04-2006, 10:49 AM
What do you think?? i like it :D

Tell me which you prefer :

This :

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y107/DjDids/Flash2.gif


or

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y107/DjDids/pixel_base.gif

Please be honest :D

Craig
13-04-2006, 10:59 AM
They're not what I'd call super layouts but I'd choose the first one mate.

Matt.
13-04-2006, 11:03 AM
The first one looks good =]

Dj-dids
13-04-2006, 11:07 AM
ye im not the best at making layouts but id prefer using my own the taking someone elses :D

JoeComins
13-04-2006, 11:23 AM
I wouldnt choose either.
The top one has so many errors
The bottom one is way too green and has too many errors./

Dont over use scan lines either

-::Mr.Dave::-
13-04-2006, 12:00 PM
joe cant you give anyone compliments instead of critiscing them all

mat64
13-04-2006, 12:14 PM
Honest feedback?


joe cant you give anyone compliments instead of critiscing them all

Splinter
13-04-2006, 01:12 PM
The first one stands out more.

JoeComins
13-04-2006, 04:13 PM
joe cant you give anyone compliments instead of critiscing them all
No, I cant.

My feedback is harsh, but to make a layout and be sucessful, you need to have people who are jerks - such as me - who you theng et to hate, which makes that person vindictive, so then goes back and makes a new layout without the points ive given, and thus improving.

By someone saying '' 6/10 - Thats good for a 363748th attempt. Maybe improve on teh borders pls.'' for example, it doesnt say anything. Improve on the borders - How. It dsoesnt say

In my post, I said - Dont overuse scan lines, and the pixel erros, and not aligning things is a major downfall. But just aligning things, the layouts look more professionalm, and makes it look cleaner, and like you have spent more time on it, so anyone who doesnt like this, ie Dan, Dude2892, and proberly half of this forum, you can jump off a bridge for all I care. This is me, and if you dont give 2 ****s, as Dan said, then dont moan to me about it, idiots.
I also dont appreciate being spoken to like Dan just has. If you dont give 2 ****s Dan, shut your ****ing mouth you vindictive, spiteful like man. And if Sygon is such a mate of yours Dan, then why did he say the other day that you were a sh*t coder? Pretty sure it was him. Ill check my logs now

Mentor
13-04-2006, 04:27 PM
Humm i like the banner on the second one, althogh id prefer it if it were a sharper image, althogh i perfer the actal layout of the second one, possible becuse of the sharper, brigter colours which cause it to stand out more, Its less monotone that the green second if you know what i mean "/
The stick men look good, althogh i dont realy think they compose a banner as well as other graphics may, possibly encorpateing them in some other way would be an imrpovement "/
Also sizeing the bar at the top of the content on first bit to the same hiegh as the bars of the left would give it a more simetrical feel, which would also be an imrpovment.
Currenly there not anything specal but they do have potenatl with a little work "/

- i was direct linked in to the codeing forum, even thogh i removed it on the main nav. Danm you Dan! delite this post please, as this forum is a load of **** -

Hmmm
19-04-2006, 12:52 PM
No, I cant.

My feedback is harsh, but to make a layout and be sucessful, you need to have people who are jerks - such as me - who you theng et to hate, which makes that person vindictive, so then goes back and makes a new layout without the points ive given, and thus improving.

By someone saying '' 6/10 - Thats good for a 363748th attempt. Maybe improve on teh borders pls.'' for example, it doesnt say anything. Improve on the borders - How. It dsoesnt say

In my post, I said - Dont overuse scan lines, and the pixel erros, and not aligning things is a major downfall. But just aligning things, the layouts look more professionalm, and makes it look cleaner, and like you have spent more time on it, so anyone who doesnt like this, ie Dan, Dude2892, and proberly half of this forum, you can jump off a bridge for all I care. This is me, and if you dont give 2 ****s, as Dan said, then dont moan to me about it, idiots.
I also dont appreciate being spoken to like Dan just has. If you dont give 2 ****s Dan, shut your ****ing mouth you vindictive, spiteful like man. And if Sygon is such a mate of yours Dan, then why did he say the other day that you were a sh*t coder? Pretty sure it was him. Ill check my logs now

lol dont saythings like that

Liam.
19-04-2006, 12:58 PM
Id say top one is the best, don't like the green colour on second :P

Dj-dids
19-04-2006, 01:05 PM
Lol its ok i'd like to think i'm making better layouts then that already lol im trying new things every day!

Sygon.
19-04-2006, 03:23 PM
Did you make the anime chracter?

Ok some advice on no.2

Banner is good but the layout is a bit crud.
the reason for this is your bringing sig stye with your stripey paterns into web layouts, IT DOES NOT MIX!
there 2 seperate things you dont do big chunky things and use the visitor font etc.

what you got to go for is clean more pratical colors and simple images
and less of the patterns, and choose the right text!

hope that helped.

Jack.tar.gz
20-04-2006, 06:41 PM
1st one is way better than the second one

iRoss
22-04-2006, 05:27 PM
No, I cant.

My feedback is harsh, but to make a layout and be sucessful, you need to have people who are jerks - such as me - who you theng et to hate, which makes that person vindictive, so then goes back and makes a new layout without the points ive given, and thus improving.

By someone saying '' 6/10 - Thats good for a 363748th attempt. Maybe improve on teh borders pls.'' for example, it doesnt say anything. Improve on the borders - How. It dsoesnt say

In my post, I said - Dont overuse scan lines, and the pixel erros, and not aligning things is a major downfall. But just aligning things, the layouts look more professionalm, and makes it look cleaner, and like you have spent more time on it, so anyone who doesnt like this, ie Dan, Dude2892, and proberly half of this forum, you can jump off a bridge for all I care. This is me, and if you dont give 2 ****s, as Dan said, then dont moan to me about it, idiots.
I also dont appreciate being spoken to like Dan just has. If you dont give 2 ****s Dan, shut your ****ing mouth you vindictive, spiteful like man. And if Sygon is such a mate of yours Dan, then why did he say the other day that you were a sh*t coder? Pretty sure it was him. Ill check my logs now

Haven't you got intelligent :D

I kind of like them. I think the banner on the 2nd one is cool. Like how the guy is spraying the graffiti.

Recursion
22-04-2006, 05:52 PM
So your saying i should be a Jerk when it comes to layout reviewing/Rating??

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