Devvo

[Damo]

K, This is my poor attempt at Devvo, For those who dont know who devvo is www.fat-pie.com/chavs (http://www.fat-pie.com/chavs) it did take a while for the pattern on the burberry tho.

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/5404/devvo6la.png (http://imageshack.us)

[Ekalb]

More shading is needed on the band across the shirt and the pants.
If I was you I'd do extra shading on the habbo because it really doesn't have much.
The eyes are too bright and are like X ray eyes or something. Use a darker color on them aswell to add some shading.
Try isometric alts - They are moer challenging, allow you to do more things and usually get better comments (If they are good)
There are also a few pixels errors on the left collar.

[Damo]

No idea what you mean ;)

[Ekalb]

Ill show you an example of how I would fix it up.
I added allot more shading including new colours, I fixed up an error in the lines on the pants, I didnt touch the hat though.
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/407/devvohelp4vo.png

[Damo]

Ill show you an example of how I would fix it up.
I added allot more shading including new colours, I fixed up an error in the lines on the pants, I didnt touch the hat though.
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/407/devvohelp4vo.png

Mmm.. Does look better

[chubbzilla]

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e252/chubbzilla/chavi.pnghaha i made devo ages ago but its not vary good there is hardly any changes and it was just rubbish but yours isway better then mine mine is rubbish

[ItsDave]

The left colar doesn't look the same to the other one, and needs alot more shading. 6/10

[Billabong]

The left colar doesn't look the same to the other one, and needs alot more shading. 6/10

Yep, sort collar out and bit more shading