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H.bubbly
20-04-2006, 04:35 PM
[ The Beginning ]



Thursday , The worst Day ever , Well things could be alot worse for matt , alot worse. Matt was on his Computer with Dino , one of his school Friends.

'' God , i hate Gcse's They're just ruining every everything Less and Less Free time! '' Matt cried.

Dino gave him a funny look.

'' well Good thing the terms nearly up , you can sit back and Relax , and be like me. Since i'm Finishing school this year. '' Dino Grinned.

Hours went By , Dino had gone Home. Matt was laying on his bed staring at the cealing. Matt's Brother was in and out of his Room getting things that he'd left behind. There was an Enormous amount of Junk that he'd left in there.

'' Just #~"@ off why don't you!, can't you see i'm Busy ?! '' Matt Shouted.

Simon didn't bother saying anything , and walked out.

The Three Siblings , Matt , Simon and His Younger Sister Carla wern't very Close , they didn't speak much in some cases. The sun was down. And all Matt could see was the small speck of light comming through his Certains. He sat up and gazed out of the window , He had managed to jump out without getting hurt , His bedroom is quite Close to the surface. Matt got out his mobile and dialed Dino's number.

'' Heyy Dino , i was wondering if i could come round ? , i'm Sort of , in a Bad mood , You Sure ? Great i'll be right over '' Matt Said.
He started to run down the Road , hoping Simon hadn't have been looking out of the Window. Simon doesn't Like Matt much , they don't get on since Simon said to him that he doesn't Like people who are Gay. Matt and Simon haven't spoken to each other Properly since then.
Matt arrived at Dino's house , And he was already outside waiting for him.
'' Hey Buddy , whats wrong ? '' Dino asked
There was a Slight Pause , '' It's nothing , Forget it .. '' Matt replied.
Matt was 14 , He's been friends with Dino Since playschool , Well , Best friends Since Playschool.
'' Well , come in then '' Dino said thoughtfully. Matt walked in Dino's house very slowly , Sweat comming from his Forehead.
'' Do you want a Drink or anything then Matt ? '' Dino asked. Matt was still shaking.
'' Y..yea please '' Make studdered.
Dino stared at Matt , Matt was acting like he was in Denial , trying to smile and pretend everything was alright. Dino was pouring a drink for matt , still staring at matt.
Matt jumped forward to stop Dino from spilling his Drink
''Dino don't spill the .. ''

Matt had all orange juice over him

'' Drink ''

Matt was up close to Dino , '' Ohh God Sorry! , i'mm clean it up .. hold on '' Dino Cried , grabbing some Tissue. He started to dabb the Tissue on Matt and bent down to get lower , And Lower till' he was on his Knees.
''Dino what are you Doing ?'' Sarah Said.
Dino jumped up quickly
'' Nothing .. i was cleaning Matt up , was abit of a Spillage '' Dino replied.
Sarah walked off.
'' How about we go to the park ? '' Matt asked , Pulling on Dino's arm.
Dino smiled and went with it , Walking with Matt.
'' heyy Sarah i'm going up the Park Okay '' Dino Shouted , then left the House.

'' So , why are we going to the Park , It's 12.00 at Night , It's Pitch black! '' Dino asked.
Matt smiled and carried on walking , When they had arrived Matt pulled Dino under a tree.
Matt was Moving closer , Although Dino couldn't See.
'' Dino '' Matt Whispered.
Dino Jumped , '' ughh Matt , You scared me '' Dino Said , Huffing and Puffing.
Matt Put his Head on Dino's Chest and closed His eyes.
'' Your Hearts beating Fast , and Loud Dino , Maybe it's because you've got Two , Yours , And Mine! '' Matt Whispered.
Dino was Speechless , He Placed his hand on Matts Head and Gently Pulled him up to be next to Dino. Matt had fell asleep , Dino was Smiling.
'' Whoa , I've never been so ... Suprised .. , Matt ? ''
There was No Answer. Dino Closed His Eyes , Got Comfy , And Fell asleep with Matt under the Tree.



END OF PART ONE ;] , More to Come , and Alts for it ;]

Can't be bothered to Read : 14 Year old School boy , in year 10 , Falls in love with a 16 year old Boy blah bla blah , Sleeps with him under a tree , theres the start >.<



Yeah it's not that good at all =/ , but is it okay for the First one ?

Ben.
20-04-2006, 04:43 PM
Im sorry im to lazy to read that :( maybe shorten it pls :P

the wombats
20-04-2006, 04:50 PM
Could use better grammer, but it does sound good.

H.bubbly
20-04-2006, 04:51 PM
14 Year old School boy , in year 10 , Falls in love with a 16 year old Boy blah bla blah , falls asleep with him in the park under a tree , In teh Dark .. eh .. >.< It starts there :P

cocaine
20-04-2006, 04:52 PM
Rofl nice ;)

Bit suprised when he just went to sleep :l Thought he was gonna kiss him O.o

Chaz
20-04-2006, 04:53 PM
Are they both gay?

H.bubbly
20-04-2006, 04:57 PM
Rofl nice ;)

Bit suprised when he just went to sleep :l Thought he was gonna kiss him O.o


you never know whats gonna happen next ;] and

yea Chaz they were but they didn't know that eachother were .. if you get me

Chaz
20-04-2006, 04:57 PM
Right...i see

Well, have some rep anyway.

Craig
20-04-2006, 04:59 PM
Your punctuation is rubbish tbh. Get it sorted:)

H.bubbly
20-04-2006, 05:00 PM
i just type really fast so i got used to it ...

Craig
20-04-2006, 05:06 PM
Yeah but I type like proper fast and I can use punctuation properly. Here's what to get sorted:
Random capital letters
Random ....'s
The punctuation in speech
Having spaces either side of commas

Mr.Sam
20-04-2006, 05:11 PM
Yeah but I type like proper fast and I can use punctuation properly. Here's what to get sorted:
Random capital letters
Random ....'s
The punctuation in speech
Having spaces either side of commas
or just use word to correct grammer and or spelling errors ;)

Chaz
20-04-2006, 05:13 PM
Spell check?

Mr.Sam
20-04-2006, 05:16 PM
Spell check?

hense why i said use word ;)

i see you edited your signature :P

dani342us
20-04-2006, 06:42 PM
Not Good. I dont like it. The story makes the sence. It has no point,-its pointless- Also, your grammar isnt so good. I'm young, no older than sixteen and im not so bad.

PrittyKittyKuty
20-05-2006, 04:31 PM
grammar! sheesh!! its the story yoor reading who CARES about the grammar!!! grammar helps but it doesn't mean a stories lousy because of it..

FlyingJesus
21-05-2006, 11:33 PM
Nothing's explained.. ever. Who's Sarah? You only mention their ages and situations in reply to people's questions, you need to include lots more detail and such so people can tell what's happening without having to ask, and like people have said, spellcheck is nice, makes things easier to read.

H.bubbly
22-05-2006, 03:16 PM
just drop it , i was bored. i know its crap , i don't really care because nothing in life perfect...


someone CLOSE the thread , its well old.

FlyingJesus
22-05-2006, 11:18 PM
i don't really care because nothing in life perfect...

I am.

.Lynn
22-05-2006, 11:32 PM
The grammars bad.. yeah try using spell check.

The story is sorta coming along..

H.bubbly
24-05-2006, 04:09 PM
Some of it's True. The story.

But there you go.

i don't care what some of you think.

edible
24-05-2006, 05:38 PM
I enjoyed reading that, +rep :)

Im so nice (A)

chilloutrich
24-05-2006, 09:52 PM
chilloutrich (Forum Moderator) - Thread closed at starters request :).

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