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Brainpower
26-04-2006, 11:58 AM
This is a furniture range i have been working on the last couple of days.
Please dont spot the pixel errors every furni range have pixel errors so please dont. I dont like the little furniture in the catalogue page.
Oh i forgot, i'm not so good at englisch so there are going to be a lot of languase faults in the catalogue page and in this text :P

Here it is:

Al the furni:
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/9677/chino5be.png

Catalogue page:
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/9409/catalogue7sl.png

Furni in a room:
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/9359/roomoriewnt4ry.png

Please rate */10

[Chris]
26-04-2006, 12:04 PM
This is a furniture range i have been working on the last couple of days.
Please dont spot the pixel errors every furni range have pixel errors so please dont. I dont like the little furniture in the catalogue page.
Oh i forgot, i'm not so good at englisch so there are going to be a lot of languase faults in the catalogue page and in this text :P

Here it is:

Al the furni:
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/9677/chino5be.png

Catalogue page:
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/9409/catalogue7sl.png

Furni in a room:
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/9359/roomoriewnt4ry.png

Please rate */10


wow maybe make the bit in the middle of the sofa go vertical it looks better

still 10/10 + rep

Evolution
26-04-2006, 12:24 PM
It's excellent however you should allow people to spot your errors so you can improve.

As I said in the last thread the sofa line in between the two cusions needs to go verticle and not slant.

+rep if I can again.

Brainpower
26-04-2006, 12:26 PM
wow maybe make the bit in the middle of the sofa go vertical it looks better

still 10/10 + rep

Done,
good advise!
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/4263/chino5ah.png
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/7400/roomoriewnt3in.png

[Chris]
26-04-2006, 12:28 PM
Done,
good advise!
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/4263/chino5ah.png
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/7400/roomoriewnt3in.png


ok can u give me any tips? please i cant really make the cusion the right size lol

Brainpower
26-04-2006, 12:30 PM
It's excellent however you should allow people to spot your errors so you can improve.

As I said in the last thread the sofa line in between the two cusions needs to go verticle and not slant.

+rep if I can again.

Ok,

You can post the pixel errors in the thread where it was still WIP.
:P

For Chrisbes:

If you have two cushions with no line in between count the pixels of the line and than paste the line in the middle.

[Chris]
26-04-2006, 12:35 PM
Ok,

You can post the pixel errors in the thread where it was still WIP.
:P

For Chrisbes:

If you have two cushions with no line in between count the pixels of the line and than paste the line in the middle.


yea i know lolz i just need like ideas for ranges

Brainpower
26-04-2006, 12:37 PM
yea i know lolz i just need like ideas for ranges

Hmm....

Bone, ice, fire, evil, crystal, dark, royal, stone, fururistic,
cyber

Is that enough? lol

[Chris]
26-04-2006, 12:37 PM
Hmm....

Bone, ice, fire, evil, crystal, dark, royal, stone, fururistic,
cyber

Is that enough? lol


umm i dunno lolz thanx anywayz

Art
26-04-2006, 01:08 PM
With the sofa it looks like one side is bigger then the other, when its IN a room.

Brainpower
26-04-2006, 01:09 PM
That is because the thing where you pute your arm on is in front of it.

Lozzoling
26-04-2006, 02:45 PM
the actual oriental furni looks tons better,

may i suggest that colour scheme isnt that oriental

the bit on the sofa,the couch join in the middle,where it goes down,it does so at a wrong angle,it should be diagonal till it meets the last brown bit and then go straight down

Re101
26-04-2006, 03:08 PM
WOW 9/10 keep it up.

ItsDave
26-04-2006, 04:29 PM
Oi, I gave you that name! Lolz :eusa_danc But v good.

Animez0r
26-04-2006, 04:29 PM
One of the sofa cushions is deff bigger than otha i can see in room and when they on their own outta catalogue

still good though 9/10 + rep

.Lynn
27-04-2006, 02:39 AM
When you flipped the letters, it made a different word probably. You have to do it pixel by pixel again for flipping letters.

The room seems tooooo brown. Also needs some shadows under the furniture.

Pimlicoman
27-04-2006, 11:54 AM
Couple Mistakes in the room, but apart from that 9/10, class bit of altin.

Wayne
27-04-2006, 11:57 AM
I love that, looks great. Loving the poster. Well done, 10/10 +rep.

H.bubbly
27-04-2006, 03:58 PM
Pretty gurd , hah like them :) Nice work

Judas
28-04-2006, 05:51 PM
Wow :o I love it, best furni range Ive ever seen. 10/10 +Rep

Jokin! Its terrible!! 0/10!! No. Im actually joking that time. 10/10 for sure :P

Although some of them do remind me of iced furni, but meh.

UDunKnow
28-04-2006, 06:17 PM
Excellent 10/10 Rep++

JT-Fan
28-04-2006, 09:13 PM
fantastic!

effort: 9/10
work: 8/10

Lucy_P
28-04-2006, 09:33 PM
All I can say is "wow" .. I absolutely love it, I think it's magnificent. 9/10.

joboman
28-04-2006, 11:52 PM
its good except you got posters that say dog everywhere. maybe you could alt another chinese character into a poster. and the seats look to small.

Colin-Roberts
29-04-2006, 12:02 AM
maybe make they pinky color more of a tan colour. 9/10

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