Forrest Gump 2.0 *W.I.P.*

[Demynx]

http://www.mysticson.com/images/City.png

Latest version still work in progress!
C+C and rate -/10.

[Costumeh.]

Pretty good, the kids' arms look too short, ones taller than the other, the taller one has longer arms, the smaller one has bigger hands, the benches look like you re-colored an ice bench and added brown lines in them, I pretty much like them except the things I mentioned above. :X

Anyways, to cut through the chase, I rate it 9.9/10 :)

[ItsDave]

The grass and pavement is amazing, just asking, why hasn't it been carried on? The road and pavemment needs shading. 8/10 +rep

[.:Subarusti:.]

The grass is good and so is the pavment cutting through it. Nice detail, but the present looks a bit off? still 8/10 keep it up!

[Demynx]

Thanks for the posts. :P

[mr.parasols]

Explain, why are there tiles under benches?

[JT-Fan]

effort: 9/10
work: 9/10

[Demynx]

Explain, why are there tiles under benches?
actually shadows.....

[Lycan]

nice, shame theres no mangled army guy but still +rep

[Ekalb]

actually shadows.....
I haven't looked at this alt really much so I dont have much for you yet but there are actually small tiles under the chairs which by the way the wood grain is messy and in the wrong place on unless somone really cant cut wood.
And something I noticed on one of the characters that is oddly family to an alt I did. There are a fair amount of pixel errors and messy parts but I haven't looked at it in detail yet. Parts of the pathway arent isometric too.
You can seel the small tiles in front of the chiars to the top of the picture.

[.Lynn]

Things to improve on:

The shadow of the person walking should be cleaned up and not all messy.
The road should have some texture, you put texture on the sidewalk but not the road.
Lol and the kids arms are too short.

[Lucy_P]

I'm going to rate it purely on the good things I see, the Grass' texture is magnificently put together, as is the path, I like the benches but the baby does look a bit, different. Good so far though. 8/10.

[Demynx]

im fixing the shadows right now.

[TBunk]

Nice! 8/10 +Rep

Great Work Mystic

[Precaution]

http://www.mysticson.com/images/City.png

Latest version still work in progress!
C+C and rate -/10.
oo thts pretty good a few errors on the kids arm and the choc box's wrapping looks a bit....eskew apart from tht id say well done!