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Sabu
04-05-2006, 08:12 PM
It was a snowy morning, with a slight breeze in the air. Everything was white. No colour, just lots of snow... waiting to be rolled up into balls and chucked at helpless kids.
Alex, the 'hoods bully, was as bored as could be, until he saw the new kid moving into his new house. So, without a care in the world, he put on his mittens, bobble, trainers and jacket, went outside and made a huge snowball. After it was made, he walked over to the small boy, tapped him on his shoulder... but before he could throw the snowball, he fell to the floor.
He looked up. All he could make out through his - now blurry - vision, was 7, what looked like 17 year old, kids. 3 of them were holding metal pipes, the another 3 were holding 4x4's, and the last, who looked like the leader, was holding a knife. Before he could get up, he was pinned down by 4 of the kids, beaten up by 1, and the was stabbed to death by the leader.
2 years later, the murder investigation continues. The LAPC (Los Angeles Police Department) have been looking for witnesses. But we all know who the main witness, or suspect.
Did the small boy have anything to do with this, or did he face the same, brutal fate of Alex?

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This is just the introduction to, perhaps, a great story ;) In the next part;
The LAPD finally think they have an eyewitess, but will he tell the truth?
Alex's family discover why he was murdered
Alex's schools mistress thinks some of her pupils were behind the murder.

Hope your looking forward to the next part, I dunno when I'll post it though :P Rate the above part and + rep me if you want :D

DMB-Hosting
06-05-2006, 04:08 PM
Lol sounds like a scary bully pmsl with mittens

Sabu
06-05-2006, 06:10 PM
Lol sounds like a scary bully pmsl with mittens

Yeah, cold day :rolleyes:

-Sweex
16-05-2006, 06:21 PM
rofl makes me wonder what happend to the teens.... and did you write that or was it just copied and pasted?

Sabu
16-05-2006, 07:41 PM
rofl makes me wonder what happend to the teens.... and did you write that or was it just copied and pasted?

Ya, I wrote it ;) That explains why it's rubbish :P

JellyWorm
16-05-2006, 08:30 PM
its rubish u will ocomplish nothing in life and your sig is rubish!

Sabu
26-05-2006, 09:03 PM
its rubish u will ocomplish nothing in life and your sig is rubish!

Well, I'm 12 years into my life - and I've acomplished hundreds of stuff :rolleyes:

As for the signature bit... your not gonna be liked very much from some Habboxers ;)

Mentor
27-05-2006, 11:42 PM
Woa, thats one major bully, I mean a snow ball! That whole town must be terrifed of that mittened bully....

3lementGFX
28-05-2006, 04:50 AM
Snowballs hurt -.-....

Sabu
28-05-2006, 11:10 AM
Snowballs hurt -.-....
What he said Entor ^^ -_-

Why post if your gonna be an idiot? I mean your nearly 18, right? Start acting your age -.-

Mentor
29-05-2006, 08:00 PM
What he said Entor ^^ -_-

Why post if your gonna be an idiot? I mean your nearly 18, right? Start acting your age -.-

Sarcastic pretty in line with it "/

Oh no, they have little balls of snow... Ahhh what will we do, And oh no, that bully must be well 'ard, look at those Mittens,
For **** sake? who over the age of 6 wares ****ing mittens? and as scary as snowballs are, ones made with someone using mittens?

Your calling me an idiot, while you mitten wiring bully goes frolicking around, story's work better when they are liken able to realty, when you get to the state that the pink pony probably has more realism it, then you really should be worried "/
I would say im treating you like a big boy now, but thats a lie, as the above is still pretty suger coated in relative terms to my opinion..

Reseller
29-05-2006, 11:11 PM
your sig is rubish!
How dare u!?!?!? ECW Own all best ever :eusa_danc its so hardcore

louder
30-05-2006, 12:09 AM
How dare u!?!?!? ECW Own all best ever :eusa_danc its so hardcore

Agreed.

Sabu
30-05-2006, 11:53 AM
Sarcastic pretty in line with it "/

Oh no, they have little balls of snow... Ahhh what will we do, And oh no, that bully must be well 'ard, look at those Mittens,
For **** sake? who over the age of 6 wares ****ing mittens? and as scary as snowballs are, ones made with someone using mittens?

Your calling me an idiot, while you mitten wiring bully goes frolicking around, story's work better when they are liken able to realty, when you get to the state that the pink pony probably has more realism it, then you really should be worried "/
I would say im treating you like a big boy now, but thats a lie, as the above is still pretty suger coated in relative terms to my opinion..

Who said it the stories have to be about realism? I made it up as I went along, typing the first thing that comes to my head. And the fact I'm calling you an idiot doesn't concern the story, so don't bring the story into it. I called you an idiot because your supposed to be acting like a 17 year old, when your not ;\

Anyways, you don't like me, and I don't like you, so lets stay out of eachothers way ;\


Agreed.

Agreed even more :D

heartQUIVER
30-05-2006, 11:40 PM
roflmao. good story?

mitten lolol.

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