NEW LAYOUT unfinished

[VPSwow]

this is my first layout as i did it in paint it has lost its quality when i saved it so please r8 and give my ideas on how to make it better

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f116/cheekykarl/NEWLAYOUT.jpg

please rate and c&c please

[Slixor]

6/10, not very habbo-y

[VPSwow]

how shall i make it better but not 2 advanced cos its my first 1

[paradox]

It looks a bit dull, maybe try adding a few habbo pictures and using a brighter colour?

[VPSwow]

ok will do thanks

[VPSwow]

*update*
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f116/cheekykarl/bannerlayout.gif

[Klaus5000]

ugly white space on update but better anyways, try a tutorial or 2 to get ideas. Its a good start 6/10

[paradox]

Make all the writing habbo style and then you can use a nicer font.

[VPSwow]

NEW UPDATE PLEASE RATE IT

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f116/cheekykarl/navigation.gif

[paradox]

Use a nicer font like Tahoma or Volter (Habbo font)

Don't use full caps and use proper spelling and grammar eg. radio to Radio
otherwise it looks a bit tatty.

[VPSwow]

ok thanks any more comments :)

[ClubTime]

its getting better slowly 6.5/10

[VPSwow]

sorry for all updates but what now?

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f116/cheekykarl/navigation3.gif