Habbo Pants/Shirt

[.ChromeX.]

Well, this was my first character alt. My friend wanted me to do it for his MSN avatar, so I did. Rate ?/10 and say what needs to be improved. Thanks!



http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/5615/habboedit1final4bb.jpg

Like the cigar? lol

[Biseinen]

Umm, 5/10.

It has that 'new artist' look, keep at it. Try to go into more detail with the clothing. It also looks like you've just re-coloured the trousers that Habbo already has. Alos, just cut down the middle to make a 'shirt'.

Also, lime green. Eww. xP

[.ChromeX.]

Ok then.... the lime green wasn't my choice lol. It was my friends fav color...
but anyways thanks for advice

[ItsDave]

There needs to be alot more work used on this piece...

The smoke from the cigar needs to gradually change to red as to fade away. Alterations never look good with MS Paint default colours, everything needs to be shaded aswell. 4/10