Beach

[Haote]

The Beach
The water shimered as the sun gleamed upon it
I stuck a toe in to be sure
I slowly walked into the water
The salty watered ever so more
Running out for a drink every few seconds
Staring at fish
Watching people throw frisbees
Glancing at the people who are tanning
I leaned into the water taking my last breathe
I leaned back far enough
Enough to let me breathe
The end
(Was this a mermaid or not....dun dun dunnn)

[Heinous]

I didn't like it, sorry.

[Haote]

I dont know much about it.
My friend wrote it for her essay and i called her and told her about the website. She said she doesnt want to but you can post my poem.

[Heinous]

Well that doesn't change my opinion on it..

[Haote]

I know. Im just saying...

[louder]

Not too bad, well done.