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Haote
26-05-2006, 03:14 AM
Talk to her
She stands alone
Her brown hair and freckled face
She stood in the wind waiting for a friend
_______________
YOU FINISH IT!

louder
30-05-2006, 12:19 AM
Yet another good poem, well done, keep up the good work.

Emicat.
16-06-2006, 04:49 PM
Talk to her
She stands alone
Her brown hair and freckled face
She stood in the wind waiting for a friend
_______________
YOU FINISH IT!

Sounds like me.

What? Finish it? ok.

Talk to her
She stands alone
Her brown hair and freckled face
She stood in the wind waiting for a friend

Shes the one who understands,
Who stands alone hand in hand,
Looking over birds and trees,
To see inside to set herself free.

Grimmauld
18-06-2006, 07:07 PM
Sounds like me.

What? Finish it? ok.

Talk to her
She stands alone
Her brown hair and freckled face
She stood in the wind waiting for a friend

Shes the one who understands,
Who stands alone hand in hand,
Looking over birds and trees,
To see inside to set herself free.
Ooo, that's a very good add-on, I like it!

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